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A Little Tutoring Never Hurts by Pamdizzle Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 29]
Summary:

This didn't turn out nearly as filthy as I had planned...Granted, it's one big K/S/K/S fourway...basically, TOS Kirk and Spock end up on AOS Kirk and Spock's ship. Around that time, one thing leads to another and Jim and Spock of AOS decide they want to have an intimate relationship, only...Spock is having some control issues and they decide they could really use some tutoring in the sex department. Shameless smut, the plot basically only exists here in the summary, lol. I mean it, don't open this if you're looking for an actual story. There's like two paragraphs of plot and the rest is just one giant fourway. LOL


Perhaps you guys can read my filthy smut pages and then fill my mind with dirty words of encouragement afterward? I really appreciate it, lol.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Pre-Slash, Kirk/Spock Slash, Polyamorous
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Erotica, Established Relationship, First Time
Trope (OPTIONAL): Bottom Kirk, Bottom Spock
Universe: Abrams Universe, Crossover, ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: Kink
Series: Challenge Fics, Social Media Made Me Do It
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3062 Read Count: 9927
[Report This] Published: 01/28/2013 Updated: 01/28/2013
Reviewer: Cyberrat Signed
Date: 01/28/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ok, before you laugh your ass off... I didn't want to write 'which Kirk or Spock was Doping whom' but DOING whom... I don't think they'll have to take recreational drugs xD... Also I saw the outline and... What exactly does 'prehensile' cocks mean? XD never heard that before. Educate me!

 

also: Second Review just because you deserve it for this cute and hot story



Author's Response:

LOL! I got your meaning. It's so very hard to find a good synonym for a person, you know? LOL. I'll go back through later and try to fix the clarity, fix any errors, as I often do. Thank you for reviewing, twice. I very much appreciate it. lol.

 

As for prehensile, you may google it, because you really need the visual aid to fully understand it's awesomeness in terms of application to humaniod penis. lol. If you want to see it used in a fic, go to my profile and read: Prenhensile: An Alien Love Story. LOL. *shameless self-promotion*

What We Hide by Dahliaxat Rated: All Audiences starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary:

What we hide from the other...


Categories: Poetry
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk-Spock Friendship, Kirk/Spock Pre-Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Angst, Character Study
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 90 Read Count: 2823
[Report This] Published: 02/01/2013 Updated: 02/01/2013
Reviewer: Cyberrat Signed
Date: 02/01/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

beautiful, melancholy piece and an exceptionally handsome picture to go with it. One could read the poem positively or negatively regarding the outcome - at least in my opinion... I decide to go with the positive 'screw you all, we are secretly together' attitude :D

Watched by Bedwench, WightSpirit Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 26]
Summary:

Spock is a curious being, but perhaps curiosity will be his downfall. This tale is now complete, I hope it will please and amuse.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Character Study, First Time, Humor
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12962 Read Count: 9620
[Report This] Published: 02/03/2013 Updated: 07/13/2013
Reviewer: Cyberrat Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/04/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 A very strange evening

awww... Spock is so cute, when he's curious x3 and I love virgin Spocks :D you just have to write a sequel where Kirk teaches his good First Officer all the splendid things one can do with another ^.^

you rock!



Author's Response:

I did!

The one where Spock takes the lead by Avalon Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 7]
Summary:

Spock figures out how to get through to his Captain after a rough away mission.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Erotica
Trope (OPTIONAL): Bottom Spock, Hurt Kirk
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: Kink
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2059 Read Count: 3489
[Report This] Published: 02/06/2013 Updated: 02/06/2013
Reviewer: Cyberrat Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/03/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Complete Story

really hot and to the point... enjoyed that very much^^ thank you!

Breath of Love by Dahliaxat Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 7]
Summary:

To touch..To hold...


Categories: Poetry
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Angst, Erotica, Established Relationship, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 101 Read Count: 1047
[Report This] Published: 02/12/2013 Updated: 02/12/2013
Reviewer: Cyberrat Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/12/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

mroooow... that is soooo cute! and hot... *.* love the way Kirk guides his Vulcan in the new territory...



Author's Response:

Thanks so much my friend. I have to read your new chapter..So many things to read. 

