Penname: Raven Knight [Contact] Real name:
Member Since: 02/13/2011
Membership status: Member
Bio:

I've lurked for so long on this archive, I decided that it was time to emerge from the shadows.


I'll certainly get to reviewing some of the fantastic things I've read once or twice, and then the ones I've read a whole lot of times!  It will take a while.  I owe a ton of reviews!

Also, a big thank you to anyone who reads what I write and is kind enough to review.  It means a great deal to me. 


~ RK


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Accidentally in Love by CMM Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 503]
Summary:

DONE!!!!!

Since I did a pregnant Spock, it only seems fair that Jim get equal time. This is an answer to KrazieKat2009's Baby Maker challenge, which goes like this:

Summary: Features preggers!Kirk. I would like for Spock to still be in a relationship with Uhura at start of story. And Jim has secretly been in love with his First Officer for the past year. No one knows of his attraction to Spock, not even Bones. (Though he can be suspicious if you want). During a scout out on a once technologically advanced planet, Spock and Kirk stumble across an old, left behind piece of technology. The technology feeds off of emotional energy to create new life; it senses Jim's utmost desires to be with Spock, and so it activates and causes Jim to be impregnated, with Spock as his child's DNA "donor". Neither Jim or Spock are aware that Jim has been impregnated at first, but soon they become aware. Another side effect of the machine is that it causes the pregnant person to become more dependent on the one s/he has feelings for, so Jim's attraction magnifies, and it takes all he can not to let Spock find out. BONUS POINTS: If Spock, at first, wants nothing to do with the baby because he is with Uhura, but his paternal instincts start to kick in and his attraction to Kirk grows intensely. BONUS POINTS: If Uhura turns out to be mature in the end and wants Spock and Kirk to be together.SUPER BONUS POINTS: Spock becomes possessive over pregnant!Kirk, and finds his pregnant Captain sexually tempting, and gets aroused constantly when near Kirk. MEGA SUPER POINTS: There is eventual (lot of) pregnant sex, and Kirk is a "virgin" when it comes to men. TROPE: Bottom!Jim

Whew! I don't know if I can get all that into one story, but I'll do my best. I'll try to have a chapter up every day or two. Enjoy.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: McCoy, Scott, Sulu, Uhura
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Pre-Slash, Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Angst, Character Study, Erotica, First Time, Humor, Hurt/Comfort, MPREG, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): Bottom Kirk
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: None
Challenges: Baby Maker
Series: Answered Challenges, The DVAS
Chapters: 44 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 107474 Read Count: 1377096
[Report This] Published: 03/25/2011 Updated: 04/21/2011
Reviewer: Raven Knight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/08/2011 Title: Chapter 23: Two Out of Three Ain't Bad

Aww, I love Jim's reason for loving Selik.  That's too...lovely. 

Oh my!  T'solin drinking coffee with McCoy.  THis is far too much fun they are getting along.  I think McCoy will be sad when this Healer leaves.  He'll have no one fun to hang out with while Jim and Spock set up house on the ship.  Bones was awesome throughout this whole chapter.  The gagging noises.  *cackles* 

Oh, oh wait!  *shoots confetti cannons everywhere!!!*  TRIPLETS!?  *SQUEES!*  Love that Spock fainted!  I think I stopped breathing for a few seconds at the news!  This is so exciting!  Poor Jim and his self-image.  He'll hate mirrors soon.  Loved this chapter! ~ RK

Reviewer: Raven Knight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/08/2011 Title: Chapter 24: Fat-Bottomed Girls (or Guys)

The adorableness of Jim cuddling Spock post-fainting spell was made hilarious by Bones's interjections.  Oh dear, bed rest for Jim?  He will be so unhappy and restless, won't he?  Again, love T'solin.  He's so witty it's hilarious. 

I feel a little bad for Nyota, but it was going to happen anyway. 

