Reviewer: logicallyillogical Signed
Chapter 1: Complete Story
This was so nicely done (even though I do feel bad for Janice)!
My favorite part was easily the "Jim's Allergy Kit" part -- Bones, I love you.
I'm such a sucker for allergic!Jim stories, probably because I identify so much with allergic!Jim's fate:
The first time I discovered that I was allergic to something (morphine) was in the hospital, after the doctors gave it to me. Until this moment in my life, I had not known that I was allergic to ANYTHING.
And then, when they saw I was allergic to that, they gave me something else for the pain...which I was even more allergic to...
So they gave me tylenol.
And then they gave me dinner, which had pineapple in it (which, somehow, I'd gone my whole life up to that point never eating)...
And guess who's allergic to pineapple?
So yeah, I have a sweet, loving weakness for allergic!Jim stories. I loved your "Kirk voice" -- it was just sooooo Jim.Author's Response:
Thank you! I couldn't resist Bones having a specific kit just for Jim. (Oh my to your allergy troubles. I, myself, discovered I was suddenly allergic to apples when all of a sudden I bit into one and had trouble breathing. Not fun.) Glad you found my Kirk was satisfactory - I'm always a little nervous that the voices may not be right. Glad you enoyed the fic! Thanks for reviewing. I appreciate it! ~ RK