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Little Death by Saavant Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 9]
Summary: Spock is going into pon farr again, and he has a shocking request for Kirk.
Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: None
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4770 Read Count: 9741
[Report This] Published: 11/19/2005 Updated: 11/19/2005
Reviewer: JackHawksmoor Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/20/2006 Title: Chapter 1: 1

man, I love this. It's one of those stories I can't help but come back to. Well written. Great imagery.

Phoradendron Flavescens by K Chaps Rated: Mature Content (Teen) starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 6]
Summary:

Kirk receives a gift.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: First Time
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1673 Read Count: 3518
[Report This] Published: 08/18/2006 Updated: 08/18/2006
Reviewer: JackHawksmoor Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 08/24/2006 Title: Chapter 1: Phoradendron Flavescens

This was fun to read, very believable and both of them in charecter. Well written, and brightened up my day.

by Rated: [Reviews - ]
Summary:
Categories: Orphan
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: None
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: None
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: None
Warnings: None
Series: You Don't Have To Be My Family, Written in the Stars
Chapters: 0 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 0 Read Count: 0
[Report This] Published: 01/01/1970 Updated: 01/01/1970
Reviewer: JackHawksmoor Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/22/2007 Title: None

really well written, and it actually sounds like Kirk and Spock.

The Law of Averages by UKJess Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 10]
Summary:

Kirk meets a no-win situation.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: McCoy
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Angst
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: Caveat lector/Choose Not to Warn
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1261 Read Count: 5192
[Report This] Published: 03/13/2008 Updated: 03/13/2008
Reviewer: JackHawksmoor Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/31/2008 Title: Chapter 1: One

Wow. How amazingly adult and cool of Kirk. Sad but I could totally see it happening, and it even makes sense with ST:TMP.

Deep Water by Jenna Hilary Sinclair Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 12]
Summary: All is not necessarily as it seems to be.
Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: None
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 25945 Read Count: 19251
[Report This] Published: 06/30/2008 Updated: 06/30/2008
Reviewer: JackHawksmoor Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/03/2008 Title: Chapter 1: None

Oh, man, freaking awesome. Of all the gimmicks there are out there, 'I f*cked him in the line of duty' has got to be my favorite. Nothing better than hot sex in a real story. You made the 'under the influence' Spock entirely alarming and creepy, Kirk was smart and clever and mad as hell, and even Bones had his moment. 'Do I need to shoot someone'- great stuff, well done.

Desert Heat by Gayle F Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 13]
Summary:

The first story of what became The Cosmic Fuck Series. This is a pon farr story. The first appearance of the double ridges. Probably completed in 1976. First published in The Sensuous Vulcan.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Angst, First Time
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Series: Cosmic Fuck
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4986 Read Count: 23222
[Report This] Published: 03/13/2009 Updated: 03/13/2009
Reviewer: JackHawksmoor Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/20/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Desert Heat

Wow, this was so beautiful. I love these classic 'zine stories. There's so much real emotion in this. I adore the way Jim talks himself into it. I adore the way Spock asks him to stop. I even admire Lady Grief, waiting patiently...

Beyond Setarcos by Gayle F Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 11]
Summary:

The second story in The Cosmic Fuck Series. Kirk and Spock deal with the aftermath of their pon farr encounter. First published in Thrust in 1978.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: K/S plus K/other or S/other, Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Erotica
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Series: Cosmic Fuck
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6966 Read Count: 16789
[Report This] Published: 03/13/2009 Updated: 03/13/2009
Reviewer: JackHawksmoor Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/20/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Beyond Setarcos

*whew* That was tough to read in some spots. Worth it though...

Night of the Dragon by Gayle F Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

This is the third story in The Cosmic Fuck Series, published in Thrust in 1978. Kirk almost dies, and Spock must face the emotional consequences.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Angst, Erotica, Established Relationship
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Series: Cosmic Fuck
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3826 Read Count: 13221
[Report This] Published: 03/13/2009 Updated: 03/13/2009
Reviewer: JackHawksmoor Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/20/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Night of the Dragon

Oh, hell, just beat me me with a stick. Spock crying when written badly is horrible. Spock crying when written well is beyond the depths of anguish. This was approaching 'Blue' by Nemo the Everbeing levels. *whew*I need a drink.

That Which Survives by Anna Amuse Rated: Mature Content (Teen) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 12]
Summary:

Beauty isn't always that which survives. A dark AU tale.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: K/S plus K/other or S/other
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Angst, Character Study
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: AU Alternate Universe
Warnings: Major character death
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7492 Read Count: 2843
[Report This] Published: 03/31/2009 Updated: 03/31/2009
Reviewer: JackHawksmoor Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/18/2009 Title: Chapter 1: That Which Survives

Holy crap, that was horrifying. And AWESOME.

Author's Response: Thank you. Scared myself to bits, too.;-)

Summary:

After rejecting the advances of a stranger, Kirk returns to his and Spock’s hotel room and during the night somehow is made to erroneously believe that he and Spock are lovers. Originally published in 1997 in the print fanzine First Time # 46.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: First Time
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10872 Read Count: 19864
[Report This] Published: 04/05/2009 Updated: 04/05/2009
Reviewer: JackHawksmoor Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 04/20/2009 Title: Chapter 1: The Power of Suggestion

'Kirk was making improper advances! How wonderful.' -*Hee*-That line is made of win.

