Date: 03/08/2018 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 6
I was trying to give someone first dibs on making a remark on this wonderful, complex story, but since there have been no takers I will go first. I am familiar with some of the theory behind this story, but I think that you have a unique spin on it. While the story is somewhat grueling about what Spock and Kirk go through on the planet, it is also quite lovely in places where their real love is found. I sat and read it all in a couple of sittings b/c I was really enthralled with the descriptions of the ceremony. Thank you. Well done!
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