Penname: kiragirl17 [Contact] Real name: Cassie
Member Since: 05/03/2010
Membership status: Member
Bio: I was never any good about talking about myself. Um....can't think of anything! Doesn't that say a lot?

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Trespass by rae1013 Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 5]

It was bound to happen eventually. The Enterprise has finally run out of luck.

Categories: Fiction
Characters: Chapel, Chekov, McCoy, Sarek, Scott, Sulu, Uhura
Crossover Fandom: ST:XI Abrams Universe
Genres: Kirk-Spock Friendship, Kirk/Spock Pre-Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Action/Plot, Angst
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: Explicit violence, Major character death
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9554 Read Count: 2756
[Report This] Published: 11/18/2010 Updated: 11/18/2010
Reviewer: kiragirl17 Signed
Date: 11/19/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Trespass

Wow, just wow. That was depressing for lack of a better work, but that does not mean it wasn't good, because it was really well done. I do have a few questions. So what happen to Spock? Did he go crazy like the others? Why did he temper with the system? And why was the invisble force on the planet that killed the research teams? Is it just suppose to be unanswered?


And this isnt a question, just a comment. This reminds me of two different episodes in the original series, but Bones was able to find what was killing them and stop the whole ship from dying.

Well anyways. You did a good job.

Author's Response:

Haha! So many questions. I did leave it purposely vague because if the crew doesn't know what's happening to them why should the audience get to know? However, I've been asked a few times about what actually happened that I have posted an additional author's note on my livejournal that explains everything. You can find the link to my journal on my bio page if you're interested in all the details of the story.

Thank you for commenting. I'm glad you enjoyed the story.