Date: 11/20/2018 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 1
What so few reviews. I’m looking at this and wondering whether out little fanfic writer is as innocent as she seems. And your mistress of evil is unbelievably irretrievably bad. Drugged Vulcans not a good omen. I am intrigued by the directions the plot is taking and what the plans are.
My villain is a bad, bad girl.
I'm a medicolegal death investigator, so I've seen firsthand just how depraved people can be to one another. I can't help but let some of that come through in my writing. The scariest thing about Laura is that she could be that pretty lady who lived down the street, had an average job, and an average life, until her true nature was revealed.
Thanks for sticking with me on this story.
Date: 11/15/2018 2:40 PM Title: Chapter 20
Totally loving this story, it is great! I love the way you have created the other characters and how they seamlessly fit into the storyline. The tension between Jim and Spock is also really well written.
Thank you. I'm glad you're enjoying this.
Date: 11/15/2018 12:35 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is such a good story. I usually wait until a story is complete before reading, but this is so interesting I read the updates as soon as they are posted. Love love love the background story for Spock. Great storytelling and even greater story premise.
Thanks for the compliments.
Date: 10/17/2018 7:29 AM Title: Chapter 1
Needs more reviews.
I sm planning to re read with pen and paper to keep my eye on the family relationship and new characters. I like the premise of Spock having a life before the enterprise. We often paint him as a loner but as the cannon between leaving Vulcan and joining the Enterprise is limited why should there not be family and friendship groups. Also why would he not be drawn to connections with social outcasts.
I am wondering about Spock‘s telepathy. It was always more pronounced than vulcan norms. If you think about Gol Spock chose not to go forward, he didn’t fail the Gol disciplines. There are many pure Vulcans who could not achieve what he did. Maybe there are secrets here and Spock is more ‘Ninja’ than we think.
i am looking forward to more intrigue more confused Jim on completely the wrong track and potential side serving of matchmaking.
Thanks for sticking with me, especially since this story is rather different than what I've seen in K/S, or even in the profic. I've always wanted to examine some of these gaps in Spock's (and Vulcan's) narrative. I appreciate the comments.