Reviewer: lisbei Signed
Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I just created an account to be able to review this chapter - I really love it!
I love stories in which the characters' voices are so distinct, and so perfectly in character, this was a pleasure to read. Very curious as to where this is going, besides Deneva, the planet of horror, brr. I know it's become fashionable to laugh about the buzzing amoebas, but I know that when I first watched this episode, at age 8, I was terrified. It was the one episode of Star Trek which scared me so much I couldn't sleep.
I know I'm going to love this story, and I'm off to read the rest of your writing!Author's Response:
How lovely of you to create an account to review this and thank you for such an encouraging and kind review. It really makes a huge difference to me.
Re Deneva - Star Trek is no laughing matter as far as I am concerned, with the one exception of Deneva, which I'm afraid I've always associated with flying fried eggs. I know, I know - I manage reverence for almost every other episode, and now you tell me I am being fashionable to laugh at the amoebas; such a shame. I was always scared of Dr Who as a child, but not Trek.
Also re Deneva - please heed the warning. I am going to mess up a whole load of TOS storylines in this one. I am hoping not to annoy too many people, and certainly no one who has been so kind.