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After the Fire by CMM Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 216]
Summary:

NOW DONE!

 

This is in response to Martiangirl's a Betrayal of Trust challenge. As noted elsewhere, at readers' request, I am no longer including the actual challenge in the summary.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: Amanda, Chapel, Chekov, Lori Ciani, McCoy, Original Character(s), Sarek, Scott, Sulu, Uhura
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Angst, Character Study, Established Relationship, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Challenges: A Betrayal of Trust
Series: Answered Challenges
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 56553 Read Count: 84499
[Report This] Published: 07/18/2012 Updated: 01/29/2013
Reviewer: Cyberrat Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/14/2013 Title: Chapter 5: A Painful Confrontation or Two

I have to make a little stop here and tell you how much in love I am with Amanda and Sarek. They are absolutely terrific! You depict the drama between spock and kirk very well. I can understand both of them, but my heart bleeds especially for spock. the scene where his father embraced him from behind was... wow. I could only begin to imagine what must have been going on in the two vulcans. great work!



Author's Response:

TYVM

Porn in a Closet by Pamdizzle Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 30]
Summary:

It's Captain Kirk's birthday and as a gift to himself, he's decided to spend the day in his cabin indulging in a secret fetish. Just when he's starting to feel comfortable slipping into his favorite fantasy, he is intruded upon by none other than his shocked First Officer. What happens next? --Porny goodness in a closet, of course.

I have no excuse for this really, other than that I really can't resist a challenge...

So, this is in response to Derk's Operation Copulate! Challenge and it really is pretty much what the title says. It's linked below if you really want to know. Unfortunately, I didn't find enough personal time to get the super bonus and I'm not really into wigs, but, hey...give a girl a break...

Also...there is some mild...crack...lol.

 


Categories: Fiction
Characters: McCoy
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk-Spock Friendship, Kirk/Spock Pre-Slash, Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Erotica, First Time, Humor
Trope (OPTIONAL): Bottom Kirk
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: Bondage, Kink
Challenges: Operation: Copulate!
Series: Challenge Fics
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4419 Read Count: 8334
[Report This] Published: 08/03/2012 Updated: 08/03/2012
Reviewer: Cyberrat Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/25/2013 Title: Chapter 1: It's My Birthday, and I'll Wear Drag if I Want To

I don't know. You somehow always get me to read fics that aren't my cup of tea XD...

crossdressing? hmmmm I dunno. Pamdizzle sex scene? HELL YEAH!

So there I am. torn between these two things... and finally I give in : / my flesh is weak, my mind even weaker. I know, I know... And it was so glorious *.* ... Just love Jim dirty talking... and it's always so hot and full of feeling. Don't know how you can put so much tenderness into a PWP full of rampant rutting XD...

but here you go. You're welcome.



Author's Response:

LOL! I'm so sorry. I don't mean to rope you into the weird that are *some* of my fics, but honestly, I never thought I would write anything like this, but I too am weak and when someone asks it of me...I cave! But hey, it's always fun to write something...unplanned...and I'm happy you had just as much fun reading something you never thought you'd stoop to--BAHAHHAAHHAHA!


Who am I kidding...I'm not sorry at all---YOU'RE WELCOME!! LOLOLOL

Summary:

Written in response to a prompt for the KS Advent that asked for Sarek and Spock to serve their bondmates, Bones and Jim, breakfast in bed with a side dish of sex. It's titled somewhat differently on Livejournal, but uh...oh well.


I have split it into two chapters here. Enjoy. :D

 

Thank you to IvyCross and Wingstar for the beta. Any remaining error are my own.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: McCoy, Sarek
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Erotica, Established Relationship, Fluff, Humor, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): Bottom Spock
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: None
Series: Challenge Fics
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5928 Read Count: 9930
[Report This] Published: 12/08/2012 Updated: 12/08/2012
Reviewer: Cyberrat Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/14/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Part One: Ambassador and Physician

I love these two together <3 they are incredibly hot :D and I love your depiction of a vulnerable McCoy. He's such a cutie and I imagine him being really soft on the inside despite is hard demeanor.

And Sarek has also a very interesting backstory, what with a human, female bondmate that got murdered... I guess he had to hold up with a lot of prejudice from other Vulcans and defend Amanda a lot : / poor guy. They're great together.


