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Learning Home by sundara Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 26]
Summary:

(Full-length story after the intro set-up in Passages)

 

We shall not cease from exploration

And the end of all our exploring

Will be to arrive where we started

And know the place for the first time.

                                  T. S. Eliot

 


Categories: Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Action/Plot, First Time
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 26498 Read Count: 11517
[Report This] Published: 06/23/2009 Updated: 06/23/2009
Reviewer: Scarlettmoon7 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/22/2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

So much love! Lol at Kirk not knowing he was participating in another vulcan marriage ritual - his own! And sadness at all the wasted time and misunderstandings..

Passages by sundara Rated: All Audiences starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 9]
Summary:

PREQUEL for Learning Home! James T. Kirk is at a big crossroads in his life.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: Chekov, McCoy, Sulu, Uhura
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Pre-Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7464 Read Count: 7725
[Report This] Published: 06/24/2009 Updated: 06/24/2009
Reviewer: Scarlettmoon7 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/22/2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ow! So much ow! I'm going onto Learning Home for some comfort (I hope!)

Reviewer: Scarlettmoon7 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/22/2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ow! So much ow! I'm going onto Learning Home for some comfort (I hope!)

Chance Encounter by SpirkTrekker42 Rated: All Audiences starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 16]
Summary:

Set during the Academy days. A reluctant Commander Spock is thrust back in time on an adventure with young cadet Kirk, as they try to undo Cupcake's tampering with history. But when Kirk gets to know his father, can he do what is right by history?


Categories: Fiction
Characters: McCoy, Uhura
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Pre-Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Action/Plot, Character Study, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 37307 Read Count: 71026
[Report This] Published: 09/30/2009 Updated: 06/23/2010
Reviewer: Scarlettmoon7 Signed
Date: 12/18/2012 Title: Chapter 12: Epilogue

This needs a sequel! Is great!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I just had to write a fic where they saved Vulcan.  It just had to be done, lol.  I definitely could write a sequel to it, perhaps sometime in June of 2013 right after the new movie comes out.  Thanks for the idea.  Do you have any requests?  Perhaps for Kirk and Spock to visit Spock's parents and T'Pau on Vulcan?

Reviewer: Scarlettmoon7 Signed
Date: 12/22/2012 Title: Chapter 1: Collide

Yes, that sounds good! ... Although, if what I suspect happens in the movie you will be overcome with plotbunnies... So if you want to do anything related to the first reboot... It should be before that! Lol

Straight on 'til morning by drarroway Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 12]
Summary:

Re-posted story.  Thanks to Amanda Warrington for invaluable advice/guidance!


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Action/Plot, Angst, Established Relationship
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 17227 Read Count: 12003
[Report This] Published: 01/16/2010 Updated: 01/16/2010
Reviewer: Scarlettmoon7 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/11/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Your writing is so.... Beautiful. Elegant. Flowing. I love the way Spock loves Jim. I love that you write about Kirk's capabilities and that he is so competent. One of the things I disliked most about the abrams verse is that it seems to have inspired so many incompetent!kirk fics where he neglects his paperwork, duties, etc.
I love re-reading your stories. I spread them out like rare desserts, savouring them.
I hope you are inspired by the new movie, or, well, anything and come back to writing k/s... Actually, after the new movie I am strangely drawn to the nu!khan/kirk as well.

Reviewer: Scarlettmoon7 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/11/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Your writing is so.... Beautiful. Elegant. Flowing. I love the way Spock loves Jim. I love that you write about Kirk's capabilities and that he is so competent. One of the things I disliked most about the abrams verse is that it seems to have inspired so many incompetent!kirk fics where he neglects his paperwork, duties, etc.
I love re-reading your stories. I spread them out like rare desserts, savouring them.
I hope you are inspired by the new movie, or, well, anything and come back to writing k/s... Actually, after the new movie I am strangely drawn to the nu!khan/kirk as well.

The Missing Medal Affair by SpirkTrekker42 Rated: All Audiences starstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

Jim's medal he received for saving the earth is missing! Can he and Chekov uncover a plot to steal his captaincy before it's too late? K/S slash. Crackfic!


Categories: Fiction
Characters: Chekov, McCoy, Scott, Sulu, Uhura
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Humor, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7854 Read Count: 15533
[Report This] Published: 02/07/2010 Updated: 06/09/2010
Reviewer: Scarlettmoon7 Signed
Date: 12/18/2012 Title: Chapter 4: Unexpected

This was awesome! I love how chekov was so loyal, lol. It reminded me of the mirror universe and how maybe mirror!kirk started off nicer but was then betrayed by his crew..... Which is odd as mirror stories and crack are about opposite. I have a vivid imagination i guess. I think this story is labelled unfinished, so maybe want to update that?