The Bones Ultimatum by Pamdizzle Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 11]
Summary:

The third (and final?) installment to my Romancing the Bones Series. It's probably a good idea to read the first two first, but I don't think it's completely necessary, unless you *like* hot sex. Also, I used this to try and answer two of Soldier Girl's challenges at once, both of which are linked below.

Spock is getting ready to leave for New Vulcan in order to attend its version of Gol. The reason? Even though Bones has been he and Jim's lover for a year now, Spock can still sense the doctor's hesitancy regarding melds. Unfortunately, however, the real trouble is that he and Jim's nascent link has begun expanding toward Leonard, causing Spock to enter into Pon Farr.

Bones overhears an argument between his two lovers, has a decision to make, and does so with GUSTO. Contains humor, slight angst and a descent amount of naughty bits. I do hope you enjoy. :)


Categories: Fiction
Characters: McCoy
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash, Polyamorous
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Angst, Erotica, Established Relationship, Humor, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): Bottom Spock, Hurt Spock, Pon Farr
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: None
Challenges: Topping from the Bottom, Thief In The Night
Series: Romancing the Bones
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5140 Read Count: 3635
[Report This] Published: 02/12/2013 Updated: 02/12/2013
Reviewer: Cyberrat Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/12/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

*stumbles in and blinks owlishly at you* what is... I... I can't remember... I was just looking at the update page and there was... ooh my god *.*... it was beautiful!

It had everything... little bit o' angst, little bit o' fun and a huuuuge load of hot, smexy sex between the three most gorgeous men alive. hell yeah! I can't even... aarrggh! it was soooo hot *swoon* the three are just precious x3


and you DO realise, that you'll have to write more, when you insist on making elusive promises of Jim fucking Bones in the Captain's chair? Excuse me, Miss Dizzle, but it would be plain torture if you just intend to hang this juicy piece of imagery in front of our faces and do not act upon it...!

Did I already say, that I love your Bones? ... huh... well I love your bones. And I love your Bones. You see, what I did there? eheheheh xD


you gooooo!



Author's Response:

Lol. Thanks! What I meant by Captain's chair, was the one in the shuttle, LOL, not the Enterprise. Though, I've read that before between K/S and it was HOT. A threesome and a chair...interesting indeed. We shall have to see...


I'm glad you liked the new entry! Thanks for taking time to write me such a nice review. :) Bones loves you too.

Happy Valentine's Day, Spock! by PaintedBird Rated: All Audiences starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

Jim does not understand Spock's reluctance to observe Valentine's Day.


Categories: Ficlets
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Fluff
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 441 Read Count: 4948
[Report This] Published: 02/14/2013 Updated: 02/14/2013
Reviewer: Cyberrat Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/14/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

that's cute x3 hihi... Spock is such a dummie sometimes! *cuddles him* ... but the rating is a bit harsh with nc-17, don't you think? :)



Author's Response:

Thanks for bringing the rating to my attention.  It has now been changed to "all audiences".  My constant companion was acting up this morning and distracting me with her barking.  Happens, you know.  Thanks for the review.

Happy F****** Valentine's Day by CMM Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 26]
Summary:

This is shameless PWP, no redeeming value of any kind.

You're welcome.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: McCoy
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Erotica, First Time, Humor, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): Bottom Kirk
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2985 Read Count: 8656
[Report This] Published: 02/15/2013 Updated: 02/15/2013
Reviewer: Cyberrat Signed
Date: 02/16/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

hey!

So I made my way over from my cuddly warm bed, in order to review this little gem xD

It is soooo freakingly hot! I could never EVER write porn as good as you *whines* just keep going, you rock :D

Summer Heat by Rae Trail Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

Jim Kirk prostitutes himself to earn a living while attending StarFleet Academy. One day, he meets a Vulcan...

Warning: This is AU with a darker Spock. D/S with alien/telepathic coercion resulting in non-con elements.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Erotica, First Time
Trope (OPTIONAL): Bottom Kirk
Universe: AU Alternate Universe, ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: Dominance/submission
Series: Heat
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3138 Read Count: 7052
[Report This] Published: 02/16/2013 Updated: 02/16/2013
Reviewer: Cyberrat Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/16/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I already reviewed the last story of the trilogy, but I thought it'd be nice to leave a little encouragement in the other two as well :) In this part you nicely brought out the ambiguity between Kirk enjoying what Spock was doing and him being totally overwhelmed with everything to the point where he's nearly breaking down.