Don't you have a longer story planned for spock/kirk and leonard/sarek...? That would be soooo awesooommmeeee. The four just beg for their great plot to be plundered... *and other things too... bdm ksch* XD



Author's Response:

*grits teeth at mention of longer story* Sort of. It's already kind of in play in my 'Intergalactic Fuck Olympics' series, BUT, it's more of a side thing. Basically, the series jumps around and we catch glimpses, there's some fun porn, some humor, etc, but as far as a multi-chaptered, straight up fic...nothing so far is in the works. It's not really one of my favorite pairings--I just write it for my friends. lol.  

But, I'm glad you liked this story, and I hope if you do read my series, you'll like those stories as well. I haven't ruled out the idea completely...there's actually a challenge I was looking at and thought about, but I haven't decided yet if I'm going to pursue. We'll see. lol Thank you for taking time to read and review!

Between Friends by Pamdizzle Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 83]
Summary:

For Dahliaxhat, who posted a lovely K/S poster on one of those *secret* facebook groups that stated, "Spork Rule #33: When Kirk and Spock do it, McCoy gets pregnant" and then said that she wanted someone to write it...

This will be short, very slightly cracky, and of course, contain explicit pornonious fucking...in parts. Please read, please review, please blame Denise.


Categories: Works in Progress
Characters: McCoy
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Pre-Slash, Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Erotica, First Time, Humor
Trope (OPTIONAL): Bottom Kirk, Bottom Spock
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Series: Challenge Fics, Social Media Made Me Do It
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 14727 Read Count: 12455
[Report This] Published: 01/09/2013 Updated: 04/28/2013
Reviewer: Cyberrat Signed
Date: 02/11/2013 Title: Chapter 2: Deepest Desires

you dirty, dirty woman. I luv ya, you know? x3 *purr*

Reviewer: Cyberrat Signed
Date: 02/11/2013 Title: Chapter 3: Life Form...You Tiny Little Life Form...Precious Little Life Form...*snap, clap, clap clap*

looove virgin Spock x3... it's a bummer that you can only deflower him once *lol*...



Author's Response:

God, ain't it? I wish he could be deflowered over and over and over and over....what was the question again?

Reviewer: Cyberrat Signed
Date: 02/11/2013 Title: Chapter 4: Getting Back to Where It Started

I petition the plea that you make a threesome out of it. *hopeful grin* just love your McCoy.. he's a cutie <3



Author's Response:

Hmm...Maybe. We'll see where it goes. You are NOT the first to suggest it, but I'm still sort of on the fence. I'm like Robert Frost at those diverged roads in the yellow wood, and I'm sorry that I cannot travel both...

Reviewer: Cyberrat Signed
Date: 02/11/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Indeniable Denial

I somehow danced around this story because it seemed very highly likely that it's going to be MPREG... and I just can't stand MPREG... but since there was nothing in the warnings and it is YOU who wrote this, I'll try nonetheless.^^

 

The boys are cute and hot as usual :D



Author's Response:

*teeth clench* Uh...well...First, let me just say that serious Mpreg isn't really...I'm not a huge fan myself. My slow approval for the genre came...slowly, lol. It has to be done a certain way in order for me to read it and enjoy it. That said, this IS Mpreg. I was pretty sure the summary covered that, if it's unclear I'm SO sorry!! But don't stop reading. It's not like a highly dramatic, angsty serious Mpreg. It's kind of...well...the ratio is 30% porn, 30% plot, 30% crack (or well, my version of it, so 30% humor, if you care to think of it that way). I'm not going all out and taking myself seriously or anything. It's just supposed to be a short, fun story based on this postcard, which denise has embedded in the reviews in like chapter 2 or 3... Jim and Spock are gonna be getting frisky and McCoy is going to be getting...well...yeah...bahahahahaha.

I do hope you'll stick around. I promise not to do anything wonky. Well, wonkier than an alien-induced Bones preggers, but it's going to be a wild ride of funny! So please don't jump off just yet. Give me a chance! lol

Reviewer: Cyberrat Signed
Date: 03/08/2013 Title: Chapter 5: Say what now?

Fluff, so much fluff! My eyes, they hurt!!! X.x xD oh god I'm nervous what the next chapters will bring :D I'll continue reading... Between my fingers x) gogogooo <3



Author's Response:

LOL. *wipes hands* Another pile of useless mush, "Hey Scotty--go grab a bucket!"

Reviewer: Cyberrat Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/28/2013 Title: Chapter 6: Still Not Sure

you're slow, bitch :O

'twas cute, the scene where Spock put his hand on McCoy's abdomen :) I'm curious as to how everything will play out



Author's Response:

Lol. I'm glad you liked! Yes, I shall be interested as well, lol. This one is so far off the rails at this point, I'm just like fine, bitch of a muse, whatever you want...

