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Reviewer: oboe_dawn Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/22/2020 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 1

I feel like this has aged pretty well and it's far from an amateur-hour attempt at writing. Thanks for sharing it. For someone like me who came of age in a post-zine world, this is the only way I'll ever have to read some of this work. Prices and scarcity of hard copies makes posts like this a big win.

Reviewer: Pookie Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/22/2020 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 1

Beautiful! I love this friendship!

Reviewer: urmeli2007 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2020 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 1

I Love it. More than i can say.
You are wonderfull!

Reviewer: PaintedBird Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2020 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 1

Bravo!  I commend you for doing this.  A couple of years ago I posted an early story of mine from the early 80s as proof that writing could improve with practice.  I thought it would encourage new writers who were just getting started.  Instead, I was met with complete silence.  I had hundreds of reads but not a single comment.

I am confident enough in my writing to believe that it is vastly superior than it was almot 40 years ago, but the silence overwhelmed me.  A few months ago, I deleted the story and ended the teaching phase of my writing

To keep you from doing the same thing, I thought I'd make this remark.  Thank you for encouraging the new writers who might read this, and thanks for reminding me that I have progressed in my writing, too.

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