Penname: FanficTrekkie [Contact] Real name: Helen
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Spock's Journal by TGuess Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 10]
Summary: Events that happen after "Amok Time".
Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: K/S plus K/other or S/other
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Action/Plot, Angst, First Time, Hurt/Comfort
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: Non-consensual sex
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 25333 Read Count: 11883
[Report This] Published: 12/22/2005 Updated: 12/22/2005
Reviewer: FanficTrekkie Signed
Date: 06/12/2014 Title: Chapter 1: None

IAt first I loved the idea of the story because I expected Kirk to save the day at the last minute by kicking T'Pring's a** and then sufferring through Pon Far with Spock in one of the bondage rooms.  So gotta admit I was bummed when that didn't happen.  I really didn't want to see T'Pring even get close to getting her way before Kirk saved his T'hy'la.  Still an exciting story but perhaops you will consider doing a second version :-)  hint hint

Their Hearts' Revenge by Shelley Butler Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

T'Pring seeks murderous revenge on Spock.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: T'Pring
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: First Time
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 17277 Read Count: 5193
[Report This] Published: 11/25/2008 Updated: 11/25/2008
Reviewer: FanficTrekkie Signed
Date: 01/18/2015 Title: Chapter 1: none

I read somewhaere that you have a story called The Gorn Story on this site but it's not on here.  Can you re-post that story if you are the right author?

Reviewer: FanficTrekkie Signed
Date: 01/30/2016 Title: Chapter 1: none

Are you the same Shelley Butler who wrote ST TOS zines in the past?  If so can you please please add some of those on this site?  At least the story called Ravage about Kor and Kirk?

The Madman of Lesath II by Debbie C Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 18]
Summary:

Spock is taken over by a malevolent alien.

Originally published in the gen zine, Voyages II.  Reworked as K/S for Thyla 27


Categories: Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Action/Plot
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: Non-consensual sex
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 52380 Read Count: 13461
[Report This] Published: 04/06/2009 Updated: 04/06/2009
Reviewer: FanficTrekkie Signed
Date: 03/29/2015 Title: Chapter 1: one

I don't understand why you wld end such a magnificent story in such a horrible way.  No one wants to read a great love story only to have the ending leave them feeling like crap.  Is there a sequel I missed or something?  I think it wld have been better if after Spock punches Jim in the mouth near the end, if Kirk decided to just fight out their feelings and mutual anger and resentments over the rape, and gives Spock a punch rt back after a few minutes.  Then fighting continues as they yell out what resentments they are still holding onto with each other until all fight is gone and they embrace and start to heal.

Reviewer: FanficTrekkie Signed
Date: 03/29/2015 Title: Chapter 1: one

I just noticed my review came across more abrupt than I meant it, if I hadn't loved your story so much I prob wldn't have cared how it ended, I just never understood why a writer wld end a story with a downer when they cld if anything, just continue with the story until the two soulmates were reunited.

Summary:

Kirk and Spock are sent on a suspicious mission to obtain a local plant from an unfamiliar planet. When things go wrong, Spock is forced to meld with Kirk. The consequences of that meld will change everything.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Hurt/Comfort
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: Rape
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 27901 Read Count: 23127
[Report This] Published: 08/17/2009 Updated: 08/17/2009
Reviewer: FanficTrekkie Signed
Date: 09/23/2014 Title: Chapter 1: We'll Lie in the Shadows of Them All

fantastic story!  One small correction though:  you have the word 'commingled' which had me confused at first trying to sound it out - it was coming out as 'comm' (which wld sound like 'calm') and 'mingled' put together.   The correct spelling is:  co-mingled.

Silver Lining by Amanda Warrington Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 30]
Summary:

Spock is still in a relationship with Uhura when he experiences his first Pon Farr.  At his first officer's request, Kirk diverts the Enterprise to New Vulcan so he can marry T'Pring, who survived Vulcan's destruction.  However, when Spock gets there, he finds his wedding doesn't go according to plan.  This is Pon Farr with a reboot twist.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: Chekov, McCoy, Original Character(s), Scott, Stonn, Sulu, T'Pring, Uhura
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: K/S plus K/other or S/other, Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Action/Plot, Angst, Erotica, First Time, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): Bottom Spock, Pon Farr
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: None
Series: Silver Lining
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 33312 Read Count: 55127
[Report This] Published: 10/11/2009 Updated: 10/11/2009
Reviewer: FanficTrekkie Signed
Date: 06/30/2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Awesome story (and I am only half way thru it) but you had them both in the same bath tub and nothing happened?  I love tub sex so I was just bummed that it was anti-climatic (pun intended :-) ). 



