Penname: Ms Moxie09 [Contact] Real name: Miss Moxie
Member Since: 05/09/2014
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Weakness by lah_mrh Rated: Mature Content (Teen) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary:

When Spock gets kidnapped, Kirk tracks down those responsible and makes them pay. Mirrorverse.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Action/Plot, Established Relationship
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: Mirror Universe, ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1683 Read Count: 2666
[Report This] Published: 06/25/2012 Updated: 06/25/2012
Reviewer: Ms Moxie09 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/29/2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was a good piece. Spock doesn't want her hurt because he identifies with her. Poor thing.

After the Fire by CMM Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 216]
Summary:

NOW DONE!

 

This is in response to Martiangirl's a Betrayal of Trust challenge. As noted elsewhere, at readers' request, I am no longer including the actual challenge in the summary.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: Amanda, Chapel, Chekov, Lori Ciani, McCoy, Original Character(s), Sarek, Scott, Sulu, Uhura
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Angst, Character Study, Established Relationship, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Challenges: A Betrayal of Trust
Series: Answered Challenges
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 56553 Read Count: 82187
[Report This] Published: 07/18/2012 Updated: 01/29/2013
Reviewer: Ms Moxie09 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/24/2017 Title: Chapter 19: A Loss of Trust

This is kind of striking.  Is Kirk taking no responsibility for the fact that this whole shitstorm started when HE was unfaithful to Spock. So what if Spock tried to make amend and changed his mind. Spock realized after Carol Marcus that he was changing because of Kirk's infidelities and didn't like what he was changing into. It made sense as hard as it was. And if he loved Spock SO much why then did he have 14 liaisons in three year. That was beyond excessive.

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Date: 10/22/2015 Title: Chapter 16: A Simple Feeling

I think this was a very interesting rewrite of the sickbay scene. It's probably the most interesting I've read so far. 

Truly by CMM Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 114]
Summary:

Now complete!

Truly, Madly T’hy’la by Eimeo

Summary:

Anyone ever seen the magnificent film "Truly, Madly, Deeply", starring Juliet Stevenson and Alan Rickman? I'd love to see an AU K/S fic based on that. Basically, Kirk's lover, Gary Mitchell, has recently - and unexpectedly - died and he's having a hard time getting past his grief. While Kirk hovers on the verge of despair, Gary comes back to haunt him benignly and, surreptitiously, to help him move on. Because Kirk has just met a mysterious man named Spock, who could be so much more to him if he can just let go of Gary's memory and face up to a future without him...


Categories: Fiction Characters: Gary Mitchell


Despite the mention of Delta Vega, this is TOS.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: McCoy, Original Character(s), Scott, Sulu, Uhura
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk-Spock Friendship, Kirk/Spock Pre-Slash, Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Angst, Character Study, First Time, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Challenges: "Truly, Madly, T'hy'la"
Series: Answered Challenges
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 27326 Read Count: 26576
[Report This] Published: 08/13/2012 Updated: 10/02/2012
Reviewer: Ms Moxie09 Signed
Date: 10/26/2014 Title: Chapter 9: Compensations

This is now one of my personal favorites! And I LOVE that movie!!!!

Summary:

Enterprise is called to give Ambassador Spock a ride to New Vulcan. He and Jim have dinner together and end up in a very passionate kiss and than Spock walks in. Want to know what happens read the story please. I hope you enjoy despite any errors made since I had no beta.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk-Spock Friendship, Kirk/Spock Pre-Slash, Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Established Relationship, First Time, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9004 Read Count: 3338
[Report This] Published: 11/02/2012 Updated: 11/02/2012
Reviewer: Ms Moxie09 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/18/2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love these Abrams fics where Spock Prime is the impetus for them getting together.

Yet Another Christmas Carol by PaintedBird Rated: Mature Content (Teen) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 9]
Summary:

Spock's life hangs in the balance as the crew of the Enterprise try to celebrate Christmas.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: McCoy
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk-Spock Friendship
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Angst
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5240 Read Count: 2856
[Report This] Published: 12/21/2012 Updated: 12/21/2012
Reviewer: Ms Moxie09 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/16/2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ah, and now that the holidays are upon us allow me to reiterate. This story is definitely one of my favorite Christmas stories over all. It's nice that in a world of hollow shallow half assed saccharine Christmas specials and stories there's something in existence that is compelling and gratifying. Kirk is worried about his sick companion and it's not clear if Spock is going to live or not. The story brings you pretty low and you worry whether or not Spock is going to recover fully if at all. The lower the story brings us and the more we worry the more gratifying it makes the resolution. Given the choice I'd rather read this than have to sit through any of those lousy half assed Hallmark specials. Cough...cough.. Christmas shoes... COUGH COUGH COUGH!