Always Touching by Basic Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 13]
Summary:

James Kirk takes a synthetic hormone meant to simulate Pon Farr, in the hopes of better understanding and being able to help his friend and First Officer. There is no way for his plan to go wrong.


Categories: Works in Progress
Characters: McCoy
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk-Spock Friendship, Kirk/Spock Pre-Slash, Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Action/Plot, Erotica, First Time, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): Bottom Kirk, Bottom Spock, Pon Farr
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: Bondage, Dominance/submission, Dubious consent, Explicit violence, Kink
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 10759 Read Count: 11714
[Report This] Published: 01/11/2013 Updated: 01/15/2013
Reviewer: Cyberrat Signed
Date: 01/12/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

huh... really interesting!... I love bottom/submissive spock <3 ... somehow you managed to make it non-con while still maintaining it consensual. I don't know, how you pulled that of XD what will McCoy say? huh! and how will spock and kirk react, when the emotions slowed down a little? I'm waiting for more :)

Bleeding Red by Raven Knight Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 22]
Summary:

When a new ensign in the laundry department of the USS Enterprise makes a mistake, the entire bridge crew finds themselves in oddly colored uniforms...and they do not like it.  Meanwhile, Doctor McCoy takes it upon himself to try to fix the situation. 

 

This came from that one shot in the trailer of Chekov in a shirt...that isn't gold.  There must be a reason for such a thing!


Categories: Fiction
Characters: Chekov, Chris Pike, McCoy, Sulu, Uhura
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Character Study, Fluff, Humor
Trope (OPTIONAL): Bottom Spock
Universe: AU Alternate Universe, Abrams Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5107 Read Count: 5704
[Report This] Published: 01/12/2013 Updated: 01/12/2013
Reviewer: Cyberrat Signed
Date: 01/12/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Bleeding Red

Oh god that was so cute XD I had to chuckle all the way through. Sweet lord that was good :)



Author's Response:

Thank you! Glad you enjoyed and were amused by it. :) ~ RK

Knot Your Average Affliction by Pamdizzle Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 32]
Summary:

This is for Carleen and in part, T'Lara, who requested (read: dared me to write) a story that involved Jim, a talking penis (it actually communicates with Jim telepathically) and a large amount of unrepentent porn.


Look, I'm not really going to try and explain it, lol. You're either brave enough to read it and into knotting Spock cocks and rimming or you're not! *dares you to read it* But I hope you'll give it a chance, I promise it's not that cracktacular, telepathic penis notwithstanding. LOL!

I didn't really specify a universe in the story...but they sound more AOS to me...meh.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Pre-Slash, Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Erotica, First Time, Humor
Trope (OPTIONAL): Bottom Kirk, Hurt Kirk
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: Kink
Series: Challenge Fics, Social Media Made Me Do It
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4694 Read Count: 6226
[Report This] Published: 01/22/2013 Updated: 01/22/2013
Reviewer: Cyberrat Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/22/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ok. I had to fight a little with myself, because I'm really not into crack-fics, but I trusted your judgement and I'm really happy now :D it wasn't as cracky as I feared and spock was just pure sexyness. You make him sooooooooooo hot! And I always enjoy to read Kirks perspective and his filthy mouth ^.^ you are awesome! keep the good work up!



Author's Response:

Yay, I'm so glad you didn't run for the hills screaming, hahaha, and also very pleased that you liked it despite your initial temtation to well...run for the hills screaming. :D

Lost Boy by PaintedBird Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 68]
Summary:

After Spock is taken prisoner by the Romulans, he and Kirk struggle to recover what they have lost and maintain their future.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Established Relationship
Trope (OPTIONAL): Hurt Spock
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: Explicit violence
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 36085 Read Count: 14326
[Report This] Published: 01/23/2013 Updated: 02/13/2013
Reviewer: Cyberrat Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/24/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is so interesting! You depict Spock's confusion pretty well by imbedding the memories of his emprisonment. The reader is in these moments left floating and propably feels exactly as Spock does.

Furthermore he is so cute in this innocent state of his... I want to hug him all the time :( . But I can relate to Kirk in his confusion over his bondmate too. It must be so hard for him! Hopefully they will find a way to make Spock 'work' so they don't get seperated. I don't see how they would work out if they were seperated again for a prolonged period of time.

I'm so curious how this will work out. Splendid work!



