Penname: T nash-veh [Contact] Real name: Teresa
Member Since: 05/29/2012
Membership status: Member
Bio:

The real me?  Not important.  What is important?  A great story, of course.  So many great stories have been posted here - I hope to provide a good one or two - but I'm still learning so please leave feedback so I can improve.


To all of you who have commented and offered your suggestions - and those who have betad for me - Thank You!  You cannot imagine how much pleasure you've added to my life.


*update: One of my non-slash non-fandom scifi stories is included in a non-fandom fiction anthology.  If you are interested in reading that, then please just search for 'Tales from the Perseus Arm' and the penname Kate Welty.  If you like scifi you will want to check out the other stories too - (you might recognize some of the other authors).


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Reviews by T nash-veh
Surrender by Killa Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 25]
Summary:

The Captain has been through a rough time, and needs someone else to take the reins for a while. This story contains dominance/submission in a consensual relationship, but the lines of consent are deliberately blurred. Originally posted in 1997.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: McCoy
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Angst, Erotica, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: Bondage, Caveat lector/Choose Not to Warn, Dominance/submission, Dubious consent, Non-consensual sex
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 20441 Read Count: 31996
[Report This] Published: 09/05/2005 Updated: 09/05/2005
Reviewer: T nash-veh Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/02/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Complete Story

Incredily well-done story.  I love the dialog, the effortless way you go back and forth between their points of view, the way you call just enough attention to events in episodes to give us that same boost of memory, but don't overdo it.  Wow.  What a wonderful read.  Thank you so much for sharing this story.



Author's Response:

I appreciate your comments so much. Thank you! Am very glad you enjoyed this. :)

Twenty Questions by T Jonesy Rated: Mature Content (Teen) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 17]
Summary:

Who says Vulcans can't master the subtle art of the tease? Originally posted in 1996.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk-Spock Friendship, Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Humor
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3155 Read Count: 5332
[Report This] Published: 09/06/2005 Updated: 09/06/2005
Reviewer: T nash-veh Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/27/2013 Title: Chapter 1: none

Very fun!  Enjoyed this very much.  But who was the woman?!!!! I want to know .... 

Restored by Tonati Rated: All Audiences starstarstarstar [Reviews - 1]
Summary:

The Enterprise crew is aging no longer and everything is back in track. Or isn't it? Spoilers: The Deadly years


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk-Spock Friendship
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Angst
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 912 Read Count: 4722
[Report This] Published: 09/13/2005 Updated: 09/13/2005
Reviewer: T nash-veh Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/04/2013 Title: Chapter 1: None

I don't know why this has no comments?!  Lovely story!  Yes, there are a few places where the wording may not be perfect, but nothing too distracting from the story.  I really liked the touch of the Captain caressing the rail, and his first officer noticing.

Blowing Smoke by Hypatia Kosh Rated: All Audiences starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary: Sometimes, Spock just needs his Jimmy to take care of him.
Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: None
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2062 Read Count: 8014
[Report This] Published: 12/23/2005 Updated: 12/23/2005
Reviewer: T nash-veh Signed
Date: 03/26/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Blowing Smoke

Awww - this is sweet.  Your Spock is all curmudgeonly.  And gotta ask - Whitman really write that line?  Thanks for posting this.

Summary: McCoy inadvertently discovers Kirk and Spock's relationship, from an unusual vantage point. Humorous, I hope!
Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: None
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8382 Read Count: 14245
[Report This] Published: 03/26/2008 Updated: 03/26/2008
Reviewer: T nash-veh Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/28/2013 Title: Chapter 1: None

This was lovely.  You do McCoy POV so well.  And I love how Jim and Spock sound just like themselves.  Well, that's a stupid-sounding comment, but you know what I mean.  I think this is one of the most realistic portrayals I may have read about how the two of them would have found themselves turning into lovers.  

Improbability by Jaylee Rated: Mature Content (Teen) starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 11]
Summary:

"Christ but the Vulcan needed to relax. It would also be nice if he stopped looking at Jim as if he were a puzzle needing to be solved. Jim felt he was pretty transparent..."


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: ST:XI Abrams Universe
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3212 Read Count: 7393
[Report This] Published: 07/04/2009 Updated: 07/04/2009
Reviewer: T nash-veh Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/29/2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Sigh of contentment.  Lovely.  Perfect.  Thank you.