*sigh* Spock...That was the perfect gesture he could have made to acknowledge Jim's feelings for Selik.  It seems like he's made peace with it, too, if the echo of what Jim said before is any indication.  I just love this story!  ~ RK

Reviewer: Raven Knight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/08/2011 Title: Chapter 25: You've Got a Friend

Well, this is fascinating with T'solin and Uhura.  I'm still so nervous about this Clan Meeting thing.  Off to the next chapter.  ~ RK

Reviewer: Raven Knight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/08/2011 Title: Chapter 26: And There is Love

Selik!  You pimp!  *cackles insanely*  And it's all oh so logical (including the sperm bank)!  He's just awesome in this.  Speaking of awesome, your T'Pau is awesome!  I'm glad Nyota came to the bonding.  And I wonder who arranged for Winona to see it.  Whoever thought of that...yay!  Spock converting Jim the Baptist.  Good chapter.  I'll try not to be away so long next time.  Maybe I won't have to make up for all the missed reviews I owe.  Hopefully I won't be so bad next time!  Love this story.  ~ RK



Author's Response:

Thanks for all the reviews. I'm glad you're enjoying the story.I'm having a lot of fun with it (and the fun's not over yet).

Reviewer: Raven Knight Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 04/12/2011 Title: Chapter 30: The Name Game

(A few chapters in one review here.  Sorry if that's considered cheating.)  The way you write drunk Spock is always entertaining, especially when he mixes up his words.  Yay to him getting along with Bones, even if drunken discussions bring it about.  Jim is a great bondmate.  (But I do agree with his refusal to be sequestered while pregnant.  Though Bones was right in both of them being alpha males.  What a pair they make.)  THe names for the girls are interesting, and they seem to approve of their own names!  That's so cute. 

However, my favorite thing here is what's going on with T'solin.  (Now, Bones has a buddy with whom to team up against Jim and Spock!  He'll be sad if T'solin ever leaves.)  This could prove to be incredibly interesting with Nyota....very interesting indeed. 

Lastly, "Like Nero..."  OH NO!  This could be disastrous!  Looking forward to more! ~ RK

Reviewer: Raven Knight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/14/2011 Title: Chapter 34: Under Pressure

Aww, Spock is trying so hard to be a good bondmate.  And hopefully with his discussion, Jim might be a little more willing to take it easier.  He is living for five, now.  Talk about responsibility!  Very excited about the developments going on with T'solin and Nyota right now, too.  I'm glad she's feeling a little more secure and having a different outlook about this whole situation in order to put herself into such a serious relationship again.  Now Bones just needs to find someone...Hmmm... ~ RK



Author's Response:

Eveerybody keeps pushing for me to find somebody for poor Bones, lol.

Reviewer: Raven Knight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/20/2011 Title: Chapter 43: Dirty Deeds Done Dirt Cheap

Once again I leave for a bit and massive updates happen!  Loved all of the chapters!!!  The babies arrived, and they're all so cute!  Spock will have grey hair from that little giggler.  Baby Selik is my favorite of the bunch.  And Nogura's punishment there is absolutely amazing.  Justice, indeed... "T'Pau's personal bitch."  Haha!  I felt so sorry for Bones and was wondering how he'll be all lonely and depressed, but then...I kid you not, I flailed like Kermit the Frog at the last scene!  Flailed and squeed all at once!  I'm so sad it's near the end, but I am in love with this story! ~ RK

Reviewer: Raven Knight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/23/2011 Title: Chapter 44: Get Right Back to Where We Started From

I'm sad to see this story end, but loved every chapter!  My, my, there are all sorts of little half-Vulcans running around that ship isn't there?  (Best sentence of the whole thing for me: "Spock had taken great satisfaction in informing Bones that he now had his very own set of hobgoblins."  I can just imagine Bones's face...pretending to be all grumpy, but unable to stop the grinning...)  Little Selik is still my favorite of the three, though Lena...look out! Bossy!, and Lalia is just too adorable for words.  Makes me wonder if impish Jim would have been something like that?  A silly little brain...(Maybe I'm thinking of the Prime Universe, though.  Either way!) Sad to see it finished...but there is hope for little snapshot ficlets (*watery eyes*) with that ending!!  Jim, what a family man.  Glad he asked Spock this time though.  Okay, done.  Fantastic, enjoyable, and just wonderful story! ~ RK



Author's Response:

Very glad you liked it. There will be at least one sequel, just not as long as this.

