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Question by PaintedBird Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 96]
Summary:

Spock's new captain, James Kirk, is affecting his Vulcan First Officer in ways that Spock finds disturbing.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Pre-Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Erotica
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 28071 Read Count: 30236
[Report This] Published: 03/30/2013 Updated: 05/08/2013
Reviewer: Cyberrat Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/30/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh god, this sounds so great! The idea has SO many possibilities! Now I'm envious that I hadn't thought of it before x.x please continue soon :D spock's descent into pleasure x)



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked the story, L.  As I indicated, it was  intended as a oneshot but will be developed further as requested.  :)  Thanks for commenting.

Reviewer: Cyberrat Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/03/2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

*giddy beyond belief* I love this story! I love the confused, inexperienced Spock <3 he and Kirk are both so cu-u-ute! *swoons right away* pleeaaase more? me love you long time?



Author's Response:

I am glad you liked the story, L.  More to come as you so prettily requested.  After all, it's supposed to rain for the next two days and I need to stay busy.  Thanks for your comments.  You cracked me up!

Reviewer: Cyberrat Signed
Date: 04/05/2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Aawww! How they're dancing around each other! They're so precious! Poor spock... The guy really needs someone to point him in the right direction. stubborn vulcan! *purrs nevertheless, because they are so cuuuuute* 



Author's Response:

I think it's pretty well established that Spock is stubborn and clings to his traditions, even when it is in his best interest to let them go.  But he left his people when he was so young I tend to think that his concept of being a Vulcan got stuck at the point where he left home and he's been on his own since then in interpreting events as he matures.  Glad you're enjoying the read.  Thanks for your comments, L.

Reviewer: Cyberrat Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/07/2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

loved it again... grrr Spock, you are a cock-tease xD you don't do it intentionally, but.... aarrrggghhhhhhhh *pulls on hair* ...well! let's see how long the Captain will be able to resist before he just throws him against the next wall and kisses him senseless ^.^ ... xD moar pleaasseeee? *paws surreptitiously at the 'Pre-Slash' emblem and hopes it hopps over to 'Slash'* xD I'm hopeless... I know



Author's Response:

You've been tormenting me with Phoenix so I'll torment you a little bit with Question, OK?  I'm glad you are enjoying it, L, if you want to call it that, and there is more to come.  Thanks for your comments.  I always enjoy them.

Reviewer: Cyberrat Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/09/2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

hnngngg Hurt/comfort *wiggle* love it :D ... and they kissed!... and then everything fell apart *sigh* that's no way to treat your rescuer, Spock! confused little Vulcan, that you are : /

but on a more serious note: I really enjoyed the beginning with its drama and the way you described his rattled psyche. it was very well done and I'm curious, if there really is something wrong with him now *rubs chin* I think he could use more Captain-cuddles *beams* xD...

can't wait for the next part!



Author's Response:

Be patient, L!  All will be revealed in the end.  I hope it will be worth waiting for.  Thanks for your comments.

Reviewer: Cyberrat Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/10/2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I loved this chapter :D you depicted Spock's uncertainty really well and I like how compassionate Kirk is. I don't know as of yet if the ending is a new start of something or if Spock was simply too burned out (no pun intended) to shove a helping hand away... there will probably be a few more hurdles to take >.o hmmm! can't wait till the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review, L.  More to come soon.

Reviewer: Cyberrat Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/13/2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

loved the beginning... the picture of them lying in bed pressed tightly together in a spooning position has itself ingrained in my head I think^^ it's just so... loving and innocent and warm *sigh*

and... YAAAAAYYY for courting! Jim introducing Spock to everything... *purr*



Author's Response:

I'm glad you approve, L.  After all, you're being tough on the boys right now and I'm being kind and gentle...sort of.  More soon.  Thanks for reading and your comments.

Reviewer: Cyberrat Signed
Date: 04/15/2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Oh Jim... That was a bit much x) the beginning had me really giggling :D and the end was so... So awwwwww! Really cute ^.^



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed this chapter, L.  Felt like the story needed a little dose of lightness, and Jim was so willing to cooperate.  Thanks for reading and commenting.  More to come soon.

Reviewer: Cyberrat Signed
Date: 04/17/2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

It's so sweet hiw they're dancing around each other :D and I'm curious as to what Kirk has planned



Author's Response:

L, how to you have time to read this and write all your good fiction?  Remarkable.  Glad you're liking the story.  More to come soon.  Thanks for reading and your comments.

Reviewer: Cyberrat Signed
Date: 04/19/2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I love it, how fast you are writing!!! X) the two on the beach was adorable again :D I'd like to be at one myself, now. It's great to see how they shift and accomodate in order to find a middle path :) and the ending was sweet *purr*



Author's Response:

Hey, I'm getting this out, L, but you are on fire!  I'm not much of a beach person myself.  More a mountain stream kinda gal, but this did seem nice, didn't it?  Thanks for reading and comments.

Reviewer: Cyberrat Signed
Date: 04/20/2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Hnnnghhh... Perfect <3 spock is so indearingly innocent x) and the picture of him standing under the shower and clasping that rail is ingrained into my brain now. Soooooo sexy! Jim must be such a happy camper, to have this perfect playground laid out before him :)



Author's Response:

We love our sexy, innocent Spock, don't we?  Thanks for reading and commenting.  More to come soon although I don't think I can keep up with your output.  LOL.