Inevitability by Jaylee Rated: Mature Content (Teen) starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 10]
Summary:

"He would figure Jim Kirk out eventually - it simply required more observation and the accumulation of data."


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: ST:XI Abrams Universe
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3270 Read Count: 6115
[Report This] Published: 07/04/2009 Updated: 07/04/2009
Reviewer: T nash-veh Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/29/2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow - you put these two halves together so wonderfully.  It reads so effortlessly.  The analogy of Jim as an engine worked really well - I loved it.

Summary:

 

Summary: A certain very naughty cabin boy gets his just desserts, and StarFleet's finest tradition is upheld.

 


Categories: Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Erotica, Established Relationship, Humor
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: Bondage, Dominance/submission
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2786 Read Count: 9490
[Report This] Published: 09/02/2009 Updated: 09/02/2009
Reviewer: T nash-veh Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/18/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very nice, Master Greywolf. Lovely how you made it apparent throughout that discipline was quite eagerly sought and enjoyed by both.  Must ask, was the sea chanty of your own devising or did you find it somewhere?  Wonderful addition to the story.



Author's Response:

it's a traditional one, though whether from the likes of "the Goon Show" or from earlier, I'm not sure.  I know it's been used as a drinking song before.  Fun, nies?  *grin*  this one had me grinning as I wrote, lol...

Communication by Jenna Hilary Sinclair Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 33]
Summary:

It takes a war with the Tholians for Kirk and Spock to start talking truthfully with each other. 


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Action/Plot, First Time
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8662 Read Count: 22913
[Report This] Published: 10/31/2009 Updated: 10/31/2009
Reviewer: T nash-veh Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/17/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

K - so I read this about a year ago - but I was still lurking at that point and didn't post a review.  After I decided to jump in, so to speak, I remembered this story, but had no luck remembering name or author.  Finally decided to ask on FB for help finding it again.  So, first things first - I thank you from the bottom of my heart for writing and posting this.  It is perfect - PERFECT.  I can't possibly thank you enough, because this story is one of those that will stick with me and give me satisfaction and inspiration for years to come.  

Second, this actually transcends Star Trek and Spock and Kirk.  If slash were 'mainstream' - this would be a classic, okay?  Right up there with Romeo and Juliet / Westside Story.  It was beautifully, beautifully written.  From the way their communications progressed, to how they try to protect each other in the only ways that are available to them, the way that you show how in synch they are with each other, thinking in similar ways, and with the same goals, even when unable to really exchange plans with each other.  All of this - incredibly well done.  So well done that

third - if a person just reads it in one great gulp (and good god, how could you not?!) then it is only later if you think about it carefully, that you realize how fantastically well crafted, well thought out, and well implemented this is.  I am in awe of your accomplishment here.  Everything from the voices, the storyline, the pacing, the restraint (really, amazing how you kept it from being over-the-top emotional) ... To have Uhura deliver the ending ... beautiful.

So, again, thank you.  I know this is one I will read over and over and over.



Author's Response:

Dear T nash-vey,

I really want to sincerely thank you for taking the time to write what is a pretty comprehensive review of your reaction to my K/S piece, Communication.  It's always a thrill for me to hear from a reader, honestly, and it gives me such encouragement!  I think readers often forget that writing is such a lonely, lonely task, and for me "communication" with the reader is so important. 

I am often in tremendous awe of the amazingly talented writers we have in fandom, so to read that you think this story is well-crafted is a great compliment.  Thank you!  Writing Communication was a special time for me;  I wrote it while on vacation with my family, most of it in the back seat of our car while the conversation swirled around me. But that didn't matter, because I was lost in this particular world with Jim and Spock.  It was a unique experience that produced what is an unusual story for me.  Thank you again, very much, for taking the time to tell me you enjoyed it. Take care.

Very gratefully,

Jenna

A Canadian Winter by twisting_vine_x Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 47]
Summary:

Three years into their mission, shore leave happens to coincide with Christmas. The entire bridge crew is spending time with their families, so Jim decides to rent himself a cabin in northern Ontario, resigned to spending the three weeks alone.

Fortunately for Jim, a certain pointy-eared officer is also lacking in Christmas plans.

- - -

Note - Part of the 2009 Jim/Spock Advent Calendar

Title: A Canadian Winter
Author: Liz
Series: STXI
Rating: NC-17
Length: 18,419 (... the scary thing is, I actually do have a real life.) 
Warnings: First-time, angst, romance, Christmas clichés.

