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Disclaimer: Paramount/Viacom owns the boys. I borrowed them only for some fun. No money-making, no offence of copyrights are intended. The story is mine and it is just fanfiction.

If you are under age, please stay away. If you have a problem with the idea that two boys love each other, then look elsewhere for your entertainment. English is not my native language, so please be patient with my mistakes.

I reed some of the Rude Person stories an ascem and I had my problems to understand all the dialects. This remembered me on a fact that I reed once. Teachers thought that the kids today have problems to speak in whole sentences because they read to much comics with all this "Boom" and "Bang".

This inspired me to a Rude Person comic version. I hope that nobody has done this before. And because I can't draw, you have to imagine the scenes. ;-)


1. Shuttlecraft. Jim and Spock in their seats. Eyes closed.

Jim: Grrrrr!

Spock: Pfffff!

2. Space. A meteor hits the shuttlecraft.

Boom! Bang!! Crash!!!

3. Planet. Shuttlecraft crashed. Jim and Spock outside. Dark cloudes in the sky.

Jim: Shit!

Spock: Nod.

4. Cave. Jim and Spock inside. Spock looks ill, Jim looks concerned.

Spock: Oops! Oooh!!

Jim: Hm??

5. Cave. Spock looks with desire on Jim.

Spock: Yum-Yum!! Hm?

Jim: Hm? Um! Oops!!

6. Cave. Jim looks sceptical. He remembers all his woman.

(We see pictures of all his "ex". This increases the size of the comic-book about some hundred pages and the profit, too, if I ever find someone to publish it.)

Jim: Hm! Yum!! Aaah!!! Yesss!!!! .......

7. Cave. Jim looks thougthtful.

Jim: Hm? Yes!

8. Cave. Spock looks with more desire on Jim. Jim looks determined.

Spock: Hm???

Jim: Nod.

9. Cave. Jim on his knees and hands. Spock fucks Jim from behind. Both look ecstatic.

Spock: Fuck! Fuck!! Fuck!!!

Jim: Aah! Oooh!! Yesss!!!

10. Cave: Both look still "hot".

Jim: Hm???

Spock: Nod.

11. Cave. Spock on his knees and hands. Jim fucks Spock from behind. Both look ecstatic.

Jim: Fuck! Fuck!! Fuck!!!

Spock: Aah! Oooh!! Yesss!!!

12. Cave. Both asleep on the ground.

Jim: Grrrrrrrrrrrrrrr!!!

Spock: Pfffffffffffffff!!!

13. Planet. Outside the cave. Spock, Jim and McCoy. Jim looks red in the face, Spock green. McCoy with a tricorder.

McCoy: Hm? Hm?? Aaah!!!



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