Date: 09/07/2009 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 2
i am enjoying your story but do you really mean for spock to shave a thin swatch of jim's throat off or is the typo to lave (bath) his throat not lathe the spot.
So he obliged Jim by beginning to lathe the skin over his carotid artery. The pulse there was mesmerizing.
Date: 07/13/2009 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 3
XD cant wait to see what bones says about that sight, great chapter
Thank you for your comments. I can't wait either to hear what Bones whispers in my ear. I'm sure he'll be giving me an earful. This was my first time writing such a detailed love scene so I really appreciate the positive feedback. I will probably start that story next weekend.
Date: 07/04/2009 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 2
Ah! I'm so glad that you continued this. I realized you said you would after my last review was submitted. This is so sweet and sensual and ... oh, I love your characterizations of Spock and Jim. Both of them needy and giving. Brilliant. Can't wait for more!
Thank you so much for your comments. I began writing Chapter 3 today. This will be my first fully realized scene of them making love and hopefully I will get it right. Writing can be both a torture and a blessing. Its good to know that I have your support.