Penname: Kiwigirl [Contact] Real name: Helena
Member Since: 02/09/2012
Membership status: Member
Bio:

I am 52 i live in New Zealand. Love to travel, gardening. Am a big TOS fan love mpreg.


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Teach Me by SpirkTrekker42 Rated: Mature Content (Teen) starstarstarstar [Reviews - 11]
Summary:

K/S. This is set during the new Trek movie, which means major spoilers. My take on Kirk and Spock's first meeting at Starfleet Academy. Spock is Kirk's teacher and they really don't get along! Just how much do they *hate* each other? Slash.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: Chekov, Chris Pike, McCoy, Sarek, Scott, Sulu, Uhura
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Pre-Slash, Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Action/Plot, Established Relationship, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): Pon Farr
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: None
Series: The T'hy'la Chronicles
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 43767 Read Count: 43669
[Report This] Published: 06/23/2009 Updated: 06/29/2009
Reviewer: Kiwigirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/07/2013 Title: Chapter 2: James T. Kirk

OMG James Kirk you have to love him in one way as he is a little sauce box. On the other hand he brought it on himself as he was so cocky,  his attitude, he can dish it out but cant take it. Spock apologised for the mistake, he didn't know Jims last name was Kirk. Not a good start, but i am looking forward to seeing them go from antaganists to friends to T'hyla. I did love the way Prime Spock came to Spock in a dream, in the first chapter. Love it.

Reviewer: Kiwigirl Signed
Date: 02/07/2013 Title: Chapter 11: Unshakable Bond - Part Two

A most satisfying end to a wonderful story. Loved it. On to the sequel.



Author's Response:

Thanks!  The sequel is kinda intense, just to warn you.  It's not fluffy bunnies and rainbows.

Babysitter Bones by dreamwind Rated: Mature Content (Teen) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 31]
Summary:

Another mission gone wrong, but this time Bones is left to sort out the consequences. Is he prepared to watch over two small children? Especially when those children are Captain Kirk and Commander Spock.

[Chapter 1-6 now with new content!]

 


Categories: Works in Progress
Characters: Chapel, Chekov, McCoy, Scott, Sulu, Uhura
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk-Spock Friendship, Kirk/Spock Pre-Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Humor, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 17926 Read Count: 29648
[Report This] Published: 08/14/2009 Updated: 02/21/2011
Reviewer: Kiwigirl Signed
Date: 02/18/2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I dont think i have laughed so hard. Poor Sulu. You wont be touching Spockie again will you. And Uhura reduced to giggles.

Reviewer: Kiwigirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/18/2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

It has been a joy and so much fun to read this wonderful story. CAN YOU PLEASE UPDATE SOON.

Summary: In a timeline where the Vulcans never allowed Earth freedom from their oversight, Jim Kirk doesn't fit in. All he needs to get away is a fast ship and a crew as crazy as he is; luckily, some things are universal constants.
Categories: Fiction
Characters: Chekov, McCoy, Scott, Uhura
Crossover Fandom: AU or Mirror Universe
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Action/Plot, First Time, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: None
Series: Don't Pick Our Destiny
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 17490 Read Count: 8117
[Report This] Published: 11/02/2009 Updated: 11/02/2009
Reviewer: Kiwigirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/24/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

You just gotta love them lol. Were missing one person Sulu, Chekovs got to have his Sulu. Fabulous story love it.

Ascension by Starbuck Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 20]
Summary:

Spock has gone to Mount Seleya to complete the Kolinahr and left alone back on Earth, Kirk realises just how much the Vulcan means to him. He then undertakes a long and arduous journey to find Spock and bring him back so that they can find their true destinies together. But will he be too late to save him?


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Character Study
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 22295 Read Count: 16295
[Report This] Published: 05/01/2010 Updated: 05/16/2010
Reviewer: Kiwigirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/27/2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Have you done a sequel to this wonderful story, if so i would love to read it. If not please write one.

Alpha Carinae II by logicallyillogical Rated: Mature Content (Teen) starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 10]
Summary:

Spock plans a trip to the Alpha Carinae system to do some planetary surveying. Kirk plans a camping trip. McCoy is reluctantly dragged along. Cultural mix-ups and hijinxs with the indigenous pre-warp civilization ensue. Spock says the "L" word to Kirk.


Categories: Works in Progress
Characters: McCoy
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Pre-Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Action/Plot, Humor, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: None
Challenges: So you say you love me?
Series: The New Voyages
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 7904 Read Count: 9650
[Report This] Published: 07/01/2010 Updated: 07/15/2010
Reviewer: Kiwigirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/16/2013 Title: Chapter 6: Alpha Carinae II, Chapter 6

Love this story. Can you please come back and finish this wonderful story.

