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Reviewer: angelocustode Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/16/2017 9:22 AM Title: Chapter 1

I do not think the present tense third person narration distracts from the story as one of the other reviwers said. I feel that it pulls me into the scene as if I was looking over Spock's shoulders at what he is creating. I think it is a well executed little sketch of pain and friendship and of how the second may be able to sooth the first.

Author's Response:

Thank you, I'm glad you think so! Spock's grief over the loss of Vulcan is kind of skated over in canon, so I wanted to explore that.

Reviewer: WriterPam4 Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/13/2017 11:26 AM Title: Chapter 1

This is all written in a present tense, third person that she is unsettling to read. Why is this unusual grammar form chosen? It is distracting from the story. 

Reviewer: Pookie Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/13/2017 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 1

So sweet! I love it!

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: DivaPammy Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/12/2017 2:40 PM Title: Chapter 1

Oh! This was so sweet and so sad. Lovely!

Author's Response:

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it!

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