Author's Response:

Heh.  I'll say nothing spoilerish here, but I hope by now you've read it all. ;-)  So glad you were enjoying it at least up to that point! :-)

The Edge by Little Muse Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 104]
Summary: He knew the calm before a storm when he saw it. And one had been brewing for weeks now. Another pon farr fic.
Categories: Works in Progress, Fiction
Characters: Chapel, Chekov, McCoy, Original Character(s), Sarek, Scott, Sulu, Uhura
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Angst, Erotica, Established Relationship, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: Infidelity
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 64013 Read Count: 138479
[Report This] Published: 11/11/2009 Updated: 06/06/2013
Reviewer: FanficTrekkie Signed
Date: 06/17/2014 Title: Chapter 4: Part IV

Loving this story - tho I did get lost a few times in Chapters 3 & 4 just cz Jim and Spock went into too much confusing detail about Spock's options for Pon Farr.  Maybe it's just me, sometimes too much detail confuses and distracts me to the pt that I have to skip ahead in the story.  I think the term is A.D.D.  haha

Reviewer: FanficTrekkie Signed
Date: 06/18/2014 Title: Chapter 27: Part XXVII

I like this story but am a bit frutrated as well.  I like stories that - even if bad things happen, things eventually work out to a positive outcome and happy ending.  But this story just keeps having more bad things happen.  I am curious to continue of course but I don't like that Spock and Kirk will poss always have T'Pids thoughts intertwined with their own in a sense.

 

 

Reviewer: FanficTrekkie Signed
Date: 06/19/2014 Title: Chapter 29: Part XXVIX

Okay cool, now I am happy with how things are going.  Definitely an awesome story overall, can't wait for you to add the next update!

Reviewer: FanficTrekkie Signed
Date: 06/19/2014 Title: Chapter 27: Part XXVII

I like this story but am a bit frutrated as well.  I like stories that - even if bad things happen, things eventually work out to a positive outcome and happy ending.  But this story just keeps having more bad things happen.  I am curious to continue of course but I don't like that Spock and Kirk will poss always have T'Pids thoughts intertwined with their own in a sense.

 

 

Strength of Men by 1lostone Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 32]
Summary:

 

While a deadly disease incapacitates the Enterprise, Kirk is discovered missing. When Spock tracks down his wayward captain, he is plunged into a controversial cover-up that will shake his very beliefs in himself;  discovering old enemy of Kirk's that will stop at nothing to remove the captain from the universe... forever.

 


Categories: Fiction
Characters: Chekov, Chris Pike, McCoy, Sarek, Scott, Sulu, Uhura
Crossover Fandom: ST:XI Abrams Universe
Genres: Kirk/Spock Pre-Slash, Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Action/Plot, Angst, First Time, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: Explicit violence, Kink, Non-consensual sex, Rape
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 66571 Read Count: 66648
[Report This] Published: 03/04/2010 Updated: 04/12/2010
Reviewer: FanficTrekkie Signed
Date: 09/01/2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I think this is the 2nd time I am reading this so I hope I haven't already posted similar review in the past but - I was really disappointed w this chapter because after you did such a great build up to Kirk being betrayed and handed over to villain Kodos, then we don't even get to see what Kodos did to him.  I was looking fwd to that.  I also didn't think Spock wld have logically decided not to go after Kodos just to pulverize him for harming Jim and killing others.  I love your writing so pls don't take this as a flame review I tend to be too honest at times so I apologize if this comes across harsh when it's merely one readers thoughts :-)    Last thing I just thought it was OOC and odd that Bones and everyone treated Jim like crap after being found - when just a while ago they were frantic to find him and worried about Kodos killing him.   So I guess I had just expected a different outcome in this chapter.   But still can't wait to read the next chapter!!  I am sure you have a reason for the outcome of this chapter.  :-)



Author's Response:

Don't aplogize for your opinion. I'm sorry you didn't care for it. There are two chapters left, so I hope that all of the issues are resolved. If not, please don't force yourself to finish.  As I said before, this was my first story in this fandom and it's ridiculously tropetastic. There are many other authors who write a lot better than myself, so please don't force yourself to read something you find OOC! 

Reviewer: FanficTrekkie Signed
Date: 09/01/2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Don't you mean to say Ambassador Selek?  I have never heard of a Salkek.  At first I thought you created a new character but it seems like he's Selek.



Author's Response:

This was written before Selek was accepted as fanon. I made up a name.:) He's not a new character. 

Reviewer: FanficTrekkie Signed
Date: 09/02/2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Excellent chapter and ending!!  Kudos  :-)

The Secret Sits in the Middle by waketosleep Rated: Mature Content (Teen) [Reviews - 6]
Summary: Spock ponders Kirk and the effects of harmful secrets.
Categories: Ficlets
Characters: McCoy
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Angst, Character Study, Established Relationship, Hurt/Comfort
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 680 Read Count: 2356
[Report This] Published: 04/14/2010 Updated: 04/14/2010
Reviewer: FanficTrekkie Signed
Date: 06/26/2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Are you going to add to this?  It seems obviously unfinished and I love reading stories where we get to see what horrors Jim went through on Tarsus.  I hope you will surprise us with an update soon!

