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Reviewer: HeyaShasta Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/27/2020 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 1

I hate to say it, but this felt like half a great story that had a too rushed ending. The writing in that first part, getting the reader involved in an old stand-by (pollen/spores/pixie dust) was very well done, as were Kirk's thoughts at the beginning. i liked what I read and wanted more.



Author's Response:

It's not over, there's going to be another chapter! :) Next part will be the fall out pining and accidental bond. Thank you! <3

Reviewer: Sera Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2020 7:18 AM Title: Chapter 1

Nice, I`would like to read more. ;-)

LLAP
Sera

Author's Response:

Ahh thank you!! ♥ The journey has just begun for them, hope you continue to enjoy. :)

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