You must login (register) to review.
Reviewer: AshayaTReldai Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/14/2015 11:04 PM Title: none

Beautiful. Thanks for these poems, Greywolf.

Author's Response:

glad ye like 'em!  the one is honoured... *bows*

Reviewer: angelocustode Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/10/2014 4:48 AM Title: none

The third one is dark? No, it is light instead, the light that comes from a love so huge that it will endure even past dementia and death, a dedication so deep that it is better to share death and live together than live alone and starve.

Author's Response:

exactly so.  it is what I would want my own mate to do, if I should end up like that, rather than to live on, unknowing.  I am honoured.

Reviewer: ivycross Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/28/2012 2:55 AM Title: none

Your poems are beautiful.  I loved them all,  though the last one broke my heart, but truth be told it is my favorite of the three.

Author's Response:

I feel the same way about that one so dinna feel bad...  s'dia shaya, sai  *bows*

Reviewer: oyboh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/03/2010 7:09 PM Title: none

gnarly heart is breaking

Author's Response:

Aiyah, sorry!!  Sumimasen!!

Still an' all, it's what I'd want my own Bondmate to do, if I were in Jim's position.  Here, haz some virtual chocolate... better? (smiles)  Thanks for da review!

Reviewer: drarroway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/13/2009 11:07 PM Title: none

"...carefully *not* smiling..." I can almost smell the leaves and feel the crisp Fall air...and see that brilliant 'not smile'. Superb.

Author's Response:

I am honoured.  Many thanks!

Reviewer: SlenderSail Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/08/2009 6:34 AM Title: none

Why do you warn us about the third poem? It's so beautiful... *sniff* Lol, "Paraborg is God." - hmm, submission to calm a highly irrational and capricious entity? :D

Author's Response: Just cos some folks really don't like CD stories or poems. Damifino why, but...

You must login (register) to review.