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Mistletoe Challenge by Amanda Warrington Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 25]
Summary:

N.B. Despite the name, this is not a 'challenge' or humorous story.

In his final year, Spock briefly meets Kirk at the Academy Winter Ball. One day, many years later, the man who made a lasting impression on Spock assumes command of the Enterprise. Shamelessly romantic, this was written for the 2008 K/S Advent Calendar.

Voted best K/S story in the 2008 Golden Orgasm awards.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Action/Plot, Erotica, First Time, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15955 Read Count: 26031
[Report This] Published: 12/24/2008 Updated: 12/24/2008
Reviewer: TechnoPoet Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/16/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Mistletoe Challenge

O_O I love you! Or... I love this story! This is one of the most brilliant fanfictions I have ever read; I love how you made every little quirky bit of pre-and-early-TOS work out beautifully with the canon; the uniform replicators, Spock smiling, everything! And I love how well the romantic plot-line blends into the canon, and is extremely adorable, by the way. This is the most beautiful true-to-canon writing I've seen!

This was a perfectly genius and amazingly mindblowing story! :D 

 

And Its Business Is Joy by Elise Madrid Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

Mission's end... and a time for important decisions.  But as they approach Earth, their dilemma unresolved and their future in question, the Enterprise is swept into the past where they meet two extraordinary men.  (A crossover with the British TV series "The Professionals".)

Originally published April 2006 in T'hy'la 26.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: Professionals
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: None
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: Crossover, ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 25666 Read Count: 3244
[Report This] Published: 01/14/2009 Updated: 01/14/2009
Reviewer: TechnoPoet Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/19/2011 Title: Chapter 1: (none)

Lovely! It was sad between Kirk and Spock to begin with, but I liked the ending. ^_^

Also, yay! Someone else who enjoys The Professionals, and its main pairing! :D I found the show online a couple of months ago, and have really been enjoying it. So, yes, I really loved the crossover, it was quite wonderful. :)

Author's Response: I'm happy to hear you enjoyed the story and that the ending worked for you. And really happy to hear there's a new Pros fan around! In case you're interested, there's a more Pros-centric version of the story here: http://archiveofourown.org/works/200910 Thanks for reading and for your wonderful comments!

The Madman of Lesath II by Debbie C Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 18]
Summary:

Spock is taken over by a malevolent alien.

Originally published in the gen zine, Voyages II.  Reworked as K/S for Thyla 27


Categories: Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Action/Plot
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: Non-consensual sex
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 52380 Read Count: 13461
[Report This] Published: 04/06/2009 Updated: 04/06/2009
Reviewer: TechnoPoet Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/29/2010 Title: Chapter 1: one

This story definitely deserved the best K/S novel award.

It's a perfectly heartbreaking story. The entire thing with the creature was written very well, each bit of pain, and each small glimmer of hope, and the reactions to it afterwards. It makes me feel very bad for Spock, everyone prodding him exactly where it hurts - the bond, and his human emotion. Even doing it for a good reason, as McCoy used it against him to keep him alive, was excruciating pain for him (but written very well). 

I liked the ending. It was the most heartbreaking moment of the story, but in a way, it wasn't as sad as when the creature first started ruining things. Nearing the end, I could see that it was starting to reach the point where they couldn't get back together, at least not in this story, so it wasn't as shocking as it possibly could have been. But I do like how it ended with McCoy's perspective, and him having some small hope that things would someday bring them together again.

That Spock had been planning to leave Kirk even before the creature had inhabited his mind was a painful but inevitable revelation - I think no matter what the situation, Spock would have eventually broken down in some way and acknowledged that he needed time.

This is the type of story that one would think would need a sequel, but I think it works really well as it is, with its sequel being Star Trek: The Motion Picture. There was once a story similar to this that tried to link itself to TMP, but it just didn't seem like it would turn out right, whereas this story is written in such a way that I can see how it could explain their reactions towards each other in that movie.

Brilliant story, I definitely enjoyed it!

Betwixt Man and Angell by Elise Madrid Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 6]
Summary:

While visiting Kirk's cousin in Scotland, captain and first officer encounter dark forces surrounding the Kirk family's past.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: McCoy, Original Character(s)
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Established Relationship
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Series: Lore and Legends Series
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 27493 Read Count: 6086
[Report This] Published: 06/12/2009 Updated: 06/12/2009
Reviewer: TechnoPoet Signed
Date: 06/23/2011 Title: Chapter 1: N/A

Very creepy! It's about 2AM right now, and at one point I got up to turn on a lamp because reading a story like that and being unable to see anything but the computer screen is eerie.