 

Reviewer: Ms Moxie09 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/20/2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

You really hit it out of the park this time. Love the way you depicted Jim not wanting to leave him and all the senior officers circling the wagon so to say. So far it's been one of the more inspiring Christmas fics I've read.



Author's Response:

I apologize for this very belated response. At some point, notice of comments started going to my email spam folder without my knowing it.  Thank you for your kind review.  Although I am not always a big Christmas fan, I can remember what it was like to be one.  

Between Friends by Pamdizzle Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 83]
Summary:

For Dahliaxhat, who posted a lovely K/S poster on one of those *secret* facebook groups that stated, "Spork Rule #33: When Kirk and Spock do it, McCoy gets pregnant" and then said that she wanted someone to write it...

This will be short, very slightly cracky, and of course, contain explicit pornonious fucking...in parts. Please read, please review, please blame Denise.


Categories: Works in Progress
Characters: McCoy
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Pre-Slash, Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Erotica, First Time, Humor
Trope (OPTIONAL): Bottom Kirk, Bottom Spock
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Series: Challenge Fics, Social Media Made Me Do It
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 14727 Read Count: 12146
[Report This] Published: 01/09/2013 Updated: 04/28/2013
Reviewer: Ms Moxie09 Signed
Date: 08/20/2014 Title: Chapter 6: Still Not Sure

Update this dang it!!!

Lost Boy by PaintedBird Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 68]
Summary:

After Spock is taken prisoner by the Romulans, he and Kirk struggle to recover what they have lost and maintain their future.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Established Relationship
Trope (OPTIONAL): Hurt Spock
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: Explicit violence
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 36085 Read Count: 13696
[Report This] Published: 01/23/2013 Updated: 02/13/2013
Reviewer: Ms Moxie09 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/17/2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

This one is awesome. Very original. Love this.



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I had fun writing it.

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Date: 11/20/2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Like wow! You did a really good job with Sarden. He comes off as a very emotionally labile Vulcan but it works to create the impression that he just might not be who he says he is.

Sorry if I'm inundating you with comments but this is one of my favorites!!!



Author's Response:

Comments are a writer's food so, no, you haven't made too many comments.  I'm glad you're enjoying Lost Boy!

Reviewer: Ms Moxie09 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/21/2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

This chapter made me wonder if you were familiar with Mission Impossible TV show episode My Enemy My Friend in the character played by Leonard Nimoy is kidnapped by enemy operatives and brainwashed to kill his friend and boss. Likewise its an awesome chapter!!



Author's Response:

I watched all of LN's MI shows when they were originally released.  This chapter was not a conscious imitation of that show, but who knows what goes on with the creative mind?  The entire story evolved from an vision I had of Spock, his hair grown long and clad in jeans and a hoodie, playing with a dog like a human would.  You just never know where it will take you.

Deathbed by Boonadducious Rated: All Audiences starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 17]
Summary:

Spock Prime discovers he is dying, and there is only one place he wants to be. 

REPOSTED DUE TO A MAJOR RE-EDIT. 


Categories: Fiction
Characters: McCoy, Sarek
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash, Kirk/Spock!Prime Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Angst, Character Study, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: Abrams Universe
Warnings: Major character death
Series: Deathbed
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7419 Read Count: 5297
[Report This] Published: 03/26/2013 Updated: 04/12/2014
Reviewer: Ms Moxie09 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/18/2016 Title: Chapter 1: Deathbed

I never even knew this existed until recently. This was lovely.

Hush, Hush, Hush by lah_mrh Rated: Mature Content (Teen) starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 12]
Summary:

Kirk struggles to cope with Spock's death.


