Date: 06/04/2020 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 1
My, what a disturbing story! I know that Spock believes it to be a dream, but even in dreams, I have trouble imaging so ethical a man as Spock seducing an obviously vulnerable adolescent.
Of course, it's clear that you intended the story to be disturbing, and you did do that well; I just wish you hadn't taken Spock so far out of character as to make him unethical.
Yes, my bad. But I make him suffer for his sins in the next story! I agree with you that it was not in Spock's character at all--but I wanted to bend it a little for dramatic purpose. If you think this is tough, I don't recommend the Joseph Brother series I wrote! But I sincerely thank you for reading this and appreciate the feedback--which was entirely correct. Also, I'm sorry it take me so long to respond, but I wasn't aware of this site--a friend of my convinced me to put my old stories up, but she's the one who's doing that so I wasn't paying attention until recently. Thanks again!