Penname: Elva Barr [Contact] Real name:
Member Since: 07/26/2009
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When Spock passes out on the bridge one day, McCoy and Kirk band together to help him through his crisis, no matter what.  They just wish they had known what to expect a little earlier.

Categories: Fiction
Characters: McCoy
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash, Polyamorous
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Erotica, First Time, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4612 Read Count: 6678
[Report This] Published: 03/17/2010 Updated: 03/18/2010
Reviewer: Elva Barr Signed
Date: 03/18/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

=( Formatting! There are no spaces; this is a little hard to read. Just a heads up that you may want to fix it, because the fic is great, but difficult for my eyes.

Author's Response:

I fixed the formatting, so hopefully your eyes will like it better.  I'm glad you enjoyed it, and I hope you'll like it better now.  Thanks for being my first reviewer!