Dark Spock is sexy as hell... but also very frightening in his casually manipulating way... very intense!



Author's Response:

I love Dark Spock - he has so much power, but he never seems to abuse it. But then, of course... how would we know if he did?

thanks

Rae

Autumn Heat by Rae Trail Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary:

Kirk, years after his career as a hustler, meets his new first officer for the second time.

A sequel to Summer Heat, even though I didn’t plan one.

Warning: This is AU with a darker Spock. D/S with alien/telepathic coercion resulting in non-con elements.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: None
Trope (OPTIONAL): Bottom Kirk
Universe: AU Alternate Universe, ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: Dominance/submission
Series: Heat
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1886 Read Count: 6974
[Report This] Published: 02/16/2013 Updated: 02/16/2013
Reviewer: Cyberrat Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/16/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

In this part you explained wonderfully again how manipulating Spock is... And the way Jim does not know that he is manipulated and is so pathetically happy to be with Spock is almost oppresive... very well done!



Author's Response:

Yeah, he's a really scary guy... I just want to shake Kirk.

Rae

Turning Up The Heat by Rae Trail Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary:

Two years into the voyage, Kirk is eager to please his very demanding first officer.

A sequel to Summer Heat and Autumn Heat

Warning: This is AU with a darker Spock. D/S with alien/telepathic coercion resulting in non-con elements and implied violent sex. Also, extreme misuse of one of the sexiest poems ever written, as my title-piece. Highly recommended reading: John Donne.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: McCoy, Scott
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Established Relationship
Trope (OPTIONAL): Bottom Kirk
Universe: AU Alternate Universe, ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: Dominance/submission
Series: Heat
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2882 Read Count: 6433
[Report This] Published: 02/16/2013 Updated: 02/16/2013
Reviewer: Cyberrat Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/16/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I read the whole trilogy now. It was really superb!... totally bittersweet. Dark Spock has no qualms about manipulating Jim's mind, but he treats him well and they seem to genuinely like (I don't know if it is 'love' yet) each other, so the non-consensual part seems pretty minor... strange!



Author's Response:

Spock doesn't want to 'break' his best toy... nor will he ever admit he has real feelings for him. Or so I understand, I just wrote what came to me, LOL!

Rae

The Rules of Vulcan Engagement by Pamdizzle Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 25]
Summary:

This is in answer to Hypatia Kosh's challenge which is linked below.

Jim is happily bonded to Spock, but there's jut one thing standing in the way of their seamless happily ever after: Sarek.

As the highest paid diplomat in the Federation...the Vulcan Ambassador has no shortage of funds...so why is he charging expensive dinners, clothing, and even transit tickets to his own son's wedding to Jim and Spock's personal account?

Contains humor, K/S goodness and fluff and a fair amount of precious metal and gems...

I have placed this under both TOS and Nu, because no universe is alluded to inthe story and any details that would indicate a specific universe were purposefully avoided, just because I like a challenge. lol. Let me know if I pulled it off!


Categories: Fiction
Characters: Sarek
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Established Relationship, Humor
Trope (OPTIONAL): Bottom Spock
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe, Abrams Universe
Warnings: None
Challenges: My Father-in-Law Is A Cheap Bastard
Series: Challenge Fics
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2016 Read Count: 3953
[Report This] Published: 02/19/2013 Updated: 02/19/2013
Reviewer: Cyberrat Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/19/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh god... OH GOD! It's 6 AM over here and I totally had to bite my hand during the last part... it was hilarious XD Kirk is such a sneaky bastard... *wipes tears out of eyes*

I looooove Sarek so very much, but the father-son-conflict just brings so many good fictions with it, I have to admit... x3

annnnd.... the sex was hot *whispers quickly and runs away giggling*



Author's Response:

Lol. Glad you got a giggle. Thanks for the rating, mon ami! I love any excuse to play with the father/son dynamic and challenge seemed to breed just the kind of light-hearted fun I was feeling at the time. :)

Left In The Dark by spock2U Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 52]
Summary:

It is one year after the end of their 5 year mission and there is something strange going in the Spock/Kirk household...

IMPORTANT:
Assume NOTHING! And Hang on to your seats. It's going to be one hell of a ride! 