Faciendum filia by Tlema Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 230]
Summary:

Now Complete!

A mission goes wrong on a planet of genius doctors who fixed up Captain J T Kirk before sending him back to his grateful friends... But it turns out they fixed him too well! When he and Spock get drugged and have a little fun, a baby is made! Can Spock convince Jim that their love is meant to be?

Written for Sage2134's challenge Preggers!Kirk:

Kirk and Spock have a one-night stand (Bottom!Kirk is feisty and Spock loves it.)
A couple months later Kirk finds out he's pregnant with Spock's baby. (mechanics don't matter, you can decide how or ignore the physiology entirely-i'm not picky)
He tells Spock and they get together, and Spock loves seeing Kirk all preggers and can't keep his hands off him.
Bonus points for pregnant sex.
Extra Super Bonus Points if there's some well-meaning ribbing from Bones and Uhura.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: Chapel, McCoy, Uhura
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Pre-Slash, Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Action/Plot, Angst, First Time, Humor, Hurt/Comfort, MPREG, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): Bottom Kirk
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: Abuse, Non-consensual sex
Challenges: Preggers!Kirk
Series: None
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 59461 Read Count: 470272
[Report This] Published: 01/05/2011 Updated: 02/08/2011
Reviewer: Kiwigirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/09/2012 Title: Chapter 40: Not Again!

Please Please can you write a sequel. i have been waiting for simply ages for the sequel to appear. This is the first Krk/Spock mpreg story i read, and got totally hooked. I absolutely love this story. I would love to see them have a beautiful little baby brother for Amanda.

Reviewer: Kiwigirl Signed
Date: 05/07/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Problems

PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE WITH CHERRIES ON TOP. WE NEED A SEQUEL. TO THIS FABULOUS STORY.

A Matter for Ma'at by dreamwind Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 50]
Summary:

 

[Part 2 of The Heart of Wadj Wer Series] Finally Jim is about to graduate from Starfleet, to journey to the heavens and explore new worlds. But first he must defeat the mad Captain Nero and save Vulcan and Earth. If that’s not enough he has to deal with competition for Spock's affection, an emotionally open old Spock, and too many questions from too many people about his little miracle child. What's a cadet to do?

Notice: This Fic is temporarily on hold as I revise it's prequel, A Trick of Eros. I also plan to go back through the existing chapters on this fic, as I a not completely happy with them and I may make 1 or 2 big changes. 


Categories: Works in Progress
Characters: Amanda, Chekov, Chris Pike, girl!Kirk, McCoy, Original Character(s), Sarek, Scott, Sulu, Uhura
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Pre-Slash, Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Action/Plot, Angst, Genderswap, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): Bottom Kirk
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: Explicit violence
Series: The Heart of Wadj Wer (Original Version)
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 51270 Read Count: 40703
[Report This] Published: 06/14/2011 Updated: 03/05/2012
Reviewer: Kiwigirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/18/2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

I love this story. No wonder Spock did not remember Jim, he was a girl at the time. I do believe that Frank and Winona sent back the letters to Spock. I cant wait for Jim and Spock to finally be reunited and what Spocks reaction will be when he learns that he and Jim have a beautiful little son. PLEASE UPDATE SOON.

Reviewer: Kiwigirl Signed
Date: 03/05/2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

Whoa that Uhura is one messed up bitch. Time for Jim to come clean with Spock. I wonder who it was that kept Spock and Jim apart. Spock has certainly been faithful to his Thýla the same cannot be said of Jim. I wonder what Spocks reaction to that will be. Cant wait for Spock to meet his son Gabriel. Update soon please.

Safeguard by Stacee Phelps Rated: All Audiences starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary:

A slow day on the U.S.S. Enterprise proves to be anything but as a friend becomes an unexpected enemy and leaves Captain James T. Kirk fighting for his life.


Categories: Works in Progress
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Established Relationship
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1593 Read Count: 6466
[Report This] Published: 08/14/2011 Updated: 08/15/2011
Reviewer: Kiwigirl Signed
Date: 02/24/2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

A great start please come back and continue.

But I Thought They Hated Each Other by Miss Car Rated: Mature Content (Teen) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 38]
Summary:

“Let’s watch what our friends and family really think about us.  Itwill be fun.”

 

After being married for almost a year Jim and Spock finally have time to watch the uncut footage from their wedding video due to being quarantined. (Don’t ask, but at least they are trapped together.) What do their friends and family (and I use the term loosely) really think of their relationship?  Also, can our favorite couple survive three weeks of medical captivity with no sex?

