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Summary:

COMPLETE!  AU - Kirk has moved into an apartment and wants to get to know his neighbors. He meets his neighbor Spock, a loner who suffers from extreme agoraphobia. Kirk thinks he's a beautiful enigma.  This is my second attempt at an AU, although I hope to incorporate a lot of elements from canon into it.  Written for the Star Trek XI Kink Meme prompt found here.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: Amanda, Chekov, Gaila, McCoy, Scott, Stonn, Sulu, Uhura
Crossover Fandom: AU or Mirror Universe, ST:XI Abrams Universe
Genres: Kirk/Spock Pre-Slash, Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Angst, Character Study, First Time, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: AU Alternate Universe, Abrams Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 117512 Read Count: 652207
[Report This] Published: 03/11/2010 Updated: 06/30/2010
Reviewer: Rimilea Signed
Date: 04/26/2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Yay! Spock might meet McCoy soon. I've been wanting him to. :) Can't wait for that.

Reviewer: Rimilea Signed
Date: 03/30/2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Just wanted to let you know that this story is totally awesome! The best one on the site. I'm totally looking forward to the next chapter!! You are a fantastic writer with the right balance of everything, and most of all, great characterization! Which I love most of all. I hadn't planned on joining this site but I really wanted to leave you a review. Update like really really soon, please!!!!

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Date: 04/01/2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Wonderful, wonderful!! Yes!! I am hoping this story goes on for a long time. Maybe on through when Jim becomes Captain and Spock becomes First Officer? Please???? Whatever you write is great though. I am definitely looking forward to whatever is next!

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Date: 04/03/2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Hey, can't wait to see what you come up with to help Spock overcome his fears. Although in my experience, anything the professionals come up with can't hold a candle to genuine love and empowerment from someone who's gained your confidence. Sure worked miracles in my life, when I was a bit like Spock. Just sayin. :) I love the Kirk/Spock cuddling moments though, when Jim is taking care of him. It's so sweet! Looking forward to more interaction between them. I agree with the whole no overnight change thing, and I'm glad you didn't have them make that quantum leap. Slow and steady wins the race! I can't wait for Spock to meet McCoy, though. Maybe some banter will bring him out of his shell. :) Please, please update soon! You are so good about it, I'm looking forward to the next!

Reviewer: Rimilea Signed
Date: 04/03/2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Hey, great job! I love how you are handling this. :) Awesome. Can't wait for more! Just loving the K/S interaction! I love those little moments. And I liked the part with Uhura. :) Please continue with your swift updates, it's wonderful!

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Date: 04/07/2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

You can't leave a cliffie like that!!! Please update like really soon!! :)

Reviewer: Rimilea Signed
Date: 04/09/2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

That was totally awesome!!! I am so looking forward to more. I'm probably sounding like a broken record by now, but it is so true. I love the little moments between them! It is so lovely. Please update really soon! :)

Reviewer: Rimilea Signed
Date: 04/11/2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I always read your chapters twice, the K/S moments are so precious! Thanks for a great read, I definitely look forward to the next. I like where you are going with how Spock is getting better. And while I'm thinking about it, I should have seen that whole medical records thing coming in the last chapter - I work in that department at my local hospital. LOL And I know about the whole notify thing, and stuff. Great realism. :) I am so excited for the next chapter! I want this story to go on forever with all their little moments together. :D

Reviewer: Rimilea Signed
Date: 04/14/2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Yay! Almost the entire chapter was K/S this time! Awesome K/S moments, you write them so well! Even something as seemingly mundane as stargazing is enjoyable reading with these two. Thanks for a great read. I would not mind the story being dragged out with more little friendship moments between them. :) And yay, they finally consummated their relationship. And I think you continue to write Spock's recovery realistically...the whole suddenly getting better and worse, better and worse, gradually more better and less worse and all that. Can't wait for the next.

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Date: 04/17/2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Hey, totally awesome, as usual! Absolutely cannot wait for the next. Please update like really soon. :)

Reviewer: Rimilea Signed
Date: 04/23/2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Yay!! It's funny, as I woke up I was thinking about how very much I wanted an update of this story, then... voila!!! Here it is!! :) Thank you! As always I'm anxious for the next chapter.

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Date: 05/02/2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I love this chapter! I hope in the next chapter you have Jim helping Spock through the aftermath. It's sweet. :D I really love this story. I can't wait for more! I really mean it. :D

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Date: 05/06/2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

I loved this chapter so much!!! All my favorite stuff in it. Spock definitely needs to go to the Academy so they can always be together. Separating them is so stupid!! :D It was wonderful, please update soon! :D

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Date: 05/14/2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

YES!!! You updated!! I have been eagerly awaiting this for awhile! Awesome! :D So glad you're continuing with this. And yes, the whole thing was K/S interaction, I love it! Although you do characterize everyone else really well. I will be eagerly awaiting the next chapter!

Reviewer: Rimilea Signed
Date: 05/24/2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

I am SO glad you updated! Thank you!! Great chapter. Interesting, I had assumed Nero was in this universe. But apparently it's TOS, only changed so Kirk and Spock are together earlier? Because his dad lived to Tarsus. Cool, so there'll be no destruction of Vulcan. I hope Jim still gets promoted quickly to Captain, though... :) Definitely looking foward to what's next!



Author's Response:

I guess it could go either way.  I was aiming for reboot verse with the addition of Keenser and Gaila, but if it works better as TOS verse for you, that's fine too. :)

Reviewer: Rimilea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/01/2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Totally cool, as usual. I'm currently writing a story, and not reading anyone else's, but when I saw you updated I HAD to read it, LOL. :) So awesome, I want Gaila to cut his hair, that would be hilarious!

Reviewer: Rimilea Signed
Date: 06/04/2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Awesome, as usual! You really have a firm grasp on how the mind works, I think. :) Really great. If you try to take away feelings, you also take away interest and whatever happiness you have. You'll just be blah. He needs to redirect the negative emotions in a different direction. Slowly. Love the quick update, definitely! You are awesome, it is always a great read! Still working on my own k/s story. It's nearly 40,000 words right now. Loving it! I'm looking forward to your next update. :)

Reviewer: Rimilea Signed
Date: 06/09/2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Yes! You updated! I always am so excited when I see that. :) Thanks for updating so faithfully, it's great! Can't wait for more. Is Gaila going to cut his hair? I really want to read that! :D

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Date: 06/14/2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

LOL I'm beginning to get a sixth sense about when you're going to update. :) Really great as usual, you really have a good handle on psychology! Can't wait to see what's next. I still want the haircut scene with Gaila and Spock. :) Love the k/s moments most of all though. :)

Reviewer: Rimilea Signed
Date: 06/22/2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Yay!!!!!! The haircutting Gaila scene! It was great. Enjoyed the chapter definitely, can't wait for more.