Date: 01/25/2014 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 1
I've never believed this episode, because it seems to me totally impossible that Kirk could fall in love with anyone in only four hours. For such a ridiculous episode, though, you've done a nice job with the aftermath.
One minor thing: You've marked this as a TOS story, but you've given Kirk blue eyes. TOS Kirk has hazel eyes (eyes that vary from green to gold to light brown); they're never blue.
Date: 04/07/2011 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 1
Especially for you, I watched the episode before reading. It added.
Spock's words to Jim touched me deeply, I love you described.
"You are all there 'is."
Was the most the prettiest thing then ever said between them, and predict tearful Spock ... I could not ask more than the writer.
But at the end Achsaspok said "we are one" I remembered the beautiful song of Kelly Sweet
Of the same phrase, you should listen to