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Carnival by jesmihr Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 18]
Summary:

Kirk gets his fortune read - and lives to regret it. This story was published previously in Kindle My Heart 2.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: None
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11044 Read Count: 9712
[Report This] Published: 03/30/2008 Updated: 03/30/2008
Reviewer: Peachly Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 12/17/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Carnival - Chapter One

I really like this. The description of the carnival was perfect and the fortune teller was so original and endearing for me. Jim fixing his mistake was also well done. As well as making Spock keep the pile of laundry on the ground.

The ending was a bit of a sudden change, though. Their conversation built up by emphasizing Jim's insecurities and their solid agreement to take it slow... and then they had sex anyway. I understand it felt right for them, but it still seemed like a real 180. It was a bit jarring for me.

I still liked it overall. Well done.

Sands by Banana Rated: All Audiences starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 11]
Summary:

In response to the following challenge:

 

Kirk and Spock want to get bonded. But another Vulcan wants to prevent it because he wants to get bonded to Kirk. Bonus if the other Vulcan is in pon farr.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: None
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Established Relationship
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: None
Challenges: The Wrong Vulcan
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3821 Read Count: 14737
[Report This] Published: 09/09/2010 Updated: 09/09/2010
Reviewer: Peachly Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/07/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was an absolutely horrible first line. I was laughing so hard I had to walk away from the story for five minutes to regain my composure so I could try to read it again.

The story is marvalous. I like how it was in Spock Prime's point of view and he compared Spock's pon farr to his own, allowing us an insight to his own relationship with Kirk Prime (I always love angsty stories about Spock Prime's regret).  And Kirk was defiant as always and saints be damned if Spock was going to let anyone else touch this love.

Wonderful job.