I like the pictures, they added to the story. I thought the legend was fascinating - about five minutes after finishing the story, I found at least part of an online version of the Reverend's book - I'm sure it'd be the strangest thing on my summer reading list should I decide to read it.

I really enjoyed this story. :) The relationship between Kirk and Spock was written very well, and the descriptions of the settings and emotions are well-detailed and add a lot to the story.

Author's Response: Creepy was what I was aiming for, so I'm glad that was your reaction to the story. :-) The first time I read about Reverend Kirk, I knew I'd have to tie his story in somehow with our Kirk's. There's often not that big a difference between horror and scifi, so it was easier than I imagined. And, yes, his book should make for some strange reading—and inspiration, I hope. Thanks ever so much for reading and for the wonderful comments!

Obscenities by Corpus Invictus Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 11]
Summary:

Written for the Star Trek XI Kink Meme prompt found here: "Kirk likes/gets turned on seeing Spock do totally average, everyday or human-y things."


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Erotica, First Time
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2776 Read Count: 9602
[Report This] Published: 09/13/2009 Updated: 09/13/2009
Reviewer: TechnoPoet Signed
Date: 08/12/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Everyone, sing it with me!:

Our proper, cool first officer was drugged with something green
And hauled into an alley, where he suffered things obscene
He sobered up in sickbay and he's none the worse for wear
Except he's somehow taught the bridge computer how to swear...And we're Banned from Argo, everyone....

*cough* Sorry. This fic reminded me of that song. :)

This was a very good and amusing story. It makes me want to search out the original writer of the Vulcan Language Institute, and get him to post his secret page of Vulcan swears, which he never got around to doing.

Tremors by Corpus Invictus Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

Written for the Star Trek XI Kink Meme prompt found here: "I'd like to read a nice, calm, affectionate shower with Spock/Kirk."


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Erotica, Established Relationship, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1887 Read Count: 6413
[Report This] Published: 09/13/2009 Updated: 09/13/2009
Reviewer: TechnoPoet Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/17/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Tremors

Banned from Argo, everyone...
Awesome reference there! I wondered why I hadn't seen Leslie Fish referenced before now.

Very cute, very hot story! I enjoyed it very much.

Debt of Honor by Brianna Falken Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 65]
Summary:

TOS A/U novella. Six months after being taken prisoner and raped by a Vulcan captain, Kirk finds that same Vulcan is now being assigned as his first officer when peace between Vulcan and Earth is declared. Originally published in the print fanzine Beyond Dreams 7 (2004), edited by Jenna Sinclair.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: AU or Mirror Universe
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Action/Plot, Angst
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: Rape
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 33255 Read Count: 103795
[Report This] Published: 09/14/2009 Updated: 09/14/2009
Reviewer: TechnoPoet Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/06/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

*dies of happiness*

Truly, utterly, brilliant!

I completely melted at what Spock said about Kirk, in the observation room when the Vulcans didn't know he was there. And I adored the entire section where Kirk slowly learned to not hate him, and started to see him as a friend and a person. It was awesome! And some of the phrases in there were brilliant as well ("Vulcans need more than idle words," being one example. Just...wow. And the entire "Lean on me..." bit. Astoundingly beautiful).

The rest of the Vulcans learning to be loyal to their new captain was also very touching. :3

I also like how you wrote the beginning "rape" as if it really wasn't. So it wasn't that Spock really did it out of choice, just in an attempt to save himself. That really made it easier to understand how they could become close to each other again, and was well worked into all of it.

The one thing that I wish you had written into it was whatever Bones' reaction would be to Kirk and Spock being in a relationship - Because, Bones saw Kirk at his worst, after the rape, and (unless Sellar told him) he had no clue why it happened. (Did Sellar tell him? It'd be a useful thing for the CMO to know about Pon Farr and Plak Tow on a ship half crewed with Vulcans...)

Also, I loved that you used Vulcan in it. Vulcan that's in the Vulcan Language Dictionary and all. :D Did you perhaps study at the Vulcan Language Institute? I'm starting to read through some of the lessons they offer, and it's quite fun.

As I said before, beautiful and brilliant story!

Author's Response: Dear TechnoPoet. I'm stunned. I don't know what to say. This is an amazing review. So indepth and insightful. Thank you for taking the time. I think I'll follow your points. I'm thrilled you thought some of the phrases were beautiful. Sometimes they just come and sometimes they're like pulling teeth. The observation scene just came fully formed as I was writing. Love it when that happens.

God's Forge by Anyonerelevant Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 43]
Summary:

Set between Galileo Seven and Space Seed, about one year into the first five year mission. A peace conference goes bad, leaving Kirk and Spock stranded in a desert without enough water to last until the Enterprise returns.


