Reviewer: lazulisong Signed
Chapter 1: Having My Baby
Okay, I was playing along til Winona showed up again, but I am going to be blunt and say I do not like the way you're portraying her. It's stupid. There is no basis in canon --either canon -- for her to be such a raving bitch. Believe me when I say YOU DO NOT NEED TO HAVE A SHITTY CHILDHOOD TO BE AN ASSHOLE. JIm could have had the world's best childhood and still ended up a dick.
You and the rest of the fandom make me feel shame every time you portray Winona like this. She is a human being. Human beings make mistakes. Did not chose to wear black and devote her entire life to raising George's son =/= horrible person.
Kindly do some actual research on abuse and family dynamics before you use it for cheap angst.Author's Response:
Well, I'm sorry you don't like it, but I'm not using it for cheap angst, AND she's a fictional character and not one we know much about, so I'm afraid I can portray her any way I want. And I don't think Jim is a dick. I think he has emotional issues.
If you don't like my story, there are many others in this archive you can choose from, or you can write your own. Good luck.