Author's Response:

Yeah I will. Thanks for telling me.  I totally ripped off this story from an episode of a children's TV show in the late 80s.  No one has guessed it yet!  Thanks for the nice review and Happy Holidays.

-Spirk

Camping Out by SpirkTrekker42 Rated: All Audiences starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 6]
Summary:

Kidfic! Young Kirk and Spock camp out in Iowa and discuss their hopes
for the future. When it is time to sleep, Kirk begs Spock to tell him a story.
Spock obliges. Fluff galore, K/S friendship with mild slashy subtext.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk-Spock Friendship, Kirk/Spock Pre-Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Character Study, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2490 Read Count: 4824
[Report This] Published: 04/02/2010 Updated: 04/02/2010
Reviewer: Scarlettmoon7 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/18/2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love this so muc! I love it when they grow up together or are together from a young age. So sweet!

Author's Response:

I'm glad you like it! :)  It was fun to write.

Summary: Feature

A chance meeting in a garden changes the shape of two lives forever. Originally published in Sun and Shadow.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk-Spock Friendship
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Angst, Hurt/Comfort
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: Major character death
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4544 Read Count: 9433
[Report This] Published: 09/28/2010 Updated: 09/28/2010
Reviewer: Scarlettmoon7 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/25/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Amazing. Devastating. There are no words.

Thank you for posting this.

The Gifts by Dahliaxat Rated: Mature Content (Teen) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 26]
Summary:

A different version of Wrath of Khan. Spock has a second gift to give Jim. The universe decides to give them both another.


Categories: Works in Progress
Characters: Carol Marcus, Chekov
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk-Spock Friendship, Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Angst, Character Study, First Time
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: AU Alternate Universe, ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3806 Read Count: 8088
[Report This] Published: 11/01/2010 Updated: 05/14/2015
Reviewer: Scarlettmoon7 Signed
Date: 03/13/2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Ack! So good, please update! I find the Gol years/situation very sad.

Author's Response:

Thanks. Yes, Gol was sad...That's a hell of a long time to be away....Over two years, and just when he's about to get his pretty necklace, he thinks of Jim, and bam V'Ger shows up as well...what a waste of time....

From Choice by Vivian Gates Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 11]
Summary:

Just as Kirk is getting his doctorate, his servant Spock’s time of indentureship is ending. Originally published in 1985 in the print fanzine "Greater California K/S".


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: First Time
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: AU Alternate Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7229 Read Count: 4467
[Report This] Published: 11/13/2010 Updated: 11/13/2010
Reviewer: Scarlettmoon7 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/10/2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really like this fic. Thanks for posting!

Renunciation by CMM Rated: Mature Content (Teen) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 70]
Summary:

Without warning, Spock has repudiated his bond with Jim and fled to New Vulcan, leaving his bond mate on the edge of madness. With the help of a dear friend, Kirk begins to recover, but now he must find out what compulsion has driven him and Spock apart.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: McCoy, Scott, Uhura
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Angst, Character Study, Established Relationship
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 26002 Read Count: 107767
[Report This] Published: 12/02/2010 Updated: 12/09/2010
Reviewer: Scarlettmoon7 Signed
Date: 05/11/2013 Title: Chapter 16: Proper Endings

I just reread this. Beautiful, heartbreaking. Good job Selik!
Good point - he's very fortunate, the only one to have been loved by 2 kirks.

The Choice of Love, Act Two by CMM Rated: All Audiences starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 14]
Summary:

I stirred up such a fit with "The Choice of Love" that I had to write a full-length sequel.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Angst, Established Relationship, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3425 Read Count: 7827
[Report This] Published: 01/27/2011 Updated: 01/27/2011
Reviewer: Scarlettmoon7 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/26/2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I found this series recced on kirkspock.livejournal

it's great.. I always wondered about what would happen if botany bay was discovered in aos.... Will you continue this series? It would be interesting to see their journey, adventures, and new home :)

Summary:

After saving the life of a Priestess on a new world, Kirk and Spock are gifted with a bond that they were neither expecting or even aware was a possibility. Together, they must deal with this new intimacy, built upon a foundation of reluctant and tentative camaraderie.

Kirk struggles to find his place in Spock’s life, while Spock comes to terms with exactly what that position is.

More chaos ensues as they continue on their 5 year mission, as is want to do. Kirk and Spock must put aside their concerns in the face of their duty to the Enterprise.

