Date: 05/27/2020 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 1
I hate to say it, but this felt like half a great story that had a too rushed ending. The writing in that first part, getting the reader involved in an old stand-by (pollen/spores/pixie dust) was very well done, as were Kirk's thoughts at the beginning. i liked what I read and wanted more.
It's not over, there's going to be another chapter! :) Next part will be the fall out pining and accidental bond. Thank you! <3