Date: 01/31/2014 5:23 PM Title: none
this one was even better than it's prequel for the sole fact that !M'zh!w*hee finally got what was coming to her, and I looooved that Spock was the one to give it to her. Pardon the language, but that bitch had it coming. And I really like Sek'hel. He's really grown on me and I'm glad he wasn't thrust into the same fate as Spock and Kirk were. Alright! On to the next one!
Sek'hel just up and walked into the story one day and said he was needed. and yeah, !Mzh!w*hee deserved everything she got and a whole lot more. *doffs his hat* thankee, sai!!
Date: 01/01/2011 9:54 AM Title: none
What a great way to start the new year--regaining freedom!--thanks for the masterful description of offing !M'zh!w*hee--above all the method--you can feel strength gathering, the concentration and force behind it--may all our Evils go that way....
From your mouth to the ears of Lady Ifni, lass! All our Evils, and them as would take our freedom from us.
!M'zh!w*hee's death popped into my head as a bit of video; all I had to do was get it down on paper right. Very happy it worked for ye!
(puts his paws in his sleeves and bows)
Date: 02/21/2010 1:45 AM Title: none
Really, really nice. I enjoyed the plot, the characterizations and the writing.
I am honoured. (bows) All three stories are up on the archive now; #4 is still a-brewing. One comes to serve; 'tis well to please ;-)>
Date: 08/25/2009 7:22 AM Title: none
I first read this in zine format, and am so pleased to see this excellent series on the archive. But when are you going to post the third part? Soon I hope!
Soon, aye. I got overdosed on real life this last month, but I'll start work on posting it tonight. Delighted you like it so much! (big ol' grin)
Date: 06/28/2009 9:27 PM Title: none
Hey Greywolf, I'm impressed with your writing. This is another lovely story of yours (I've read a number of them) with a great plotline and good character development (which I find ESSENTIAL!). Your versions of Kirk and Spock in this story are flawed heroes, which makes them more interesting than some of the more idealized versions I've encountered. Like your style, your command of language (I'm an English comp instructor, so that's important to me :-) ), your skilled storytelling.
Look forward to the next installment of this particular series of yours :-)
Thankee sai! (bows) From a teacher this is high praise, I am honoured. This story just got into my soul, and it's not all told yet. Probably start putting the third up this coming week, and somewhere in the back of my head there's at least one more brewing. Very pleased ye liked it ;-)>