Penname: Candystar [Contact] Real name: Candy
Member Since: 07/22/2009
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Erogenous Zone by Mirrorgirl Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary:

Spock does some research and surprises Kirk AND himself!


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Erotica
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: Bondage, Dominance/submission
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3784 Read Count: 9246
[Report This] Published: 03/02/2009 Updated: 03/02/2009
Reviewer: Candystar Signed
Date: 10/18/2009 Title: Chapter 1: 1

that was great MG!

Ascension by Starbuck Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 20]
Summary:

Spock has gone to Mount Seleya to complete the Kolinahr and left alone back on Earth, Kirk realises just how much the Vulcan means to him. He then undertakes a long and arduous journey to find Spock and bring him back so that they can find their true destinies together. But will he be too late to save him?


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Character Study
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 22295 Read Count: 16265
[Report This] Published: 05/01/2010 Updated: 05/16/2010
Reviewer: Candystar Signed
Date: 05/06/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

cant wait to see the new changes you made in the rest of it!

The Proximity Effect by Mirrorgirl Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary: AU in which Surak’s Reformation has never taken place on Vulcan, and slavery is still practised. Dark forces are plotting against Vulcan and Kirk and Spock are caught in a maelstrom of political intrigue.
Categories: Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: K/S plus K/other or S/other
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Action/Plot, First Time
Trope (OPTIONAL): Slave fic
Universe: AU Alternate Universe
Warnings: Bondage, Dominance/submission, Dubious consent, Non-consensual sex
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 37435 Read Count: 8130
[Report This] Published: 05/11/2010 Updated: 05/11/2010
Reviewer: Candystar Signed
Date: 05/12/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

awesome story Mgirl! sounds like you're setting it up for a sequel.....?

"tries not to make puppy dog eyes"

screw it!

"makes puppy dog eyes/whimpers"



Author's Response: No worries Candy, there is indeed a sequel in the offing, with more intrigue and action and sexy times ;)

Summary:

Uhura has a chocolate fondue party and invites her friends. Spock shows up last minute and is alone with the chocolate.  He then takes the chocolate to Jim's quarters to share.


Categories: Works in Progress
Characters: McCoy, Original Character(s)
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Pre-Slash, Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: First Time, Humor
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: Kink
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 14692 Read Count: 30927
[Report This] Published: 09/04/2010 Updated: 04/24/2015
Reviewer: Candystar Signed
Date: 11/09/2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

LMAO i was half-thinking that he'd throw that lasanga at bones if he didnt shut up soon!

nice canon nod to the generations movie with kirk cooking!

Author's Response:

Thanks Meri...but it I was thinking of Star Trek IV...

You guys like Italian?

No.

Yes.

No.

Yes. I love Italian. And so do you...(Remember lol)

Yes.

 

Reviewer: Candystar Signed
Date: 11/10/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

LMAO!! good one!

The Gifts by Dahliaxat Rated: Mature Content (Teen) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 26]
Summary:

A different version of Wrath of Khan. Spock has a second gift to give Jim. The universe decides to give them both another.


Categories: Works in Progress
Characters: Carol Marcus, Chekov
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk-Spock Friendship, Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Angst, Character Study, First Time
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: AU Alternate Universe, ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3806 Read Count: 8465
[Report This] Published: 11/01/2010 Updated: 05/14/2015
Reviewer: Candystar Signed
Date: 12/02/2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

wow denise! you're writing is getting better!

great story to.

Author's Response:

Thanks my friend. I updated my chapter...let me know what you think. 

Prometheus Coda by Mirrorgirl Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 8]
Summary: Kirk and Spock discover their personal 'final frontier'
Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Erotica, First Time
Trope (OPTIONAL): Bottom Kirk
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: Dominance/submission
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2448 Read Count: 4735
[Report This] Published: 11/04/2010 Updated: 11/04/2010
Reviewer: Candystar Signed
Date: 11/07/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

ooo another fine piece of writing! nice to see one of us getting back into it.

Author's Response: Thanks Candy, I'm sure we'll see more from you too shortly :)

I Burn For Thee by Dahliaxat Rated: All Audiences starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

 

Spock is prepared to fight Jim in his frenzied state.  But now does he really want to? What Spock thinks before they commence the fight to the death.


Categories: Poetry
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Pre-Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Erotica
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 66 Read Count: 6429
[Report This] Published: 11/28/2010 Updated: 11/28/2010
Reviewer: Candystar Signed
Date: 11/28/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

WOW! when did this happen, posting pics into our stories? COOL!

a great description of spock's feelings too!

