Reviewer: Geriatricfool Signed
Chapter 11: Chapter 11
Clever - you finally introduced Gol, and then had to whisk away from it, to save it for a future moment. What a thrill to see an update. And how intriguing - does this Romulan know who they are? I was also interested in your take on The Enterprise Incident, in that your have it that Spock felt no attraction or connection with the Romulan Commander. Is that something you generally maintain or is it just for he purpose of Surfacing? I would imagine, in view of the astonishing honesty of this story, that it's the former. Looking forward to the next chapter. Author's Response:
So sorry - I have been caught up in life, hence delay in chapter 12, but didn't realise also that I ignored this review. Huge apologies, so rude of me when you were so kind. I think you can read "the Enterprise Incident" a number of ways, and I do think Spock admired the R/Commander, but given everything else (who he is, who she is, the circumstances, the mission) I'm not convinced it was necessarily anything very much else. But happy to be disagreed witih. Hope all is well with you.