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Reviewer: PaintedBird Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/11/2020 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 1

I congratulate you on posting your old story.  I did likewise a couple of years ago to show people that it was possible to improve their writing ability with lots of practice.  However, your story is much more coherent than mine was (I hadn't seen the gaping holes in the plot line when I wrote it), and you might get comments other than mine.  As for me, after about 1800 reads and 0 comments, I couldn't take it anymore and vanquished the story to the other world forever.  Good effort

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