Categories: Works in Progress
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Pre-Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Action/Plot, Character Study
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: AU Alternate Universe, ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: Explicit violence
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 24061 Read Count: 15885
[Report This] Published: 11/18/2009 Updated: 09/19/2012
Reviewer: TechnoPoet Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 05/13/2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I've really enjoyed this so far! It's cool how you mentioned the underlying bond, and their mental connection making them what they are. And I laughed at Kirk's reaction to Spock's given name--that was really funny. :)

I'll be cheerfully awaiting an update! :)

Reviewer: TechnoPoet Signed
Date: 09/19/2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

It's okay if it's a long time before the next chapter. ^_^ I'm just very glad you updated - I missed this story, and I was worried that it wouldn't continue at all.

Keep up the good work, even if it takes a while. :)

Spock? Or not to Spock? by Kerchan Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary:

Spock x Kirk. Somehow Spock has been split into his two conflicting halves! One is Human and one is Vulcan but they can both agree on one thing: they want Jim. Very Mature

Dom!Spock x Sub!Kirk


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Erotica, First Time, Humor
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: Dominance/submission, Kink
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5896 Read Count: 12595
[Report This] Published: 12/01/2009 Updated: 12/01/2009
Reviewer: TechnoPoet Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/10/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Brain: Recovering
Mind: Blown

Just...Wow. I've never read anything like this story. Just...amazing.

And the end was quite brilliant. McCoy needs a better revenge than just a painful physical...

Strength of Men by 1lostone Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 32]
Summary:

 

While a deadly disease incapacitates the Enterprise, Kirk is discovered missing. When Spock tracks down his wayward captain, he is plunged into a controversial cover-up that will shake his very beliefs in himself;  discovering old enemy of Kirk's that will stop at nothing to remove the captain from the universe... forever.

 


Categories: Fiction
Characters: Chekov, Chris Pike, McCoy, Sarek, Scott, Sulu, Uhura
Crossover Fandom: ST:XI Abrams Universe
Genres: Kirk/Spock Pre-Slash, Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Action/Plot, Angst, First Time, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: Explicit violence, Kink, Non-consensual sex, Rape
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 66571 Read Count: 66648
[Report This] Published: 03/04/2010 Updated: 04/12/2010
Reviewer: TechnoPoet Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 03/22/2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

This is really good so far! :) I'm looking forward to an update! :D

Keep up the good writing!

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reviewiing. I updated several chapters, so you're caught up to my lj. :)

Reviewer: TechnoPoet Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/03/2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

This story is really good so far! I'm quite eager for the update.

I love how you've kept the characters very much in character, it works quite well, I think.

Update soon, pretty please?

Author's Response:

Wow, thanks so much for taking the time to review!  The story is complete; it's just taking a bit to get back from my beta with the holiday and all. :) No worries bb, an update will be soon!

Reviewer: TechnoPoet Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/15/2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

O_O 8D This is such an amazing story! :D Thank you so much for writing it, and continuing to update it! It's really hard to believe that this is your first story in this fandom; it's just so well done! *cough* ...Sequel? :P Pretty please?



Author's Response:

Wow! I don't know that I have much to say in a sequel, but thank you so much for the idea and for the review. 

Summary:

COMPLETE!  AU - Kirk has moved into an apartment and wants to get to know his neighbors. He meets his neighbor Spock, a loner who suffers from extreme agoraphobia. Kirk thinks he's a beautiful enigma.  This is my second attempt at an AU, although I hope to incorporate a lot of elements from canon into it.  Written for the Star Trek XI Kink Meme prompt found here.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: Amanda, Chekov, Gaila, McCoy, Scott, Stonn, Sulu, Uhura
Crossover Fandom: AU or Mirror Universe, ST:XI Abrams Universe
Genres: Kirk/Spock Pre-Slash, Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Angst, Character Study, First Time, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: AU Alternate Universe, Abrams Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 117512 Read Count: 652166
[Report This] Published: 03/11/2010 Updated: 06/30/2010
Reviewer: TechnoPoet Signed
Date: 09/10/2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

*80's Music Interlude*

"I knows all the rules, and then I knows how to break them, and I always know the name of the game..."

Saw Jim thinking like that early on in the chapter, and it seemed like a pretty direct quote there. Was it?

I've been reading your story like crazy. I've definitely become addicted, and this story is amazing (and...well...I kind of read all of your other stories. They're awesome too. I'll have to review them all separately sometime...)

