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Reviewer: trekkie1701 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/20/2019 9:07 AM Title: Chapter 1

This was a great read, I do however wish that some key events were more expanded. I did like the meld sequence between Spock and Jim. This feels like a great start to something bigger. Perhaps a revision with greater detail? If you don't want to purse it and am fine with the way it is, that is definitely up to you and I will respect it. Wonderful story and fodder for other writers for sure. Thank you for posting this LLAP

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