Author's Response:

Thank you for your comments. I've always thought that Spock knew a good thing when he saw - or felt - it.

Rumour Has It by Dana Austin Marsh Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 43]
Summary:

Kirk and Spock decide to use the rumor that they are lovers to discourage crewmembers from making a play for either of them. Originally published in 1994 in the print fanzine Matter/Antimatter # 11.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: First Time
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12603 Read Count: 41353
[Report This] Published: 04/07/2009 Updated: 04/07/2009
Reviewer: JackHawksmoor Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 04/18/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Rumour Has It

Wow, this was adorable! I really enjoyed the characterization, and the smut was hot.

Author's Response:

Thank you for your comments. I've always felt that every slash fandom needs lots of hot smut.(g)

The Ties That Bind by Della19 Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 65]
Summary:

"Of all the ties that bind us, through life, death and everything in between there will never exist one that is stronger than love." - Unknown.

A year and a half into the Enterprise's five year mission Jim finds himself held hostage on a voilent planet.  Not that there's anything new about that, but after he is rescued by the most impossible of saviours his entire world, and especially his relationship with his endearingly stubborn first officer will begin to change in ways that he could hardly have ever imagined.  A story that takes place in the Abrams universe and will include first times (and not so first times), pon farr, Generations, everyone's favourite Prime couple (and new couple) and the lengths that indivuals will go to be with the ones they love.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: McCoy
Crossover Fandom: ST:TOS Original Universe
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Established Relationship, First Time, Humor, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 64971 Read Count: 76861
[Report This] Published: 09/14/2009 Updated: 06/28/2010
Reviewer: JackHawksmoor Signed
Date: 01/19/2010 Title: Chapter 7: Part Six – Of Things Both Profound and Inevitable (There’s No Fighting This New-Old Feeling)

I like this story, this is an interesting story, but this Jim is edging a little far into 13-year-old girl category, in my opinion. At the very least, he definately sounds female in this. Really, really female. Just saying. Like the story, but the charecterization here is throwing me off a little. I get that Jim is supposed to be a bit immature, and James is rock solid in this (totally awesome, in fact) but the immature you're giving Jim is very much a girlish immature, not a dude-ish immature. Not sure if that's what you were going for.

Reviewer: JackHawksmoor Signed
Date: 01/19/2010 Title: Chapter 6: Part Five – In the Pursuit of Fire (Somebody’s Bound to Get Burned)

This is probably your best chapter. (I've read the whle thing) Seriously solid stuff-your KirkPrime is awesome...and I loveLOVE the fact that you brought in some Wrath of Khan that doesn't feel like it was shoehorned into the story with a jackhammer. It was appropriate, and it made the conversation between them even more potent and real than it otherwise would have been. Kirk Prime was convincing as hell in this chapter, at by the end of it, I bought the fact that Spock would be convinced. Kirk's realization of what was going on with Spock was the icy, oh-sh*t icing on the cake. Spock's wary care around the pon-far-ish KirkPrime was totally culturally appropriate, I really, really appreciated that little detail. Well done.

Reviewer: JackHawksmoor Signed
Date: 01/19/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue - Of Spider Webs and Gossamer Threads

Honestly, I liked this snippet, but the first time I read it through, I saw it was short and mostly quotes and skimmed to the end...which was you, apologizing for how bad the chapter sucked. Which made me assume that the chapter sucked. So I skipped it. Came back later though, and you know what? Didn't suck. It has a quiet, thoughful tone that I like a lot. You shouldn't apologize for your work, at best it won't make someone like what they don't like, and at worst it could give a potential fan the wrong idea :) I thought this was lovely.

Deeper Down by pepperlandgirl Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 22]
Summary: A sequel to One Wing. It's been one year since the Narada Engagement and four months since Captain Kirk and Spock found themselves stranded on Veridian III. While the Enterprise is called back to San Francisco to mark the anniversary Nero's attack, Spock is obliged to travel to New Chicago to attend Amanda's memorial service. Jim opts to go with him, never expecting to run straight into his own better-left-forgotten past.
Categories: Fiction
Characters: McCoy, Original Character(s), Uhura
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Action/Plot, Angst, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: Caveat lector/Choose Not to Warn, Explicit violence
Series: In a Future Age
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 62418 Read Count: 112903
[Report This] Published: 09/18/2009 Updated: 10/04/2009
Reviewer: JackHawksmoor Signed
Date: 01/18/2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Oh, SH*T! Didn't see that one coming!

Reviewer: JackHawksmoor Signed
Date: 01/18/2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

(sigh) awesome.

Heart Fire by Greywolf the Wanderer Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 12]
Summary:

This is my contribution to the K/S Advent Calendar; I chose December 21st because it is the winter solstice, which is *my* holiday feast day.

Spock asks Kirk to meet him in the observation deck at 2000 hours, once they are off shift for the day.  There is something he needs to discuss...