T'Lira the Matriarch by CMM Rated: Mature Content (Teen) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 23]
Summary:

Jim and Spock's pointy-eared baby goes to New Vulcan for a family reunion.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: McCoy
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Established Relationship, Humor
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: None
Series: Spock's Baby Daddy
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2909 Read Count: 9389
[Report This] Published: 04/11/2011 Updated: 04/11/2011
Reviewer: Raven Knight Signed
Date: 04/12/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

T'Lira with T'Pau was the most precious thing ever.  Even she couldn't dislike her.  Loved Jim's logic of the whole family tradition of defiance.  Definitely accurate.  And Spock's dream?  Proud sa-mekh indeed.  ~ RK

Summary:

What it says on the tin.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Pre-Slash, Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Angst, Humor, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2627 Read Count: 10154
[Report This] Published: 04/22/2011 Updated: 04/22/2011
Reviewer: Raven Knight Signed
Date: 04/22/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was adorable.  Jim was just getting more and more depressed, and Spock was just getting more and more frustrated.  Aww to the two of them, and yay to Spock for refusing to be distracted in the end.  Just say, "no," Spock.  Adorable story.  Great job! ~ RK

Initial Impressions by Raven Knight Rated: All Audiences starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 9]
Summary:

Relationships begin to develop among the crew of the Enterprise after the arrival of two additions to the medical staff, while everyone works together to try to solve the mystery of the strange noise heard all throughout the piping on the ship.

Follows "Acts of Mercy."  Third in the Metamorphosis to T'hy'la series. 


Categories: Fiction
Characters: McCoy, Scott
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Pre-Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Character Study, Humor, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: None
Series: Metamorphosis to T'hy'la
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12443 Read Count: 6622
[Report This] Published: 04/25/2011 Updated: 04/25/2011
Reviewer: Raven Knight Signed
Date: 05/18/2012 Title: Chapter 1: Initial Impressions

To Spirk-Fangirl, I'm sorry for the non-response there.  I was having issues with my account and the site.  Hopefully, it is fixed now.  (It seems to be. Yay!) What I meant to say in the response was, "Thank you for reviewing!  I'm glad you thought Spock was cute in it!  Hope to hear from you again when I next update, maybe.  Thanks!"  Hopefully, this remedies it.  Thanks! ~ RK

Numb by Dahliaxat Rated: All Audiences starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

Spock is dead, and Jim feels nothing anymore.


Categories: Poetry
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk-Spock Friendship, Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Angst, Character Study, Established Relationship
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: Major character death
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 75 Read Count: 5095
[Report This] Published: 12/31/2011 Updated: 03/01/2015
Reviewer: Raven Knight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/01/2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I haven't even wanted to touch this film yet.  I'm not ready.  But this scene - and Mr. Shatner's reaction in it - has always left me in tears, now more than ever.  ~ RK



Author's Response:

I understand. Thanks for reading.

Summary:

Not as cracky as the title implies:

Tribble!Kirk Challenge:

So I saw the summary for this story by eclipse, and then I thought of the manga Karneval, and then I thought, I want Tribble!Kirk! I know there's an actual (awesome) story with Jim and Spock as tribbles, but this is different. I want a real tribble to have been genetically engineered (or magically) to be a human being... named Jim Kirk. The reason he's male is because his creators didn't want him getting pregnant... but it doesn't work! I want Jim still adjusting to life as a human (whether he remembers being a tribble or not is up to you), with tribble-like behaviors and of course, mpreg!