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Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Pre-Slash, Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: None
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 18021 Read Count: 38221
[Report This] Published: 12/06/2009 Updated: 12/06/2009
Reviewer: T nash-veh Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/24/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was beautiful!  Your Jim and Spock are drawn so well, and Jim's POV is perfect.  All the lovely little moments you included, the way you gave each of them past moments to reflect on... all wonderful.  Sometimes a little phrase stood out as perfect 'hotter than summer pavement' for example.  But I know that I will remember the image of Spock setting snowman stick-hands together forever.  Thank you so very much for crafting such a lovely story and sharing it.

Both Hands On the Throttle by penbrydd Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 9]
Summary:

Kirk likes it rough, and after that go-round on the bridge, he's just looking for an excuse to get Spock to do that, again.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Erotica, First Time, Humor
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: Dominance/submission, Kink
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1404 Read Count: 9977
[Report This] Published: 12/10/2009 Updated: 12/10/2009
Reviewer: T nash-veh Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/13/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Kudos!  This seemed to me to capture both characters really well.  I am more of a TOS fan than Abrams - but I'm not an idiot - the new actors are hot as hell, and even if they do have a 'new' dynamic, there is stil a certain chemistry, which you nailed.  I am just slightly uncertain about the last two paragraphs.  For some reason, they don't seem to be quite as characteristic to me, but I'm not sure why.  It might just be the word choices.  Nothing wrong with it mind you - just not as PERFECT as the rest of the story.  In particular - this could not be improved upon - brilliant, "There was just something about the captain that slipped past his nearly-impeccable self-control, and jabbed him straight into irrational violence.

At the moment, Spock was considering exactly this reaction to the captain's behaviour, while pinning Kirk to the wall of the corridor, a few inches off the ground, with one arm pressed against the captain's neck, and the other hand gripping the wrist for better leverage. Kirk's face was a brilliant red, tinging toward blue around the lips, and he continued to struggle weakly against Spock -- or at least, Spock had thought it was struggling until he noticed that the leg he was using to prop his captain off the floor was butted against a rather reactive part of the human's anatomy -- and react it had."  Thank you for sharing this story.

Ice Ice Baby by Bastet Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary:

And the moral of the story is...let sleeping Vulcans lie.  Because Vulcans don't get mad, they get even.

**Kink, some humor and (I hope) cold shower worthy**


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Erotica, Established Relationship, Humor
Trope (OPTIONAL): Bottom Kirk
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: Bondage
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1842 Read Count: 6388
[Report This] Published: 05/07/2010 Updated: 05/07/2010
Reviewer: T nash-veh Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/24/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very hot!  No wait - cold, oh shoot I'm all confused.  I really loved the part where Kirk was having difficulty controlling his laughter - I could totally see every moment of that and it made me laugh too.  Thanks for the great bedtime story.



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it. Sorry about the hot, err cold, err...oh whatever, flashes.

Sleep by spirk-sporked Rated: All Audiences starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 14]
Summary:

Takes place in the ending of the TOS episode, "Requiem for Methusulah". In third person, but namely from the POV of Spock's thoughts. Just my take on the situation. Pre-slash. Sort of angsty desire, I guess. xP


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Pre-Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Angst
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 945 Read Count: 5828
[Report This] Published: 06/10/2010 Updated: 06/10/2010
Reviewer: T nash-veh Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/01/2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I loved this ... exactly right for Spock's POV.

Nightmares and Dreams by spirk-sporked Rated: Mature Content (Teen) starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

Post-TWOK and Pre-SFS. Basically just a reflection on Kirk's feelings about his loss of Spock, and how it's affecting him. Particularly how it's affecting his dreams and sleep. (Again I have another story with sleep as a theme. Idk why. *Shrug*) Pretty depressing, not gonna lie. Dun read if you want a something fluffy!


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: None
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Angst
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1468 Read Count: 1491
[Report This] Published: 06/11/2010 Updated: 06/11/2010
Reviewer: T nash-veh Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/01/2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Sad, but sweet.