Author's Response:

I know ain't it cool..I just copied and paste and it copied the pic..freaked me out too...I hope it's ok...no has complained and it makes people read it because of the pic...I think anyway...thanks for commenting...

What My Heart Desires by Dahliaxat Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 58]
Summary:

After the events of Spock's aborted marriage, he begins to be more drawn to the captain than before. Their friendship had been the glue that cemented their friendship and made them the most envious team in Starfleet.

But something happened during that exchange on that dry planet of Spock's birth. Something that has now also affected Jim in the process.

But deep down buried in Jim's past is something he never wished to reveal, now it seems he has no choice.


Categories: Works in Progress
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: K/S plus K/other or S/other, Kirk-Spock Friendship, Kirk/Spock Pre-Slash, Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Action/Plot, Angst, Character Study, First Time, Hurt/Comfort
Trope (OPTIONAL): Hurt Kirk
Universe: AU Alternate Universe, ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: Abuse, Chan or underage sexuality, Explicit violence, Non-consensual sex, Rape
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 15625 Read Count: 24232
[Report This] Published: 10/29/2011 Updated: 11/06/2014
Reviewer: Candystar Signed
Date: 09/06/2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

alright this is pretty much all cleaned up now. we've gone through it before & your writing is so much better technically now :D

just the one thing here really:

McCoy looked at his friend and had a strange feeling.

"""""""Hello Jim. I'm packed and ready to paint the town red. I've planned our whole itinerary. We are going to have so much fun." McCoy's voice dripping with glee."""""


since its all bones..it can all be one paragraph.

Reviewer: Candystar Signed
Date: 09/06/2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

ok this one has about three or four questions asked...but no ? at the end.

""""Do you so easily forget what you told me, what you told my guards."""""

""""How can you stay here in your secluded environment, away from the people that lie dead in the streets by your hands and now want to have sex with me."""""

"""""""Why would you think that my child. """""

""""""How would Spock react to that."""""

"""What if he rejects me."""

""""What if he founds me disgusting, vile and turns away."""

""""What if he won't want to work with me.""""

"""""My, my, aren't we in a chipper mood.""""

"""""""Now that would be difficult now would it.""""

"""""Besides, why should I when I have my little sex toy in front of me.""""

""""""Am I now.""""

""""""Oh, he said that did he."""

"""""Who is worrying."""""


ok all those need ? at the end not .'s

Reviewer: Candystar Signed
Date: 09/06/2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

"""It was late evening when Jim was thinking about his brothers visit.""""

should be "brother's"

""""When are your sick games going to end Kodos."""

should be ? at the end.

Reviewer: Candystar Signed
Date: 09/06/2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

""""Have you heard of slash fiction James.""""

needs a ? here. also slash is written by men as well...some gay ....some straight. though it is mostly by fems lol & slash is gay....like m/m or f/f...not just male. so you might want to tweak that explanation just a little.

My Personal YeoMAN by Dahliaxat Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 9]
Summary:

The captain of the Enterprise is running out of time. His marriage contract is almost up.

Will he renew that contract? All of it depends on his husband who can't accept the fact that he was betrayed.

What he saw was an evil man with his husband's face. Yeoman Rand is no longer Jim's personal yeoman.

Now, Jim needs to fight for this marriage, or will this new yeoman his CMO has hired end his marriage for sure.

 

 


Categories: Works in Progress
Characters: Gary Mitchell
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: K/S plus K/other or S/other, Kirk-Spock Friendship, Kirk/Spock Pre-Slash, Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Action/Plot, Angst, Character Study, Established Relationship, First Time, Hurt/Comfort
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: AU Alternate Universe, ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2585 Read Count: 3045
[Report This] Published: 10/30/2011 Updated: 12/03/2011
Reviewer: Candystar Signed
Date: 11/07/2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

i finally got to read it! we need more K/G before K/S! looking good!

Reviewer: Candystar Signed
Date: 12/24/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

ok i FINALLY get to beta this! this first chatper is great except for one very long space in a line. not your fault but probably the computer formate screwed it up. see this paragraph:

She never did press charges, but she left. She no longer could stay and work on the Enterprise. The constant looks, the gossip, was never ending. It was for the best for everyone involved; (see this long space here maybe try to fix?) the damage was done.

Reviewer: Candystar Signed
Date: 12/24/2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

another good piece that doesnt need much fixing. just this:

"Me. What do I know about finding a male yeoman. I'm a doctor, not your personal adverstisement logo."

should be:

"Me? What do I know about finding a male yeoman? I'm a doctor, not your personal ADVERTISMENT logo."