Bonus points Abrams verse. Bonus points for very, very few people knowing he was a tribble (maybe Pike and Bones only? Maybe Spoke Prime doesn't even know?). Bonus, bonus points for Spock being very, very confused by illogical tribble!Kirk (and of course being unable to resist him ^_~)

My first attempt at an mpreg...though, not exactly what I thought my first mpreg would be about...


Categories: Works in Progress
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk-Spock Friendship, Kirk/Spock Pre-Slash, Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: First Time, Humor, Hurt/Comfort, MPREG, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): Bottom Kirk, Bottom Spock
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: None
Challenges: Tribble!Kirk
Series: Challenge Fics
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 53976 Read Count: 64912
[Report This] Published: 06/18/2012 Updated: 08/14/2013
Reviewer: Raven Knight Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 06/19/2012 Title: Chapter 1: Of Peanut Allergies and Dr. Frankenstein

Ooh!  When Spock and Kirk finally... *cough* get busy, will there be Vulcan purring and Tribble...um...tribbling?  That'd be awesomely cute beyond words.  Not to mention seriously awkward for Bones to witness.  Very curious to what happens next! ~ RK



Author's Response:

*giggle* I'm gonna have so much fun with the trilling! And the weird route to reproduction! And I may even throw in some nods to TOS...I'm having a lot of fun thinking of things to make Tribble!Kirk cute and socially awkward, but still the same kick ass captain we all know and love, lol.

Reviewer: Raven Knight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/26/2013 Title: Chapter 15: The Big Reveal

"...the genetics of each and every five peanut-sized fetus currently growing inside of him."  Does that mean five little TribKirk/Spocks are about to happen?  Holy moly!  Good luck, Spock...and Jim, of course.

 

Well, this is just getting better and better.  Love this!



Author's Response:

Lol. Yes, bahahahahah. I've decided that a litter is really the only thing that makes sense...

I'm glad you're enjoying and YES, I want to see that update to the series you kn



Author's Response:

Lol. Yes, bahahahahah. I've decided that a litter is really the only thing that makes sense...

I'm glad you're enjoying and YES, I want to see that update to the series you know I love the most.

Reviewer: Raven Knight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/14/2013 Title: Chapter 19: Jim Get a Turn, and Sex Doesn't Fix Everything, but it's a Start...

This is just such an awesome story!  So bizarrely creative that I complusively have to check for it once in a while.  (And is the cover-art new?  It is adorable!  Jim snuggling the tribbles.  D'aww!)  This is, again, awesome!  I'm sorry that I am a terrible reviewer!  Looking forward to more! ~ RK



Author's Response:

Lol, its fine. Yes the art is new, by my good friend Spock2u. I'm glad you like the story. Its my baby, and nothing has been the same since I started it lololol

Diplomatic Relations by CMM Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 382]
Summary:

This is in response to Juni's Tudors Style challenge. At the request of readers who apparently find it ackward to scroll through, I am deleting the actual challenge, so you'll have to go look it up if you're curious.

 


Categories: Works in Progress
Characters: McCoy, Original Character(s), Sarek, Stonn, Sulu, T'Pring
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Pre-Slash, Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Action/Plot, Character Study, Erotica, First Time, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: AU Alternate Universe
Warnings: None
Challenges: Tudors Style
Series: Answered Challenges
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 64031 Read Count: 103530
[Report This] Published: 07/07/2012 Updated: 02/10/2014
Reviewer: Raven Knight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/09/2013 Title: Chapter 1: The Needs of the Many

Holy Surak, did I just...MISS THIS!?!?!?  Wow! *head wall*  And look what I've been missing!  Aside from "What to Expect..." this one of yours shot to the lead as my favorite from you!  Fantastic!  Absolutely fantastic!  My goodness.  Don't know how you come up with so much material so quickly and so many unexpectedly amazing cliffies and twists!  But by all means, keep them coming! Will be keeping my little eyeballs vigilantly peeled for this one now that I found it! Better late than never, right?