Sequel to: But I Thought You Were Straight and Why Jim Should Not Write His Own Press Release

This probably can be read as a standalone without much difficulty.

 


Categories: Fiction
Characters: Chekov, Chris Pike, McCoy, Sarek, Scott, Sulu, Uhura
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: K/S plus K/other or S/other, Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Action/Plot, Angst, Character Study, Established Relationship, Fluff, Humor, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): Bottom Kirk, Bottom Spock, Hurt Kirk, Hurt Spock
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: Dubious consent, Explicit violence
Series: Warning: Assumptions Are Bad
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 76220 Read Count: 29363
[Report This] Published: 09/26/2011 Updated: 01/01/2013
Reviewer: Kiwigirl Signed
Date: 01/22/2013 Title: Chapter 12: Interview Number 22631017A and 22631019A: The Barnett family.

Hi i love this story. I have tried to read your Starfleet family values but for the life of me i cannot get my head around it. If you have the time could you please email me at helenaloud@gmail.com and explain the story. Jim and Spock are together is that right. But then you have k/s/u past s/u past with McCoy/uhura and Scotty/uhura i got lost. HELP

An Unexpected Journey by CMM Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 545]
Summary:

Now done!

This is in response to Kittygirl's Jim the Single Parent challenge:

This idea has been floating around in my brain for a while so I figured I'd issue a challenge to see what people came up with. This does have the potential to be rather long.

It goes like this:

While Spock is still with Uhura, he ends up having a drunken fling with Kirk, who is completely in love with him. Kirk somehow ends up pregnant with his child(it doesn't matter how you make this come about, either meddling aliens or an auxiliary uterus idea that keeps floating around or that Jim just can). When Spock is finally informed of the conception he decides that, since he and Uhura cannot have children together for whatever reason (completely your idea why), Jim's child be the perfect candidate instead and decides to take the child and whisk it away New Vulcan after it is born to raise it with Uhura. He believes Jim to illogical and reckless to raise a child. Enlisting McCoy's help, who thinks that its better for the child to be raised by Vulcan's, the trio keep a close eye on Jim in case he gets wind of the plan. When Jim realizes what Spock is planning, he puts in his resignation in Starfleet and leaves for parts unknown. Some years pass (more than 2 less than 7) and Jim returns as a personal favor to Chris Pike to command the Enterprise again with a little surprise in tow. Now Spock has to deal with a child that does not like him for the pain he caused its Mother(the kid has to call Jim mom)and the complete distrust of Jim with his child.

 

You may use any name you wish for the child, boy or girl. How Jim finds out the plot is entirely up to you. Uhura could tell him in a fit of anger at him, or he could overhear them talking or McCoy tells him in a fit of Conscience.

I would like it in the Abrams Universe, because I think a mixture of Jim and Spock would look so cute with Blue eyes. However this does come with a few stipulations.

1. Under no circumstances does Jim have any communication with the trio of evildoers until he returns to the Enterprise(I've always wanted to use that word). In his mind Bones, Spock, and Uhura betrayed him. Anyone else is completely welcome.

2. Sarek is the doting Grandpa... He can know he has a grandchild and is kept updated on the child's growth. I think it would be an awesome way to re-introduce Jim back to the Enterprise by having him and child picked up from Sarek's home...

And 3...

HAS TO HAVE HAPPY ENDING!

Since two of my other long pieces are coming pretty close to the end, I decided it was time to reclaim my crown as queen of mpreg.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: Chris Pike, McCoy, Sarek, Scott, Sulu, Uhura
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Pre-Slash, Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Angst, Character Study, First Time, MPREG, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: None
Challenges: Jim the Single Parent
Series: Answered Challenges
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 65809 Read Count: 538307
[Report This] Published: 01/19/2012 Updated: 02/24/2012
Reviewer: Kiwigirl Signed
Date: 02/17/2012 Title: Chapter 16: A Birthday--and a Bad Decision

Ooh a cliffhanger sweet. Can we please have an update pretty please with a cherry on top and chocolate sprinkles. Ponn farr has hit Spock, poor guy must be terrified after the last one Trelane forced on him. Yay Spock has taught Mimi to play chess and he got her an Alice in wonderland one at that. I loved Jim sharing the story of his shitty childhood. Go get him Jim. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Kiwigirl Signed
Date: 02/09/2012 Title: Chapter 12: Four Years and Two Weeks after the Flight