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Pre-Slash, Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: First Time
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3740 Read Count: 8470
[Report This] Published: 12/22/2009 Updated: 12/22/2009
Reviewer: JackHawksmoor Signed
Date: 12/25/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

*whew* that was SEXY. Really, really well done smut. (fans self)



Author's Response:

(grins, laffs like a mad bastard)  Sweet!  Glad ye liked it -- it wuz fun to write! ;-)>

Summary:

COMPLETE!  AU - Kirk has moved into an apartment and wants to get to know his neighbors. He meets his neighbor Spock, a loner who suffers from extreme agoraphobia. Kirk thinks he's a beautiful enigma.  This is my second attempt at an AU, although I hope to incorporate a lot of elements from canon into it.  Written for the Star Trek XI Kink Meme prompt found here.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: Amanda, Chekov, Gaila, McCoy, Scott, Stonn, Sulu, Uhura
Crossover Fandom: AU or Mirror Universe, ST:XI Abrams Universe
Genres: Kirk/Spock Pre-Slash, Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Angst, Character Study, First Time, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: AU Alternate Universe, Abrams Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 117512 Read Count: 667524
[Report This] Published: 03/11/2010 Updated: 06/30/2010
Reviewer: JackHawksmoor Signed
Date: 08/30/2012 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Right, so I realized I should probably let you know how obsessed I am with this story. OBSESSED. I love it to pieces, and then I love the pieces to pieces, and then I fall on the floor and gibber to myself. I can't even tell you how many times I've read this story. Enough that my guilt is driving me to apologize for not reviewing sooner. If you want I can set up some kind of altar in your honor or something to make amends, let me know I can get on that.

Yesterday's Amok by Kerchan Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 9]
Summary:

T'Pau found out that Jim didn't actually die on the sands of Vulcan during Spock's Pon Farr. And now she wants a rematch.

For this challenge:

By Ashaya-var

Not a Pon Farr challenge, believe it or not. They fooled T'Pau the first time around, but it's pretty clear before long that Kirk didn't die on the sands of Vulcan like he was supposed to. What if she demands, by the power of Vulcan law, that they return for a rematch- a fight to the death, no tricks this time.

Bonus if they realize they can only get out of it if they bond. (Something about t'hy'la not having to kill each other, yadayada.) Yay for first-time stories!

You can set this during TOS, or find a way to fit it into the Abrams universe- I'm not picky.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Erotica, First Time, Humor
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Challenges: Amok Time Revisited
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5343 Read Count: 9908
[Report This] Published: 05/17/2010 Updated: 05/17/2010
Reviewer: JackHawksmoor Signed
Date: 05/21/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

(gaping) That was...whoo, that was smoking. I, uh...whoo. The part where... (ahem)...with the, uh, everybody watching, and Jim all into it...damn. I got nothing. That was seriously sexy.

Second Chances by Kerchan Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 26]
Summary:

In Progress. Elder Spock commits the ultimate Vulcan crime to preserve Jim Kirk's sanity.

For this challange by Extravaganser:

kirk/spock to be rated for adult audiences

Ok, so I would like a fic where, while kirk is out on an emergency diplomatic mission, spock dies (on a mission down on a planet or whatever).  So mccoy and old spock are standing over spock’s body when old spock suggests that he take his place, by transferring his katra to the younger body and somehow convinces mccoy (if even momentarily) that this is the best course of action so now only he and mccoy know of nu! Spock’s death. So kirk comes back and learns of only old spock’s death, and is none the wiser. Now old spock in new body seizes the chance that he never took in his universe and begins the pursuit of his t’hy’la. I want uhura confused because spock is suddenly enamored with the captian, kirk is reluctant because he isn’t a home wrecker, mccoy feels guilty for using nu!spock’s body for old spock, and I definitely want a possessive, toppy , spock who know what he want and what he wants is his t’hy’la.

Ps likes a bit of angst, p0rn, and happy-mildly happy endings


Categories: Works in Progress
Characters: McCoy
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk-Spock Friendship, Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Action/Plot, Angst, Character Study, Erotica, First Time, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): Bottom Kirk
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: Major character death
Challenges: second chances
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 43176 Read Count: 18222
[Report This] Published: 12/09/2010 Updated: 05/05/2011
Reviewer: JackHawksmoor Signed
Date: 06/26/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Aaugh! AAAAUUGH! (Gaping) You...I...I cannot believe this. This is epic. My GOD the epicness of this could power, like fleets of starships, I am utterly STAGGERED by this story. It's completely unique. I 've never read anything like it. And it's brilliantly good. I'm aching for oldSpock, and you keep bringing in people who know, as a kind of one-two punch, so I can't forget that Spock is dead, and I should feel terrible and kind of horrified about the situation. He's wearing a Spock suit! I like Spock, you...that's disrestectful! I like old Spock too, though, and you've made your case for him. T'pau made him CRY and everything, I wanted to slap her. And then Sarek, who's lost everything now. After he left...all I could think was how much I'd hoped he wouldn't find out for just that reason. Please keep doing this. Please, please? It is so brilliant and terrible and f*cking epic it needs to be finished.