Categories: Ficlets
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Angst
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: Caveat lector/Choose Not to Warn
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 439 Read Count: 2236
[Report This] Published: 04/15/2013 Updated: 04/15/2013
Reviewer: Ms Moxie09 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/14/2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I cried when I read this.

Summary:

Jim is haunted by the memories Spock Prime accidentally transferred to him on Delta Vega. They meet in order to rid Jim of his ghosts, but find something altogether more fascinating.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash, Kirk/Spock!Prime Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: None
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe, Abrams Universe
Warnings: Major character death
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2186 Read Count: 12442
[Report This] Published: 04/18/2013 Updated: 04/18/2013
Reviewer: Ms Moxie09 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/13/2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Love this

Best Laid Plans by lah_mrh Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 7]
Summary:

Kirk discovers sex in the shower is less romantic than it sounds.


Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Established Relationship, Humor, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 745 Read Count: 1976
[Report This] Published: 06/10/2013 Updated: 06/10/2013
Reviewer: Ms Moxie09 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/25/2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh god this was hysterical! Sex in the shower going So wrong!



Author's Response:

Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Dear James/ Perfect by Miss Car Rated: Mature Content (Teen) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 48]
Summary:

Sequel to Dear Spock: Happily ever after is not an endpoint but rather a state that needs constant maintenance. A post STID story that deals with all the unpleasant stuff between our protagonist saving the day and the start of the five-year mission but with humor. Even in a 'coma' Jim can cause complete chaos with his programming 'skills'. Pairings: Established and trying to keep it that way K/S, and it’s complicated U/M.

This can probably be read as a standalone with minimal confusion.

 


Categories: Fiction
Characters: Carol Marcus, Chris Pike, McCoy, Uhura
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Action/Plot, Angst, Character Study, Established Relationship, Fluff, Humor, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): Bottom Kirk, Bottom Spock, Hurt Kirk, Hurt Spock
Universe: Abrams Universe, AU Alternate Universe
Warnings: Caveat lector/Choose Not to Warn, Major character death
Series: The Dear Spock Universe
Chapters: 42 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 198025 Read Count: 22591
[Report This] Published: 06/29/2013 Updated: 07/16/2016
Reviewer: Ms Moxie09 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/16/2016 Title: Chapter 42: Epilogue: You are Perfect to Me

I've got to catch up on this. It's one of my favorites!

A Different Corner by DeeGilles Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 203]
Summary:

Call it an AU or maybe just a "What If?".  What if Spock gets promoted off the Enterprise in the midst of the first five-year mission?

(The Road Not Taken #1)


Categories: Fiction
Characters: Amanda, Carol Marcus, Chekov, Lori Ciani, McCoy, Original Character(s), Sarek, Scott, Uhura
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Action/Plot, Angst, Character Study, Erotica, Established Relationship, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): Bottom Spock, Hurt Kirk, Hurt Spock
Universe: ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Series: The Road Not Taken
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 89459 Read Count: 90464
[Report This] Published: 07/30/2013 Updated: 10/30/2013
Reviewer: Ms Moxie09 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/14/2015 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

When I came to this chapter and read that they were getting married my first reaction was, wait WHAT?!?! I'm with Bones here. Jim is really acting rash. Did he not forget that Spock left because he cheated on him? Sure he may want to commit to Spock now but dies he really have the ability to sublimate his own needs for someone else's? 

Reviewer: Ms Moxie09 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/18/2015 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Leave it to Lori to ruin everything!!



Author's Response:

Oh, that woman! :)

Reviewer: Ms Moxie09 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/18/2015 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Kirk is really being a dick heel here. I can't help but feel like he's using Spock as this off the shelf partner he can do what he wants with. Does he not remember that he rejected Spock and not the other way around? I couldn't help but wonder is Kirk deliberately screwing with him or is he so selfish he doesn't even consider what he's doing to Spock? I don't know if you got the memo Kirk but no means no!



Author's Response:

Like a lot of men, especially alpha men, he feels entitled to have his cake and eat it too! 

Reviewer: Ms Moxie09 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/18/2015 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

YAY TAS! Very under appreciated!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Ah, I see you found your way to my little story, Ms Moxie!  :)  Yeah, TAS was cheaply made, but the stories weren't half bad!  I actually read the "Star Trek Logs" based on TAS long before I saw TAS, so I don't see them as awful as most people do, I'm sure!