Date: 04/19/2019 1:12 PM Title: First contact
I LOVED this story! This was excellent TOS Spirk in a new and different setting. Jim and Spock were both totally in character and cleverly done given they were both very young in this story. Jim especially seemed the perfect balance of brash but vulnerable imaturity (at age 19) and the brilliance he will attain in adulthood. They were both entirely beleivable and endearing. My only complaint: I wish it would have gone on so we could see how they dealt with the separation that would be inevitable when Spock shipped out on the Enterprise with Capt Pike. Maybe there could be a sequel?
Anyway, I hope you keep writing Spirk, you are so very good at it!
Thank you so much for the kind words. I am glad to know you enjoyed my story. I apologize the ending wasn’t to your liking.
I use AO3 primarily and not all my work is here. Take care. LLAP.
Date: 03/18/2019 7:10 PM Title: First contact
Thank you for this story, it's well written and I read it all at once. The TOS "canon" is very well woven into these new backgrounds, and the characters. I was just a bit sad about the sudden ending, I had hoped for moreðŸ˜‰ðŸ––, but I know it is A LOT of work. Thanks again!
Thank you for commenting. I appreciate it. Yes I had real life crisis during writing the last part and couldnt finish it better. LLAP.
Date: 03/13/2019 12:54 PM Title: The experiment
Thank you for you hard work on this fic. Even posting so many chapters in sequence is loads of work. Sorry that lots have t reviewed yet
That's very kind of you. I appreciate it. Thank you and take care.
Date: 03/11/2019 6:37 PM Title: Drowning
Thank you for sharing this fic. I think your Ruth backstory is much better than other ones I have read I like the idea of a selfless Ruth. I’ve never thought of Ruth as the little blond lab tech. Looking forward to the other chapters being posted
Thank you for your kind words. I am glad you like my version of Ruth and the little blonde lab tech:) I am uploading the rest now.