Reviewer: Jeanne Marie Sosa Signed 



Date: 08/27/2011
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Whoa! This is probably one of the MOST extraordianry and absolutely HOT stories I've read in a long, long time, and having been into this fandom for the past four years, I've surely read close to 1,000! I love the analingus scene, perfectly drawn, exquisitely narrated, and WOW! This is such a sweet and wonderful read! I also read The Prometheus Design, have read it several times and loved it plenty! And I, too, noted the subtextual slashiness, so glad you extended that portion and created this marvelous story based on what you perceived....thank you for posting it, very enjoyable. The Designers surely deserve at least a litle bit of the credit, just as you note at the story's conclusion....well, well done! (PS, I actually have a CGA manip that very nicely shows some of that kind of very beautiful and extremely erotic action that you describe here at the beginning of the story...)
Author's Response: Wow, thanks for such a lovely review, so glad you enjoyed it :)