Nekhaya by Grammar Glamour Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 27]
Summary:

Following a disastrous away mission, Jim is thrown off-course. The only one with the key to his salvation is Spock Prime.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash, Kirk/Spock!Prime Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Angst, Erotica, Established Relationship, Hurt/Comfort
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: Bondage, Dominance/submission, Kink
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10397 Read Count: 19908
[Report This] Published: 05/05/2010 Updated: 05/05/2010
Reviewer: FanficTrekkie Signed
Date: 07/04/2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I loved this story I thought it was most original and just well done!  There is one exception though, I was looking fwd to having BOTH Spock's training Jim further (Older Spock teaching younger Spock how to discipline Kirk), so when you just ended it before what I would consider to be the best part of the entire story - I can't even express how dissapointed I was.

PLEASE please consider adding at least one more chapter so we can see Jim go thru the humiliation and later peaceful joy of having the attention of both Spock's.  I have not seen a fanfic yet with that storyline so you wld be a first!

Guilt of the Innocent by kiragirl17 Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 70]
Summary:

After reading a few prompts about Spock leaving Kirk after a 'misunderstanding,' I decided to try my hand in it.

After being wrongly accused, Jim's life is thrown off course. He returns to Iowa to drink away not only his guilt but also the memory of a situation that he had no control over. When the painful truth is revealed, can the Enterprise get her Captain back before it's too late? Or is he lost to them forever?

8/24/2013 Updating all Chapters


Categories: Fiction
Characters: McCoy, Uhura
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Established Relationship, Hurt/Comfort
Trope (OPTIONAL): Hurt Kirk
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: Abuse, Rape
Series: Guilty of Proven Innocent
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 230459 Read Count: 109272
[Report This] Published: 05/16/2010 Updated: 05/24/2015
Reviewer: FanficTrekkie Signed
Date: 09/06/2014 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24: Painful Memories

This story is exceptional and I am glad you added the rape scenes because all thru the story I felt like I had missed a chapter.  I wish you had just put the rape scene into the first chapter because it really wld have added so much impact to the rest of the story as we wld have better understoof what Kirk was going through.  You did a great job writing the rape flashback although I do wish you had gone ahead and written all of the rape because it also wld have impacted the story and people who didn't want to read it cld just (as you stated) skip that section.  These changes I think wld take yr story up even higher as I write fanfic as well so I have learned a lot about taking a story from great to amazing.   But overall I give you nothing but KUDOS and praise and I thank you for sharing your talent.  :-)



Author's Response:

Thank you. I will be honest. It was a push to write that chapter because it was something I had never done before and it was a bit uncomfortable. It was a learning experience and you would be right. I think I pushed it back so far because I didn't want to offend my reads.  But there are some times you need to push that.

But again, thank you.

Reviewer: FanficTrekkie Signed
Date: 09/05/2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Death of Secrets

Love this story and reading it for the 2nd or even 3rd time!  Only one minor thing bugging me in this chapter is the spelling of "fucken" which drove me a little crazy - poss because of the amt of times it was said.  It's not that I find it offensive it's just that most people spell it like this: - fuckin' - as slang for the word fucking.  Not a major bid deal - just was buggin' me :-)



Author's Response:

To be honest, I am not good with slang. haha. or many grammar in general. haha. But thank you for being it to my attention.

A Common Odyssey by Elise Madrid Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 24]
Summary: Kirk and Spock end up in a Romulan prison after the ship they are passengers on is taken by Orion slavers.

Originally published in First Time 57 by Merry Men Press (July 2003)
Categories: Fiction
Characters: McCoy, Original Character(s)
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Action/Plot
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 50672 Read Count: 24611
[Report This] Published: 06/08/2010 Updated: 06/08/2010
Reviewer: FanficTrekkie Signed
Date: 03/25/2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Love this story though it made no sense to me why Kirk abruptly forced Spock out of his healing trance by slapping him repeatedly.  Spock usually did his trances sitting up since it wasn't like a darn nap - and always did them alone so never needed slapping to come out of it.  Just wld have made more sense if a guard was coming and Kirk has some reason to slap him out of the trance early.  Anyway no biggie just seemed a tad pointless :-)

Reviewer: FanficTrekkie Signed
Date: 03/23/2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Love this story though it made no sense to me why Kirk abruptly forced Spock out of his healing trance by slapping him repeatedly.  Spock usually did his trances sitting up since it wasn't like a darn nap - and always did them alone so never needed slapping to come out of it.  Just wld have made more sense if a guard was coming and Kirk has some reason to slap him out of the trance early.  Anyway no biggie just seemed a tad pointless :-)