With a hasty return to the new Vulcan home world, their relationship meets it’s defining moment.


Categories: Works in Progress
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Pre-Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Angst
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 21452 Read Count: 7762
[Report This] Published: 03/01/2011 Updated: 05/22/2013
Reviewer: Scarlettmoon7 Signed
Date: 05/20/2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Please update soon! I admit, the metaphor/similies language is beautifu and unique, but it does get int the way of the story.
I am eager to read the rest if it's done!!
I suggest that you post the rest of the story, as is, like NaNoWriMo, while you have the confidence (I know how it is!!) and then ask for a beta to help you o through it and post a version 2......

Author's Response:

Thank you. I hope the alliteration is not the part you feel is in the way of the story. It's actually very necessary to everything. It's a huge motif I use to symbolize the TOS series and I use Rock n Roll to symbolize the deviation in this new timeline to those old TOS ways. I'm sorry it was destracting though. I feel bad, I can't not have them in this one, it's just too important to my writing style and what I have planned for the rest of this story. I hope you continue to enjoy it even with all the metaphors, alliterations, and so forth.

Traitors' Sons by Raven Knight Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 151]
Summary:

The Terran Empire responds to a planetary distress signal from Vulcan.  Their goal is not to aid, but to enslave the survivors.  Captain Pike’s capture leaves his young first officer, James T. Kirk, in command of the ISS Enterprise.  As the surviving Vulcans are subdued, one of them catches Kirk’s interest.  In that moment, everything changes, and the destiny of the Empire is forever altered.


Categories: Works in Progress
Characters: Amanda, Chapel, Chekov, Chris Pike, Gaila, Gary Mitchell, McCoy, Original Character(s), Romulan Commander, Sarek, Scott, Stonn, Sulu, T'Pring, Uhura
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Angst, First Time, Hurt/Comfort
Trope (OPTIONAL): Bottom Spock, Hurt Spock
Universe: Abrams Universe, AU Alternate Universe, Mirror Universe
Warnings: Dubious consent, Explicit violence, Non-consensual sex, Rape
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 165533 Read Count: 55775
[Report This] Published: 04/01/2011 Updated: 06/02/2015
Reviewer: Scarlettmoon7 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/18/2012 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Ahhh... I just spent 15 min writing a review and it looks like it wasn't posted.. So i'm going to post this review in a few parts.
Ok! I usually don't read mirror stories as they are usually not to my taste. I don't like a lot of violence or cruelty between kirk and spock or infidelity... I'm too tenderhearted about our otp! I also don't usually read wips unless i'm pretty sure they will be completed. So, I guess the intriguing summary caught my attention? And your good writing held it. I really like what you've done with the characters. Too often kirk is written as a complete evil doer in this universe, so it's good to see that he still has some good character points (or weaknesses according to the empress), such as friendship and trust in bones, loyalty to pike, etc. But he's not afraid to set his phaser on kill. Same with spock. Some MUs have him as so hardcore he makes jim look like a wimp. But you've made him clever enough to escape jim one with his neck pinch yet still vulnerable to kirk and somewhat unwilling to kill. Of course jim's weakness is thinking with his second head or perhaps arrogance. I'm looking forward to the give and take of their relationship, and especially seeing vulcan/spock protectiveness and possessiveness working on behalf of jim. Again, the bones character was great! He loved his father and daughter, and feels fondness towards jim. And i love that he connected with sarek due to his question about his kid. I liked that he was smart enough to blackmail a vulcan. I loved that even in this universe logic quickly drives him crazy so he would pick the least logical and most emotional vulcan!

Author's Response:

Wow!  A multi-part review!  I will respond in kind.

Glad you took a chance on my attempt at the MU! :) While the violence is a little tamer in this than some MU-verse I've read, there is still some of it.  (There's some coming in the next few chapters, nothing terribly bad, but...still violent.)  Glad you are liking the characters so far.  Kirk has some flaws in this verse that make him a little vulnerable, and less of a complete heartless tyrant.  Spock is very similar right now to his non-MU counterpart for now.  He's clever, but he will need to grow into his aggression a bit more. Bones and Sarek are going to be sharing an interesting sort of relationship.  He didn't connect with Sarek yet, but more saw something about him that he can easily exploit for his own use.  They'll get there.  On to part 2 of your review. ~ RK

Reviewer: Scarlettmoon7 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/18/2012 Title: Chapter 2: Welcome Aboard