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review.  I enjoyed your story as well and hope you continue to like mine.  The seed for this story was a personal experience.  I was outside with my dog (who is little, not a monstrous big one) in jeans and a hoodie, and I suddenly got the image of Spock like that.  Carefree, no responsibilities, just out walking and enjoyng nature.  Everything else came from that image.  I hope you will continue to read and comment.

Reviewer: Cyberrat Signed
Date: 01/26/2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

This chapter is really interesting. There are many conflicting ideas in it. First the emotionless way the humans are treating Spock and the caring way the Vulcan healer is treating him. I never read this spin on the subject before. Normally the Vulcan healer is always this stoic, heartless individual that despises Spock because of his human heritage. This was an interesting spin!

Second the relationship between Spock and Kirk. It's so difficult for the two of them because of the time they simply do not have. My heart bleeds for Spock who will feel so alone again. How should he ever recover his memories if he is seperated from his bond mate and consequently doesn't feel comfortable enough to start un-blocking his barriers?

Hopefully the environment of other Vulcans will be able to help him :( . Kirk is really ambigous. On one hand I can understand that everything is very hard for him and he has to be strong for the both of them. On the other hand he seems sometimes detached from Spock and as if he blames him for blocking the memories. As if he's impatient with him...

One can feel, that not only Spock is his love but space is too. Normally the two complement each other perfectly but in this case this divided love is damagin...

On another note: Who were these two men following Spock and Kirk? What did they want? ... huh...

 

*whisper* I love this innocent Spock. He's so cute



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review.  You brought into focus some things in my story that i hadn't been aware of.  It's funny how the creative process works, isn't it? I have had some unpleasant dealings with agencies that have a perception of what people are that does not necessarily do them justice, and I think some of that has bled in here.  And I think there are some surprises in your future for Sarden, the Vulcan healer, too.  Kirk, too, does have some ambivalence, too, toward Spock.  I have seen this in families who are dealing with someone who is ill - wanting to help but sometimes being frustrated by behaviors or actions.  More on the mysterious strangers later.  And I'm glad you love this innocent Spock.  I thought of him like that, and the entire story sprung from that image.  Thanks for reading and your thoughtful reviews.

Reviewer: Cyberrat Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/29/2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

oh wow! that was mightily exciting!... as Spock first spoke of their walk that one day and Jim didn't get it I wanted to strangle my laptop. My first thought was 'the fucking followers, you dumbass! aarrghhh!!' But alas! He got it after some time at least XD

And holy hell! to think I liked Sarden! I'm cancelling my membership in his fan-club right now!

poor Jim.... he doesn't know what we know... that the story has at least three more chapters, so Spock can't be dead ò.ó! haha! poor baby : / but at least they're coming back to earth to investigate. Somehow I think the whole staff around Sarden isn't in orbit of earth anymore by that time : / and I have the sinking feeling they squirreled Spock away after that last conversation. He's probably cowering in some prison cell or something!

It's awfull!... I have to say at the beginning of the chapter I was afraid that Kirk was going to resign his captaincy in order to be with Spock... as much as I have to agree, that he didn't handle the situation well and got back into the saddle of the Enterprise way too soon; I can't imagine James T. Kirk without his starship. It's one of the saddest things to think that this man who was practically born to be in space and with his crew, is earthbound for one reason or another.

It's like cutting the wings of a butterfly. You just don't do these things :(

So...! can't wait for the twists and turns in future chapters. I just imagine the whole main crew of the Enterprise dressing like Rambo and going after Sarden and his people. *snickers*



Author's Response:

Cyberrat, please do not strangle your laptop.  I am a nonviolent person and would be sad if something was killed in the process of writing this fic.  Your enthusiasm for the story gave me a big chuckle and brightened the garret a lot.  Lots more plot twists and angst to come.  Thanks very much for your review.  I thoroughly enjoyed it.

Reviewer: Cyberrat Signed
Date: 02/04/2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

ooooh I positively squeed, when my phone rang and told me a new chapter has been posted :D

this is getting more mysterious by the minute! I would never have guessed such an intrigue against the federation...

poor spock he's probably totally distraught, now that he is back in custody... probably thinks he's back with the romulans or something. aw man...



Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter.  I'm kinda getting off on all this mystery and intrigue.  More posted soon so you will know what I know!

Reviewer: Cyberrat Signed
Date: 02/08/2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

oh god... so many ups and downs in this one!... you really can't trust ANYBODY. It's mind baffling.


Oh god, I so hope this will have a good ending... :( *nervous*



Author's Response:

:)  Don't panic.  I will post the last chapter next week, I promise.