If Your Lover Never Smiled by spirk-sporked Rated: All Audiences starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

Not really a plot, but more of a reflection. Older Kirk reflects on what loving a Vulcan has made him learn about himself, and what it has taught him. Very fluffy. 1st person. Kirk's POV, le duh. :)


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: None
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Character Study
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1323 Read Count: 5237
[Report This] Published: 07/18/2010 Updated: 07/18/2010
Reviewer: T nash-veh Signed
Date: 05/29/2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Loved it.  Particulary enjoyed the idea that Jim Kirk could actually grown mature enough to be satisfied with a life partner who couldn't contribute the hot sex.  I honestly don't think I'd seriously considered that before!

A Perfect Match by spirk-sporked Rated: All Audiences starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 11]
Summary:

One night, Kirk asks Spock if he believes in soul-mates. Fluff ensues. All audiences. Comments make me smile. Enjoy.

-Spirk-Sporked >: )


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Pre-Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Character Study
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2032 Read Count: 13166
[Report This] Published: 08/14/2010 Updated: 08/14/2010
Reviewer: T nash-veh Signed
Date: 04/01/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm oddly on the fence about this story and darned if I know why.  I think it is a fascinating exploration of the perception of soul-mate.  And really well-written.  I particularly like Kirk somewhat relentlessly pushing Spock along the path of considering each other as soul-mates, and how clueless Spock is about his direction.  So I'm not sure exactly what it is that I don't like.  Perhaps ... perhaps I want Spock to be more emotional?  But darn it, I don't like it when people make Spock too emotional!  So that would be wrong, wouldn't it?!  Maybe it's just the seeming casualness of 'And then it passed.'  For me, that almost trivializes the moment they just shared.  Hmmm.  I hate it when I can't pin down something that bothers me, but that's the best I can do to explain it.

SPIRK by spirk-sporked Rated: Mature Content (Teen) starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 6]
Summary:

LOLOLOLOL

Okay, generic title for something highly amusing. For an assignment for my Adv. Creative Writing class, I had to do a "found" poem, where you find lines in a published prose, and shape it into a poem. This is from a Star Trek book. (Log One, or something), and it was... really fun to write. All of these lines existed in that book, and there are billions that I did not use. SO MUCH INNUDENO. I had fun, even if you don't care. xD


Categories: Poetry
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 155 Read Count: 2023
[Report This] Published: 09/29/2010 Updated: 09/29/2010
Reviewer: T nash-veh Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/01/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow - loved this.  Read it over several times and while poetry and I have a kind of a love/hate relationship (usually more hate than love) I DO know what I like and I like this a lot.  Best line?  'He might have been crying.'  Wow.  Hit me like bullets.  Thank you so much for sharing I enjoyed this very much.

Summary:

Jim wakes to the sounds of sirens, but only peace exists here. Just a short fluff piece.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Established Relationship, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1341 Read Count: 6488
[Report This] Published: 10/30/2010 Updated: 10/30/2010
Reviewer: T nash-veh Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/10/2013 Title: Chapter 1: With the Sun Creeping Across the Floor

Mmmm - a nice and cozy read on a wintery snowy day in Nebraska.  Thanks Mike, this was lovely.

Care by mattmetzger Rated: All Audiences starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 12]
Summary:

After the chaos is over, Jim takes good care of what is his.

Warning: This story contains high levels of fluff, and may present a choking hazard.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: McCoy
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Established Relationship, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3277 Read Count: 11720
[Report This] Published: 01/21/2011 Updated: 01/21/2011
Reviewer: T nash-veh Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/25/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ahhh.  Loved this.  Only I'm not sure I perfectly understand how well established the relationship was prior to this story, and if this story represents a change - or if it is just a 'day in the lives' type of story.  Really doesn't matter.  I think you did Spock description and POV splendidly.

The Brume of Ardor by gorthead Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

Written for K/S Valentine on LiveJournal. The original prompt: The Enterprise visits the planet 'Valentine' where everyone is romantic and gets Kirk in the mood...

When the crew lands on Valentine, there's a strange mist in the air, and it seems to be having quite an effect on Kirk.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s), Sulu, Uhura
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Pre-Slash, Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Action/Plot, Erotica, First Time, Humor, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): Bottom Kirk
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4286 Read Count: 3332
[Report This] Published: 02/12/2011 Updated: 02/12/2011
Reviewer: T nash-veh Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/20/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh - very nice first time story.  I especially loved 'he found it oddly comforting that Spock was very much still Spock – in fact, in some strange way, he felt more like the usual Spock than he had in months.'  That was a great way to end it.  I enjoyed this very much - please write more!