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Reviewer: WeirdLittleStories Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/25/2014 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 1

I've never believed this episode, because it seems to me totally impossible that Kirk could fall in love with anyone in only four hours.  For such a ridiculous episode, though, you've done a nice job with the aftermath.

One minor thing:  You've marked this as a TOS story, but you've given Kirk blue eyes.  TOS Kirk has hazel eyes (eyes that vary from green to gold to light brown); they're never blue.

 

Reviewer: Hypatia Kosh Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/04/2011 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 1

A little overwrought, but so is the episode. Love the confrontation in Kirk's quarters. Agree about where Spock's head is at during this episode.

Reviewer: nhrc Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2011 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 1

Especially for you, I watched the episode before reading. It added.
Spock's words to Jim touched me deeply, I love you described.
  "You are all there 'is."
Was the most the prettiest thing then ever said between them, and predict tearful Spock ... I could not ask more than the writer.
But at the end Achsaspok said "we are one" I remembered the beautiful song of Kelly Sweet
Of the same phrase, you should listen to

Reviewer: Kirkinadream Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/19/2010 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 1

Hey I just watched this episode about an hour ago....the ending in yours is SO much better!!!

Reviewer: SciFanGurl1990 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/19/2009 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 1

Oh my gawd!!!!! This is too good! GAH!!!!! *pulls hair out at sheer awesomeness of this story*

Reviewer: SciFanGurl1990 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/19/2009 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 1

Oh my gawd!!!!! This is too good! GAH!!!!! *pulls hair out at sheer awesomeness of this story*

Reviewer: dristi Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/01/2009 10:19 AM Title: Chapter 1

hi,

very interesting story!

keep up!

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