Penname: GwenaTerra [Contact] Real name: Meg
Member Since: 05/31/2009
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Sacrifice by Raythe Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 72]
Summary:

Set soon after the end of 2009 Abrams’ movie. A new home for the Vulcan people has been found, but it is a planet owned by the Cerberus Corporation, a shadowy organization run by a man, Damascus Raine, whose advances James T. Kirk rejected when only a teen. In order for the Vulcans to get their new planet, Kirk must give himself to Raine. Will Spock allow Kirk to make such a sacrifice?


Categories: Works in Progress
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: AU or Mirror Universe, ST:XI Abrams Universe
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Action/Plot, Angst, Erotica, First Time, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: AU Alternate Universe, Abrams Universe
Warnings: Bondage, Chan or underage sexuality, Dominance/submission, Explicit violence, Non-consensual sex
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 34082 Read Count: 37988
[Report This] Published: 05/27/2009 Updated: 12/17/2009
Reviewer: GwenaTerra Signed
Date: 06/09/2009 Title: Chapter 4: Heavy Price Paid

Yea! You updated. I kinda like this possessive Spock we have going on here. And it's nice to know that it's not all OMG Kirks looks sexy or something. Its different and I like it.



Author's Response: Thank you for the feedback! While Kirk is sexy that is not the point of this piece. I focus on the story and character development. I'm glad you're enjoying it! Thanks again!

Reviewer: GwenaTerra Signed
Date: 06/18/2009 Title: Chapter 5: Normal Between Them

W00T! You updated. I love reading this story. I wish you could update this story more often. I find very few problems with it and for once I don't mind the whole stumbling and akward confessions of love these two usually have. I like how Bones is being potrayed too, he's being the best friend that he is to Jim and making sure nothing bad befalls upon him. Spock is not as anxious as he usually seems too and it'll be interesting to read when he finally does let himself loose passionately with Jim. Thanks for updating again.



Author's Response: Thank you so much! Wow, this is a great review. I like to focus on outside events coming inbetween lovers rather than internal stuff as I find it more fits with my desire to show fated love. Bones is a thrill to write. I enjoy him so much and I'm glad he is coming out so well in your opinion. I'm already writing the next chapter. Thanks again!

Reviewer: GwenaTerra Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/25/2009 Title: Chapter 6: Enter the Villain

Ah no. Wonderful chapter. Just don't like the fact that this guy is still living. Been watching the sight for when you updated this. Love the story and how it's going so far FYI.



Author's Response: Thanks for the continued feedback. Yeah, it was quite a difficult chapter to write and I know I left it very angsty! If I weren't so burnt on writing right now I'd be writing the next chapter already to assuage my own feelings!

Summary:

The story of Jim Kirk's life aboard the Enterprise and his relationship with Spock in five words - vitaya, t'hy'vaj, t'zaled, t'hy'la, and p'pil'la'ai.  TOS, xi influences; mild K/S; character death.  Spoilers for TOS episode "The Menagerie."


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk-Spock Friendship, Kirk/Spock Pre-Slash, Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Character Study, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe, Abrams Universe
Warnings: Major character death
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2830 Read Count: 13695
[Report This] Published: 06/06/2009 Updated: 06/06/2009
Reviewer: GwenaTerra Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/07/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Four Vulcan Words Spock Taught to Captain James T. Kirk (and the One He Didn't)

Oh that was so cute. I loved the ending of that.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I'm glad to know that you enjoyed it, especially the ending.

Tucking the Captain in by RaMar Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 29]
Summary:

After defeating Nero, the Enterprise is returning to Star Base on impulse power. McCoy wants Jim to sleep before he falls on his face, so he enlists Spock's help. Where will "Goldilocks" sleep? 9/24/09 A/N: I have re-edited Chapters 1 - 3 and added Chapters 4 and 5 that had originally been the sequel "And When They Woke Up". They really are part of the continuing story; and have also been re-edited. 


Categories: Fiction
Characters: McCoy
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Hurt/Comfort
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14032 Read Count: 37347
[Report This] Published: 06/10/2009 Updated: 09/25/2009
Reviewer: GwenaTerra Signed
Date: 06/10/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Like the idea of the story, logically (no spock/vulcan pun intended) a captain would be exhausted after an event such as that. And with him being the captain most likely the man is thinking of everyone else but himself first so it would be understandable for the two men to do what they do.



Author's Response:

Thank you for your comments. The nice thing about Star Trek is that the humans are very much normal people physically called on to do extraordinary things. And it is 'logical' for them to reach the end of their endurance once the crisis was over. Jim certainly took his share of punishment in this movie. Spock said in an episode of TOS to Captain Kirk...he cannot afford to be anything less than perfect in the eyes of his crew. So here is another instance where the "Captain" ignores his own pain and exhaustion to be a good role model for his crew. However, his body overruled his mind and I got to write a story about Jim Kirk falling asleep in the Captain's chair.

Love in Pieces by silvertoekee Rated: All Audiences starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 12]
Summary:

Love doesn’t always form easily sometimes it comes in bits and pieces.


Categories: Works in Progress
Characters: Chapel, Chekov, McCoy, Original Character(s), Sarek, Scott, Sulu, Uhura
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Angst, Humor, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: AU Alternate Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 31247 Read Count: 188846
[Report This] Published: 06/11/2009 Updated: 08/21/2009
Reviewer: GwenaTerra Signed
Date: 06/30/2009 Title: Chapter 7: Meeting of Minds

Might I reccomend using a beta. There are some words that are missused in here. For example you used 'there' when you meant to use they're. And 'bare' when you meant 'bear'. If it a wonderful story besies that but it can throw off the mind when reading through the story

Suducing A Human by Plutobaby494 Rated: Mature Content (Teen) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

Spock goes to McCoy for advice of a most personal nature. K/S


Categories: Fiction
Characters: McCoy
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Humor
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2252 Read Count: 5272
[Report This] Published: 06/19/2009 Updated: 06/19/2009
Reviewer: GwenaTerra Signed
Date: 06/19/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I wanna  know what spock did plain and simple. The ending leaves me wanting more.



Author's Response:

Hmm... I never planned on writing a sequel to this. It would probably just be plain smut but now that I'm thinking about it... I might write one. Thank you so much for your response! Iam glad you enjoyed it!

Summary:

K/S SLASH. Crackfic. Remember that email about the diary of a dog and cat? What if that was on Enterprise? Kirk: Sparred with Spock in the gym and almost got choked to death! My favorite thing! Spock: Day 383 of my assignment amongst illogical humans...


Categories: Fiction
Characters: McCoy
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Humor, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1425 Read Count: 3265
[Report This] Published: 07/24/2009 Updated: 07/24/2009
Reviewer: GwenaTerra Signed
Date: 07/25/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hehe Loved it and lawld at it. Special with Jim and wait a minute...



Author's Response:

Haha yes... Jim is rather Special at times.  That's why he's bonded to a Vulcan. ;) 

Thanks for the review!

Before the Night Catches Us by waketosleep Rated: Mature Content (Teen) starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 20]
Summary: The away team is stranded on a planet during an apocalypse, with no backup plan. Could this be Kirk and Spock's Last Stand?
Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Angst, First Time, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2153 Read Count: 6195
[Report This] Published: 10/13/2009 Updated: 10/13/2009
Reviewer: GwenaTerra Signed
Date: 10/15/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Or just have scotty got them on the enterprise miraclously and them being making out between each Zombie wave