For the Love of a Child by CMM Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 398]
Summary:

This is a reponse to Samantha-Kathy's challenge (and apparently Manganra has a similar one as well): Spock Prime Raises Kirk. Spock goes through the wormhole after Nero, but the Kelvin destroys Nero and his ship, being destroyed in the process. Baby Jim is orphaned, and a mysterious Vulcan named Selik adopts him. Vulcan isn't destroyed, and Selik raises Jim there, so Jim knows more about Vulcans than many humans do. He also has some mind powers--and he joins Starfleet and meets a certain Vulcan named Spock.

 


Categories: Works in Progress
Characters: Amanda, Original Character(s), Sarek
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk-Spock Friendship, Kirk/Spock Pre-Slash, Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Character Study, Established Relationship, First Time, Humor, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: AU Alternate Universe, Abrams Universe
Warnings: None
Challenges: Spock Prime raises Kirk
Series: Answered Challenges
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 42491 Read Count: 233942
[Report This] Published: 09/12/2012 Updated: 07/22/2017
Reviewer: Raven Knight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/23/2013 Title: Chapter 7: No Path is Completely Smooth

Had been going through your stories the other day and thought about this one, "Hmm, I hope this one gets an update soon.  This is a good/cute one."  And lo! and behold!  Here it is!  Adorableness all around with Jim, but the sudden interest in him from Frank is making me nervous... ~ RK

Reviewer: Raven Knight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/10/2013 Title: Chapter 8: Desperate Times

Poor confused Jim.  Poor distraught Selik.  And oh boy, Sarek might just faint from this meld.  I wonder if Selik will go so open as to announce the t'hy'la thing to Sarek.  What a thing that would be to find out.  The son-but-not-quite-his-son is raising his actual still-a-baby son's future destine-to-be bondmate!  Wow.  Yeah, my bet that Sarek will faint and then be all ambassador in business mode, watch out Frank attitude.  This is awesome. ~ RK

The Hidden Prince by yulie1022 Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 11]
Summary:

AU, Slight Beauty and the Beast plot. James T. Kirk has landed on a planet that is strange to him. He remembers very few things after his crash, but one thing he does remember is that he doesnt belong there. Sarek is interested in him, as a companion for his isolated son. Spock does not care or show much intrest in Jim at first, but circumstances and events transpire that lead the two to were they had never gone before.


Categories: Works in Progress
Characters: Sarek
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Erotica, First Time, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: AU Alternate Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3428 Read Count: 2345
[Report This] Published: 11/27/2012 Updated: 11/29/2012
Reviewer: Raven Knight Signed
Date: 11/28/2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This could be very promising, indeed.  I'm holding back on star-rating this until I see a little bit more from it.  But it is a good starting point.  I'm assuming that the crash-landing here is Jim, and the crash that was mentioned was Amanda?  It would maybe be an interesting opportunity for Sarek to recognize history as potentially repeating itself with Jim's crash landing to his own wife's, giving him the reason for playing matchmaker?  Just a thought.  Also, be careful in your use of manner vs. manor.  The latter of which means "estate or home."  Other than that, this has promise.  Keep going!

The Twelve Hours of Christmas by Echomur Rated: Mature Content (Teen) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 16]
Summary:

Spock asks Jim what his favorite holiday celebration is.  Jim answers Twelvetide, but is unable to explain further.  Spock takes it upon himself to research it, and comes up with a Vulcan mistranslation calling it 'The Twelve Hours of Christmas'.  When he starts sending Jim gifts on the hour, hilarity ensues.

For K/S Advent 2012


Categories: Fiction
Characters: Chapel, Chekov, McCoy, Sulu
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Pre-Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Humor, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4843 Read Count: 2326
[Report This] Published: 12/13/2012 Updated: 12/13/2012
Reviewer: Raven Knight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/13/2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

D'awww...Love Spock's insecurity and confusion at stressing Jim out.  Love his misranslation, too.  This is awesomely adorable! :) ~ RK