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Reviewer: Forthewin Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/27/2020 2:04 AM Title: Torn

Wow, this was powerful. And now I'm spinning all the future what ifs in my head. Spock succeeds with kolinahr. spock fails. Kirk moves on. Kirk tries to move on. Kirk dies spock dies. Spock gets his head out of his ass and an unlikely HEA happens. I just can't stop thinking of the aftermath to your story. Thanks for sharing such a powerful and moving piece.


Reviewer: PaintedBird Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/24/2019 5:11 PM Title: Torn

This is a rather bleak holiday offering, but I think it mirrors the feelings that many people have when they are separated from their loved ones by distance or death, especially at the holidays.  Moreover, your story has the benefit of being unusual in that it appears that their bond simply failed due to time and distance.  This is not consistent with my own beliefs about their relationship, but it has its own validity.  I look forward to seeing more offerings in the future.

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