But yes. So awesome I can practically not find words for it. *goes off to keep reading*

Reviewer: TechnoPoet Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/10/2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Okay. Because I know that this is too awesome a story to not go back and review every single chapter next time I reread it...Expect that to happen sometime. Hopefully soon. If there's time.

*melts*

Brilliant. Absolutely, amazingly brilliant. Without a doubt. So awesome. I love Agoraphobe!Spock, even though he has issues, and needs love, it's a good plotline.

I'd want a sequel if I thought this wasn't a good ending. It is a good ending. A sequel would still be awesome, but...*shrug* I'll take what I can get.

So, so much love for this story. I've been reading it for three days straight, only stopping for schoolwork and chess games against the computer (which I've mostly lost, by the way, making me wonder if Tri-D chess is easier to figure out).

But I ramble. Just...awesome. And you'll find out the many and multiple things I adore about this story when I go back and review all of it. Which I will do. I swear. Because it's awesome.

Dif-tor heh smusma

Ein Deutsches Requiem by banditjoeykuba Rated: All Audiences starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

They danced, he loved her. She always died again when the music stopped, his heart broke. He wanted to forget, Spock wanted to help.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Pre-Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Hurt/Comfort
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 654 Read Count: 3128
[Report This] Published: 03/14/2010 Updated: 03/14/2010
Reviewer: TechnoPoet Signed
Date: 06/04/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Awwwww... I love Spock in that episode and in this story. Overprotective, in a way. And gentle.

Good story! :)

Thinking of You by banditjoeykuba Rated: All Audiences starstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

Whenever he looks at this universe's Jim, he can't help but remember his Jim.


Categories: Fiction, Works in Progress
Characters: McCoy
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash, Kirk/Spock!Prime Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Hurt/Comfort
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe, Abrams Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1507 Read Count: 3847
[Report This] Published: 03/14/2010 Updated: 03/14/2010
Reviewer: TechnoPoet Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/04/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Part One

This is good! I love the idea of this, and the storyline. I felt really bad for Spock Prime in STXI - He did look lonely and in pain during most of it, especially at the end scenes. Poor sad Vulcan :(

And if Nimoy were to be in the next Star Trek movie I'd hope that they would bring back Shatner, just for a bit. They need to somehow rescue Kirk Prime from Spock Prime's past, so they can do a big reunion scene and make all the K/S fangirls giggle.

And I always loved McCoy's speech... Someone on YouTube set it to clips from the original series, and it fit beautifully. Just perfectly. I can look up a link if you want...

A Thousand Words by bigkitty-chan Rated: Mature Content (Teen) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 18]
Summary:

Spock is an artist who turned down a place in the Vulcan Science academy in favor of becoming an art professor on Earth. Kirk is struggling to make ends meet while trying to save up for art school. When they meet, Spock offers Kirk a way into the school of his dreams.


Categories: Works in Progress
Characters: Chris Pike
Crossover Fandom: AU or Mirror Universe
Genres: Kirk/Spock Pre-Slash, Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: AU Alternate Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 13808 Read Count: 8164
[Report This] Published: 03/29/2010 Updated: 08/07/2010
Reviewer: TechnoPoet Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 06/14/2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Good so far! Really looking forward to an update!

The only errors I can find in this story are minor spelling mistakes, and the fact that Vulcan doesn't have a moon. Which doesn't exactly count as an error, seeing as it does have a sister planet called T'Khut, that looks like a moon.

As I said, doing really well so far! Keep going, please! :)

Reviewer: TechnoPoet Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/07/2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Yay, an update! :D

I must say, I do adore this story. I like the idea of this chapter, the creating art in sand, and having it be better than on the paper. :) It was a nice touch.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much!! I've always been a fan of alternative media in art and sand  seemed like an interesting twist. I hope to update super soon, I'm sorry this last chapter took so long O_o

Found by Aconitum-Napellus Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 39]
Summary:

During a turbulent evacuation of a human colony, Spock is taken hostage...

Established K/S

Rating: 18 for violence and implied non-consensual sex.

Inspired by the picture 'Found' by K Laine k-laine.deviantart.com/art/Found-129830915


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Angst, Hurt/Comfort
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: Caveat lector/Choose Not to Warn, Non-consensual sex
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 34038 Read Count: 32149
[Report This] Published: 04/30/2010 Updated: 09/17/2010
Reviewer: TechnoPoet Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 07/26/2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Another great chapter. I like how you've written Spock's thoughts as he's trying to get used to normal life again, and try to keep memories from influencing him too much, even though his fear caused his outburst.

Update as soon as you are able, please?

Author's Response:

Thanks XD I'm about halfway through the next chapter now.