First of all i want to say i love your stories.I dont usually review but i feel Spock needs support. I know Spock has made mistakes, its human nature. Spock has lost his mother Amanda the one person in his life who has always loved and supported him. Without her he has lost his way. Spock had a physically and emotionally abusive child hood at the hands of his childhood tormentors. Amanda's love was what got Spock through, it most certainly was not from the love and support of his father Sarek. And dont get me started on Selik, who does he think he is, taunting Spock and relishing it. I just want to bitch slap him. I usually love Prime Spock but i hate his smarminess in this story. And as for McCoy i trust hes going to have the balls to own upto his secret little medical file he has on Jim. I understand that Jim was scared and ran.
Everyone has shown Jim love and support through this. But what about Spock and the pain he has suffered. Trelane humiliated and terrified Spock by sending him into early Ponn farr. You would think that Sarek and Selik would understand what that would do to Spock on top of losing his beloved mother.But no its all about Jim. Well its about time someone gave a damn about Spock. Time for Sarek to apologise to his son for not being the father his son needed, instead of him saying your to human. Well i got news for you Sarek you married a beautiful human lady named Amanda, get over it. I dont believe Spock should be made to crawl and grovel for forgiveness,he has suffered enough pain and humiliation in his life. To make him do that makes them no better than his childhood tormentors. Hes needs loving and healing. Have you thought about Spock having a visit from his mothers spirit. I think he needs to cry in his mothers arms and feel her love. Kudos to you for being a great story teller.

Author's Response:

Yes, and that's why I've tried all along to offer reasons--not excuses, but reasons--why Spock reacted so badly. he won't have toc rawl too much but he did mess up Jim's life.

Reviewer: Kiwigirl Signed
Date: 02/10/2012 Title: Chapter 13: A Cross between a Class Reunion and a Coronation

Poor spock i do feel for him, it has been a hard 4 years of lonliness and regret. But there is fault on both sides here. As you say Spock had reasons for acting the way he did. Jim didn't exactly give Spock cause to believe Jim would be a good father, after telling McCoy to take the child out of him.Plus he seemed to be on a mission to endanger himself and the baby, until she moved. Can Jim really say with complete honesty if the roles had been reversed he would have acted any differently. Spock was in no fit state to think rationally as he normally would. That flaming Tremane has alot to answer for. Jim goes on about Spock costing him his starfleet career for 4 years, but would he really give up those years of having his daughter Mimi i think not. I still say that McCoy needs to own up about the medical record he has on Jim, i dont want him getting off scott free. Spock is not the only one who needs to make amends. What did Jim expect that Mimi would just be all over her daddy, after all the angry  and hurt feelings he has projected over 4 years towards Spock. I think Spock needs to take things slowly with his daughter. Bonding over their love of cats is a good way to start. When are these two beautiful men going to realise they are T'hyla. MORE SOON PLEASE.



Author's Response:

Of course there's blame on all sides; there always is, in my experience. They will get it together, but if I end the story now, everyone will hate me, lol.

Reviewer: Kiwigirl Signed
Date: 02/14/2012 Title: Chapter 14: Vulcans Are not Structural Engineers

Such a sweet moment between Spock and his daughter Mimi. IIt's  a shame that Sarek could not have shown his son the love and gentleness he shows his grandughter, maybe Spock would have been able to cope with the loss of his mother Amanda better if he knew he could have turned to his father for comfort. I think having to live on calder 11 was good for Jim made him grow up. I would love for Spock to share his memories of his  beautiful mother Amanda with his daughter T'Mimya, i am sure that Spock must have some holo discs of Amanda and he could tell Mimi how much Amanda would have loved her. I do not like McCoy in this story. Stuck in the middle my ass he already had that secret Physch file on Jim before all hell broke lose. OWN UP McCoy. Thanks for some little ray of light between Spock and Mimi. I feel its going to be a while before you get ouy boys together. I wonder if Jim will find out that Spock was thinking of doing the Kolinor.

Reviewer: Kiwigirl Signed
Date: 02/15/2012 Title: Chapter 15: Matchmakers and Meddlers

And the chapter was going so well. That freakin Trelane, if anyone needs to learn a lesson it;s him. Permission to bitch slap him to hell and back. Where are his keepers he needs a good spanking.

Reviewer: Kiwigirl Signed
Date: 02/18/2012 Title: Chapter 17: Honeymoon at Gol

Yes hot sexy lovemaking. I know there is still more you have planned before we get our happy ending, but could the boys please have a beautiful baby boy to complete their wonderful family. I would love to see Spock get to coddle Jim through his pregenancy and Mimi would adore being a big sister.

Reviewer: Kiwigirl Signed
Date: 02/21/2012 Title: Chapter 19: The Choice

Crap the borg this is so not good. I cant wait to see how you fix this nightmare of a situation.  HAPPY ENDING HAPPY ENDING is the only thing that i can chant like a mantra tp get through this.