A/N .. if you quit reading at the end of Ch 1 because you assume from what appears to be going on this is 'an infidelity story' ... you're really not listening when I say, "Assume NOTHING". Seriously. If you assume 'all is as it appears to be' then you're making a big mistake....  ;)

A/N DEC 28 2015: Hmm, my Rollercoaster WhoDunnit remains derailed and unattended. I'll make attending to it a New Years Resolution. xoxo


Categories: Works in Progress
Characters: Original Character(s)
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Angst, Character Study, Erotica, Established Relationship, First Time, Fluff, Humor, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Series: FICTION
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 12549 Read Count: 8933
[Report This] Published: 02/21/2013 Updated: 04/03/2013
Reviewer: Cyberrat Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/26/2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

*purrs and feels warm all over* x3 I really love your depiction of their bond. It sounds very benign and warm and wonderful :D



Author's Response:

and this is only the initial stages of their bond. oh boy :)

Reviewer: Cyberrat Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/25/2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

*squeee* awwww this was so cuuuuute x3 the wait was definitely worth it :D but now I fear all the more how all of that could've fallen apart o.O grrr I want to know the secret



Author's Response:

we'll get there eventually. there's a heck of a lot more story to get through first though :)

ch's 8/9 should follow quite quickly though! xoxo

Reviewer: Cyberrat Signed
Date: 02/26/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

At last! i could read it. Very myterious! At first I thought Kirk had slept with her ( after I thought Spock was cross-dressing, I'll admit it xD) and now I'm positively bewildered as to what is going on. And your writing style is superb! Have to read the other chapter after my classes end. i'm hooked!



Author's Response:

wow, i'm seriously flattered. thank you. this feels like my first real foray into writing. everything prior to this - with one possible exception which i may return to at some point - was just 'fiddling with embryos' and figuring out how 'creation' worked. i think this baby may well go 'full term'. whether it will be 'pretty' has yet to be determined though. it may be very 'plain' indeed. i am just here trying to learn how to write. 'tis like shitting thistles ;)

Reviewer: Cyberrat Signed
Date: 02/26/2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2.

After this chapter I'm doubly curious what 'went wrong' between them : / I'm alteady crossing my fingers for a happy ending. I'm such a sap. You have nailed their personalities exceptionally well. Until next time!!



Author's Response:

I just did a very very small rewrite - tidied up a few things. Added a couple of 'ass' references to Ch 2 and added a bit here and there and also retracting the last few lines to use as the launch point for Ch 3. I think this might turn out to be quite a long story - it's coming together in my head nicely. Kinda. I hope. LOL. Bet it all falls apart now i've muttered those fateful words ;)

Reviewer: Cyberrat Signed
Date: 02/27/2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3.

It really IS a bit strange... the whole get-up of the rooms. It's like they are a couple but no one has told Spock the news XD I still have NOOOO clue, what is going on. very mysterious indeed. I'm looking forward to the next chapter :)



Author's Response:

teeheehee - but who is it who has news for whom? ;)

next chap spock might show his hand .. hehehe 

Reviewer: Cyberrat Signed
Date: 03/05/2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

nooo I'm on a diet and you list the most delicious foods possible Q.Q that's not fair! and you managed to have a chapter that only heightened the suspense >.< no questions what-so-ever have been answered *pout* please more???



Author's Response:

ch 5 should be close in its heels. unless my muse prevaricates some more, lol.. but there's quite a lot about to happen...!

Reviewer: Cyberrat Signed
Date: 03/06/2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5.

this is such an interesting take of their relationship!... Kirk having declared his love time and time again and Spock not accepting him. Very interesting! and the part after that was just plain cute... Spock, you sly bastard ;)



Author's Response:

never play chess with mr spock ;)

Reviewer: Cyberrat Signed
Date: 03/07/2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6.

yaaay :D could quickly read it before I'm off to work... wohoooo ^.^ 'no towel, no talk' ... hahaha XD

loved the beginning of the chapter... very hot ... and the picture of one of the boys kneeling and looking up with the cock of the other in his mouth is always very enticing, indeed... although I had to giggle while imagining Spock talking with it still in his mouth x3 so cute!

I wonder what this talk is going to be about.... but I have the feeling that it's going to be distinctly awkward with both of them only in towels o.O



Author's Response:

oh, it's going to be FUN  ;)