Reviewer: Ymas Signed
Chapter 1: Jim's Ears
This was intense and so very, very good. Awesome work, thank you so much for sharing!
I especially liked how you didn't spare either of them a confrontation with their own dark side. Haven't seen that all too often!
There was only one thing I didn't like: It was all those spoilers in the Author's Notes and Warnings. It was such a pity that I always knew or suspected what was going to happen in the next chapter. I don't think you need warnings for every chapter, just one at the beginning for the whole story would do. Especially as NO ONE would or could EVER stop reading this story after getting through the first few chapters, no matter what the warnings are!
Oh my gosh, I just saw this review after all this time. My email apparently thinks the archive is spam now. Grrr. Well, I am so sorry for not responding until now.
THANK YOU for your awesome feedback! I love that you loved it ;) Reviews like yours still make my day.
And you're not the only one who's mentioned there are too many warnings. So sorry about that. I'll be more sparing next time. I think with my "be sensitive" goggles on, I got a little overzealous with it.