Reviewer: Cyberrat Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/24/2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

oh god, what has he planned?! that's so wicked! *positively vibrates and wiggles about* need to read more... hnnnngghhh x.x



Author's Response:

Jim is nothing if not inventive, right?  More soon.

Reviewer: Cyberrat Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/27/2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I start feeling like a broken record by now, but... inexperienced!Spock is soooo cute <3 and Jim must slowly but surely have a severe case of blue balls LOL the poor guy... watching his Vulcan the whole time and not coming himself



Author's Response:

I'm glad that you're enjoying the story, L, and like my take on Spock.  But remember that Spock is considerate, too, even if inexperienced.  More to come soon.

Reviewer: Cyberrat Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/01/2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

*lies on the floor, salivating* hnngghhh <3 perfection



Author's Response:

So if you're lying on the floor, I take it you like it, right?

Reviewer: Cyberrat Signed
Date: 05/08/2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

just so cute^^ the whole story :) you did a great job *hug*



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and for so frequently making comments.

Absolution by Cally Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 38]
Summary:

Everything was falling into place for Kirk and Spock. THey have careers, friends, family and are to be bonded. However, their fantasy life is threatened when the night before their bonding, Spock his hurt in a decidedly cruel and unusual way.


Categories: Works in Progress
Characters: Original Character(s)
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: MPREG
Trope (OPTIONAL): Hurt Spock
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: Non-consensual sex
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 13810 Read Count: 18280
[Report This] Published: 03/30/2013 Updated: 07/20/2013
Reviewer: Cyberrat Signed
Date: 05/02/2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I'm so curious as to what will happen when Spock wakes up >.o Skolar really is a sick, little bastard :O

What It's Usually Like by T nash-veh Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

So, Jim makes a holoSpock, and tells it to strip.  Yep, complely unredeemable.  Um, one other thing, this is a prequel to "It's Not Usually Like This".  I'm also posting a new chapter to that one.

I think perhaps these stories work in either TOS or Abrams Universe - tell me if you disagree.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Pre-Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Character Study, Drabble, Erotica
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe, Abrams Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 782 Read Count: 1509
[Report This] Published: 04/02/2013 Updated: 04/02/2013
Reviewer: Cyberrat Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/02/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

perfect - just perfect. love that voyeuristic touch and the 'forbidden' - atmosphere it has.. ^^ great!



Author's Response:

Thank you for commenting!  I'm so glad the 'forbidden' feeling came thru, and that you enjoyed it.  

Hur-hur-hur by Fugitive, Pamdizzle Rated: ADULT (NC-17) Round robin starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 21]
Summary:

Reponse to Lari's challenge.....  I hope this is a good enough start.   If you want more, perhaps someone with more of a penchant for porn (hint, hint, hint) might like to continue with the hotness that surely will be the result of Kirk's epiphany at the end of chapter 1?

 


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Erotica, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Challenges: Those Who Write on Bathroom Walls...
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3419 Read Count: 5212
[Report This] Published: 04/05/2013 Updated: 04/07/2013
Reviewer: Cyberrat Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/06/2013 Title: Chapter 2: A Bit of a Set Up...by Pamdizzle

you guys... you... GUUUUUYSSSS... that is awesome! I really racked my brain thinking of a scenario where that phrase could ever come up and here you go and... BAM! perfect! and hot-t-t-t-t-t...

Sam made a perfect set-up and I had to laugh so much at his pouting xD and the description of the tonal qualities in Jim's voice that he simply could not identify was genius.

And Pam started an awesomely porny chapter... luv the rimming... always so hot <3 and I had the picture of the scene perfectly in my head... Jim holding his genitalia, while leaning at the wall and presenting Spock his curvy ass... mrrrrwwwww *wiggle* but it ended almost at the best part! oh noeeez x.x

Reviewer: Cyberrat Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/07/2013 Title: Chapter 3: The Inevitable Conclusion of a Well Crafted Plan

aaahhhhhhh.... yes XD the ending was hillarious *wipes tears from eyes* and the thing before that... you know... where they did something... can't quite remember right now... think it was okay. yeah... a 4 out of 10.. hm hm... yeah... *breaks resolve* it was effing amaaziiiiinnngggg ~~~~ hnnghghghgggg *falls down with a nosebleed*



Author's Response:

There's going to be a pic uploaded soon. :) LOL. I'm glad you liked it. <3 You make my wee little heart trill. :)

The Heart That Used to Dance by Pamdizzle Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary:

The Poem War continues. This one is from Jim's perspective, alone in his cabin after those first tense moments on the bridge in TMP. This is how I think it would probably feel for him, after seeing the hope in his eyes bloom and then die in an instant in the face of Spock's indifference.

Please give it a shot and let me know what you think. :)

 


Categories: Poetry
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Angst, Established Relationship, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): Hurt Kirk, Kolinahr
Universe: None
Warnings: None
Series: Poems and Filks, Poem War
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 189 Read Count: 620
[Report This] Published: 04/06/2013 Updated: 04/06/2013
Reviewer: Cyberrat Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/06/2013 Title: Chapter 1: That's Gotta Suck...lol

the poem battle :P nice one^^ was it supposed to rhyme? some of them were a little wonky. But all in all I really liked it - it summed their relationship up pretty neatly....^^



Author's Response:

It sort of rhymes. Not in the way of perfect iambic pentameter but if you read with the pauses indicated by the commas, it SHOULD, for the most part at least read with a rythm and slight rhyme.

But thank you for the reivew and the stars. :) I hope you are enjoying our poem war. lol.