Part 2 of review (it erased twice, so that shows how much i liked this, being willing to type it all again!). I like that your MU fic has a plot.. And interesting and original plotlines. Why was george kirk a traitor? Did he betray the empire to save his wife and kid? Why did pike adopt jim and when? sato hates him/want the enterprise destroyed.. How will this play out? What are the romulands like in the MU tos who have now crossed into reboot and how are they different from normal romulans? How will the nero fight play out? Will they be even more bamf than in the movie? That's so cool that checkov has known kirk so long and is so loyal. I really like the potential of the relationship as they are both geniuses and it's not explored very often. I also really like that you had jim rescue him at tarsus. It's always interesting to see different authors explore the tarsus situation. Is kevin or tom around? Old spock and scotty? Was sato at tarsus in MU? (never saw the ENT ep). What's with the glass tubes? At first she sounded borg, lol.

Author's Response:

Well, I am certainly grateful you like this that much!! :D

I try to always have plots.  It may not be the most complicated thing in the fandom, but I try.  We'll get to George Kirk's status eventually.  I have a plan.  And I'm sorry to say that I can't answer a few of the following questions without revealing soem spoilers... ;)  The Nero battle will be...interesting...again, spoiler avoided.  Chekov and Kirk are very close in this MU-verse, mainly due to their shared experience on Tarsus IV.  Kevin and Tom - yes, they are around.  That's all I can say for now.  Scotty and Spock Prime?  We'll see.  And Sato on Tarsus in MU-Prime?  Not sure.  I am making up a lot of things for this, because I only saw the episode once and do not remember all that much about it.  Oh, well.  Forgive any mistakes.  (Thanks in advance.)  Glass tubes will be repeatedly brought up, too, as we go. 

...and there will not be Borg in this.  Haha!  On to part 3 of your review! ~ RK

Reviewer: Scarlettmoon7 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/18/2012 Title: Chapter 3: A Logical Proposal

Part 3 and final part!
I'm looking forward to seeing capable!jim in action! Saving earth, going up against the empress, becoming emperer, and maaaaybe getting a bit softer due to his relationship with spock (not by being coerced).
You've also put a beleiveable spin on sarek/mccoy, especially with sarek needing to be stabilised. Also, who will be first officer - mitchell? Spock? I do actually like the mitchell character. And if uhura's in it and she hits on spock, kirk will literally kill her, lol! I'm interested to see how the vulcans are convinced to bond.
Anyway, to wrap this up, one of my fav things about this story is that jjim is son of a traitor instead of a hero.... And how that has affected his development. Will be interesting to see. Very original. (at first i thought maybe the empress was going to be winona, she seemed cold blooded...).
Looking forward to more!! Merry Christmas!

Author's Response:

Jim will soon be in all business mode, but he hasn't quite had the proper push to getting there, yet.  Jim's got a bunch of positions to fill in his crew roster, now.  He's already made his selections.  The transition of those positions is coming in the next chapter or so.  McCoy/Sarek are going to embark on a vastly different relationship than Kirk/Spock.  Glad you find that it works and makes sense.  Was definitely hoping it didn't come out of nowhere.  Uhura is in this, but not in competition against Kirk for Spock.  :) She's got other things to deal with. 

Jim has to prove himself different than his father in this version instead of living up to him - or besting him.  And Winona will come into play, but certainly not as the Empress.  I thought about it, but then settled on Sato.  Something very different happened to Winona.  Hope you enjoy it when it comes up. 

Thank you for your super long review!  Hope to hear from you again when I manage to continue this after recoverign from the insanity of the holiday season! Happy New Year! ~ RK

Reviewer: Scarlettmoon7 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/09/2013 Title: Chapter 4: The Captain's Claim

No more Mr. Nice Kirk, oh yeah!

Author's Response:

Yep.  Kirk is done being patient with/for Spock.  Thanks for reviewing!  ~ RK

Shouting into the Darkness by Mrs Harris Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 24]
Summary:

Summary: “In answer to the Kink Meme: I'd like to request a fic, any fic, in which the fact that Jim isn't Psi-null features prominently.

Chapter One has been extended slightly - you were all quite right, it was too short.  Sorry.


Categories: Works in Progress
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): Bottom Spock
Universe: AU Alternate Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4481 Read Count: 9347
[Report This] Published: 04/12/2011 Updated: 11/27/2011
Reviewer: Scarlettmoon7 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/28/2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Wow! What a great story and a great concept! I'm really looking fwd to where you're going to take this :) psi null Kirk is awesome enough, telepath!Kirk = exciting/awesome :D

Where did you find the prompt? I thought the st-xi-kink lj comm was dead?

Looking for to your next update! Please post soon :)