Date: 07/22/2020 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 1
I feel like this has aged pretty well and it's far from an amateur-hour attempt at writing. Thanks for sharing it. For someone like me who came of age in a post-zine world, this is the only way I'll ever have to read some of this work. Prices and scarcity of hard copies makes posts like this a big win.
Date: 07/19/2020 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 1
Bravo! I commend you for doing this. A couple of years ago I posted an early story of mine from the early 80s as proof that writing could improve with practice. I thought it would encourage new writers who were just getting started. Instead, I was met with complete silence. I had hundreds of reads but not a single comment.
I am confident enough in my writing to believe that it is vastly superior than it was almot 40 years ago, but the silence overwhelmed me. A few months ago, I deleted the story and ended the teaching phase of my writing
To keep you from doing the same thing, I thought I'd make this remark. Thank you for encouraging the new writers who might read this, and thanks for reminding me that I have progressed in my writing, too.