Reviewer: Candystar Signed
Date: 12/24/2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

alright pretty good here.

a couple things need to be re-word to make it more more smooth

Jim hoping that his his lover will forgive him, enters, and door closes seconds later. (Hoping that his lover would forgive him, Jim entered and the door closed seconds later.)

Gary started (stared) out into space, not really looking at anything.

What? Never. I would never hurt you Gar. (Gary) ... "


"But, I thought. We (thought we) could come to some sort of understanding."

anyway hope you update this soon! we need more gary/kirk stuff!

Star Trek: The K/S Canon Facts by Candystar Rated: All Audiences Round robin starstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 3]
Summary: This is under Essay for a reason. Not a story but an episode-by-episode summary of ST:TOS/TAS. I am attempting to put down any & all Kirk/Spock hints I can find.

Besides that, these summaries were originally started after several discussions/arguments on other message boards (such as IMDb or StarTrek.com) for & against Kirk/Spock vs other pairings (K/U or S/U for eg) as well as the new cast vs. the old, so I'll be sorting that mess out as well.

Each episode essay is divided into Regular Review & K/S review, since some of the public are not into K/S (bare in mind: originally posted on IMDb & other message boards last year) & I'm too lazy to change the format. (Also, those of us here can easily just skip to the second half for K/S references.)

I have actually managed to convert a few non-K/S believers with what I had already done in the past so feel free to use any of the K/S bits to attract more. :P

I had posted this a long time ago, as a W.I.P. but never got back to it due to complications with my Grandmother, the one who got me into Heroes & Zachary Quinto in the first place, so I took time off of Star Trek to spend time with her.

She has since died which was expected, due to several cancers from lung to bone.

What was NOT expected however, was the deaths of half my immediate family throughout this past year, starting with Nana.

This is why I have not been back to finish this or post up my long overdue promised "Possession". If I had known that, man or beast, the Grim Reaper had it in for my family this year, I probably wouldn't have started anything at all this past year. Besides my Grandmother, we lost one of our 5 dogs, Kesha a Black Lab. My rabbit got killed. Finally (I hope) a few weeks ago we had a major car crash no survivors & leaving two of my under-age cousins orphaned & goverment property due to very strange Quebec laws.

Needless to say, I've not had a good year.

I'm just starting to get back into writing again. I've deleted the old Essay since I have done a major overhaul of all the episodes I've done, plus went through a few more.

So, here's hoping that I actually have a chance to continue. I don't have much of my main family left but hopefully I'll be stuck with them for a while after this year >_
Categories: Fiction, Essays, Works in Progress
Characters: Original Character(s)
Crossover Fandom: ST:TOS Original Universe, ST:XI Abrams Universe
Genres: Kirk-Spock Friendship, Kirk/Spock Pre-Slash, Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Character Study, Established Relationship, First Time
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe, Abrams Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 22132 Read Count: 138371
[Report This] Published: 11/11/2011 Updated: 11/11/2011
Reviewer: Candystar Signed
Date: 11/11/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Speaking of format changing, uploading here has erased my bolded & italisized formatting. I don't remember how to re-formate in here...or if it's even possible now. hmm...oh well.

A Very Complicated Man by Dahliaxat Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 26]
Summary:

This story takes place after the events of the Scalosians departure. The Captain's time with the queen of Scalos, the lovely Deela, was intimate but brief.

Spock has always felt a connection with his superior officer. He defines it as friendship. But there are times when the need to be more than friends becomes more pronounced. But the captain, has always been a 'ladies man', and is well known to love them and leave them.

But still Spock is drawn to his friend's magnetism, his charm and can't seem to shake off the need in himself. But would Jim, if interested, leave him as well?

COMPLETE


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk-Spock Friendship, Kirk/Spock Pre-Slash, Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Angst, Character Study, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6728 Read Count: 17158
[Report This] Published: 11/12/2011 Updated: 12/26/2011
Reviewer: Candystar Signed
Date: 12/24/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

LMAO love how blunt spock is & the spelling & word flow is great! you're getting it girl!

Reviewer: Candystar Signed
Date: 12/24/2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

LMAO love this one!

Eye-Sex At Any Age by Dahliaxat Rated: Mature Content (Teen) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 10]
Summary:

Jim and Spock take a break, whispering sweet nothings in a dark, secluded corner of the Enterprise.


Categories: Ficlets
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Erotica, Established Relationship
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 235 Read Count: 1390
[Report This] Published: 06/12/2012 Updated: 06/12/2012
Reviewer: Candystar Signed
Date: 06/21/2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

wow you're writing is so much better & i love the pics!

nice naughty little story.

Author's Response:

Thanks my friend, Glad you liked it. Thanks for the review.