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Harlequin Hearts by Pamdizzle Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 321]


This is a response to Juni's On First Sight Challenge:

Ok, so let’s mix ST with some good old harlequins!

Kirk is a Captain of the Enterprise, but he and Spock never met. Not at the Academy, not later – never. Of course Kirk heard about the super intelligent Vulcan First Officer, but didn’t pay attention to that. Then Pike is contacting him, asking him for help in rescuing his crew (Spock included) who were kidnapped by the Orion Slavers during an away mission.

Kirk of course agrees and leads a rescue team (like there would be any doubt about it). They storm the place and Jim is totally mesmerized by the sight of a beautiful, sexy Vulcan in a very skimpy harem outfit. The crew is rescued and the Enterprise is on the way to return them to Pike’s ship and during that time Kirk totally falls in love with Spock (who is totally NOT what Jim expected) and starts to plot how to keep him on the Enterprise and for himself.

Bonus points if Jim was so co confused by Spock appearance and behaviour because he only saw Spock’s very old photo from the Academy files (like Spock was 17, gawky teenager with glasses and looked like a classic nerd) and heard that the Vulcan has no sense of humour, personality, is boring, focused only on science etc.

Super bonus points if Kirk has to fight for Spock with someone from Pike’s ship who had hots for the Vulcan for a very long time

My first attempt at a TOS fic. Let's see how it goes....

Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk/Spock Pre-Slash, Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Action/Plot, First Time, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): Bottom Kirk, Bottom Spock
Universe: AU Alternate Universe, ST:TOS Original Universe
Warnings: None
Challenges: On first sight!
Series: Challenge Fics
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 62328 Read Count: 100671
[Report This] Published: 04/23/2012 Updated: 10/11/2012
Reviewer: Serpentsortia Signed
Date: 02/20/2014 Title: Chapter 1: Enterprise to the Rescue

I have just recently discovered your writing. After finishing this beauty, I had the urge to tell you how wonderfully well it was written. The Smut was amazingly hot but the story build itself was brilliant. Thank-you so much for sharing it.

Author's Response:

Oh, thank you so much. <3 I'm glad you enjoyed and I appreciate you taking time to let me know what you think. I hope you like my other works as well. :)

For the Love of a Child by CMM Rated: ADULT (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 398]

This is a reponse to Samantha-Kathy's challenge (and apparently Manganra has a similar one as well): Spock Prime Raises Kirk. Spock goes through the wormhole after Nero, but the Kelvin destroys Nero and his ship, being destroyed in the process. Baby Jim is orphaned, and a mysterious Vulcan named Selik adopts him. Vulcan isn't destroyed, and Selik raises Jim there, so Jim knows more about Vulcans than many humans do. He also has some mind powers--and he joins Starfleet and meets a certain Vulcan named Spock.


Categories: Works in Progress
Characters: Amanda, Original Character(s), Sarek
Crossover Fandom: None
Genres: Kirk-Spock Friendship, Kirk/Spock Pre-Slash, Kirk/Spock Slash
Other Languages: None
Specific movie: None
Story Type: Character Study, Established Relationship, First Time, Humor, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Trope (OPTIONAL): None
Universe: AU Alternate Universe, Abrams Universe
Warnings: None
Challenges: Spock Prime raises Kirk
Series: Answered Challenges
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 42491 Read Count: 247205
[Report This] Published: 09/12/2012 Updated: 07/22/2017
Reviewer: Serpentsortia Signed
Date: 04/09/2016 Title: Chapter 1: An Infinite Number of Possibilities

Hiya CMM,

First of all, thank-you for all your wonderful fics. I love every single one of them. You are a very talented Author and I am a huge fan of your work.

Sorry to bother you but I was just wondering if you were ever going to finish this fic. I absolutely love your Spock-Prime. Jim is so adorable that you even make me want to have kids ;) I regularly check back to see if you have written any more in this fic and I just thought you might want to know that there is someone out there pining for your work.


Thanks again for ALL your great fics.

Author's Response:

Thank you. Yes, I know I have several fics that need updating. This is one at the top if the pile. I HOPE to have an update in this before the end of June.