Penname: ShadowRavin [Contact] Real name: Bobbie
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This is in response to Rihala's Balance of Terror and Love Challenge. It goes like this::

ST: XI Abrams fic based on the TOS episode "Balance of Terror."

Spock is no stranger to being the unwilling subject of racism and xenophobia because of his childhood on Vulcan. So when a fellow crewmember begins flaunting his bigotry in increasingly violent encounters with the Commander, Spock intends to follow Starfleet protocol an resolve the conflict as professionally and quietly as possible. However, when he contacts the head of security, he finds that Chief Giotto shares the same xenphobic tendencies he trying to dissipate.

More details regarding the challenge can be found here:

Okay, so I hope this fits the bill. My first attempt at a multi-chaptered fic with an actual plot in YEARS! Please review, I love to hear what people think, it's very helpful when you're trying to improve your skills to hear feedback about what you're doing right or wrong. Thanks!

Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk-Spock Friendship, Kirk/Spock Pre-Slash, Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Action/Plot, Angst, First Time, Fluff, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): Bottom Kirk, Bottom Spock, Hurt Spock
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: Explicit violence
Challenges: Balance of Terror and Love
Series: Challenge Fics
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 45550 Read Count: 75551
[Report This] Published: 03/05/2012 Updated: 03/22/2012
Reviewer: ShadowRavin Signed
Date: 03/22/2012 Title: Chapter 9: The First Step Is Admitting You Have a Problem

I love it! You spell God, ghod, though and it is rather annoying.

Author's Response:

LOL. It's so you hear it right and I like ghod better than gawd, because it's all about the sound I'm trying to have the reader hear instead of just God. It's intended to sound more breathy and exasperated.Because typically, when I use it...someone is either moaning in esctasy or bemoaning their situation. Does that make sense? lol.


Either way, I'm very glad you like it and thank you for taking time to review :)

Too Young To Be In Charge by Echomur Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 23]
Summary: A response to ShadowRavin's "1De-Aged Enterprise please" challenge.

When Jim and Spock wake up as much younger versions of themselves, they set out to find out why not only they but the rest of the crew are not only younger, but without any idea of how they got there.

Warnings are for later chapters.
Categories: Fiction
Characters: Chekov, Chris Pike, McCoy, Original Character(s), Scott, Sulu, Uhura
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Action/Plot, Established Relationship, Humor, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): Bottom Kirk, Hurt Spock
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: Chan or underage sexuality, Explicit violence
Challenges: De-aged Enterprise
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9064 Read Count: 23407
[Report This] Published: 04/04/2012 Updated: 04/05/2012
Reviewer: ShadowRavin Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 04/04/2012 Title: Chapter 2: Captain On The Bridge?

*Squeal* This is awesome!

Author's Response: And I'm still working on it. :)

Reviewer: ShadowRavin Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 04/05/2012 Title: Chapter 8: How Could I Forget?

Not exactly what I was imagining when I wrote the challenge, but I loved it!

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. And if course I feel the need to inform you the my entire goal in writing is to do things that people just don't expect. (Doing them within certain predetermined parameters is even more entertaining. ^_^)