Reviewer: Cyberrat Signed
Date: 02/13/2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

awww... that was a wonderful chapter. I had such a devastatingly long day that I really needed some fluff right now. And Kirk and Spock were so cute together! I liked the way you made it apparent, that Spock had his memories back... Because I was first like Kirk  and thought 'what the f***, what do you want?? is there another problem or what?'

I had to grin like an idiot when Spock finally revealed everything x3 Is there going to be more? because the story isn't marked as 'finished'. you did an awesome job, my dear.



Author's Response:

Thqnks for your review.  I am glad that my story could e some comfort to you today, and I am glad yo appreciated how I revealed Spock's secret.  Grinning like an idiot, huh?  I take that as a great compliment.  As for this story, I marked it as completed when I posted it, but for some reason it did not go through.  It is now, I hope, appropriately marked as completed.  But you never know.  I've gone back before when the spirit has moved me and have added more.   I am so glad you enjoyed the story.

Stardust by cowgirl dressage Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 11]
Summary:

Pamdizzle challenged me to write a Valentine's Day story with slow dancing and no music.  You are welcome, darlin'.

 

At the crew's Valentine's Day party, Jim realizes he is missing something important and Spock helps him find it.  This is angsty, romantic, a bit nasty and has a high degree of schmoop.

 

Please listen to this song first.  It is what Spock sings to Jim.  You pups out there might never have heard it.

 

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DjU6ZjrQulc

 

 


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3037 Read Count: 1436
[Report This] Published: 01/24/2013 Updated: 01/24/2013
Reviewer: Cyberrat Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/24/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

ha! I had to fight a little to hear the music, because youtube wouldn't let me listen to it... something about not available in my country -.- baaah humbug!


the song was sweet and so was this story. I never read a story were spock was singing and I totally fell in love with it. You made such a sweet, heartwarming piece of fiction! kudos. and I will leave you now thinking of a drunken spock licking chocolate from a dress... hmm yes... xD



Author's Response:

thank you for your kind review.  I will admit I stole some of this from my previous story, The Strange Horses Came.  Someday, i will write the back story on Spock embarassing himself with Ms Kavanaugh.  (there is a real story behind it)  thanks again!

A Little Tutoring Never Hurts by Pamdizzle Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 29]
Summary:

This didn't turn out nearly as filthy as I had planned...Granted, it's one big K/S/K/S fourway...basically, TOS Kirk and Spock end up on AOS Kirk and Spock's ship. Around that time, one thing leads to another and Jim and Spock of AOS decide they want to have an intimate relationship, only...Spock is having some control issues and they decide they could really use some tutoring in the sex department. Shameless smut, the plot basically only exists here in the summary, lol. I mean it, don't open this if you're looking for an actual story. There's like two paragraphs of plot and the rest is just one giant fourway. LOL


Perhaps you guys can read my filthy smut pages and then fill my mind with dirty words of encouragement afterward? I really appreciate it, lol.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Pre-Slash, Kirk/Spock Slash, Polyamorous
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Erotica, Established Relationship, First Time
Trope (OPTIONAL): Bottom Kirk, Bottom Spock
Universe: Abrams Universe, Crossover, ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: Kink
Series: Challenge Fics, Social Media Made Me Do It
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3062 Read Count: 9927
[Report This] Published: 01/28/2013 Updated: 01/28/2013
Reviewer: Cyberrat Signed
Date: 01/28/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was soooooo hot! Oh my god. You are a Goddes!!

a few Times i was a Little confused as to which spock or which Kirk was Doping which ( per whom... *bdm ksch*) but you always got it back on track.

as to thoughts for a mirror Story (funny i too have been playing with the thought to Write one), i'd say: mirror Kirk seems like a pretty feral being, especially next to the kind of submissive mirror Spock. What if there was a competition (sexuall or otherwise) and Kirk is both annoyed with spock's aloofness and rejection of participating, as well as intrigued, what that vulcan had to be like, if 'unleashed'? Maybe Spock Neefs a little encouragemnt to let go of his shyness...

sooo i spent ten minutes writing this Review and can only see half of it. I'm curious what the autocorrect of my phone made of it...

Hope your Day is better now! Keep your head held high!



Author's Response:

Lol. I'm glad you liked the story. I understand about malfunctioning technology. For instance, I've already replied to you on my phone...where is it? Who the hell knows, but sure as shit didn't post here, did it? LOL! At any rate, I'm definitely considering a mirror fic version of this of some kind...we will see.