Date: 08/07/2018 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 1
This was sweet and a fun twist on character roles and though quick cause it was one of those writing challenges/exchanges it had the right stuff, tension emotion, fluff, action, etc. I've read this wonderful comic The Universal Constant on tumblr by jelff where they had a role reversal before reading this and your fic felt like a wonderful companion piece. I'd love to read more of your adventures of Captain Spock and Science Officer Kirk in the future, hopefully more fleshed out ( like novel length :D ) but I'll take anything. Love your work, thank you for posting!
Thank you, I'm glad you think so! I don't currently plan to write more in this universe, but I'll think about it. :)
Date: 09/23/2017 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 1
A bit rapide from le holding of the hand acknowledgement of the emotion to the bland proposal of marriage? The progression it felt hurried and devoid of emotion. All was lovely to the confession of emotion about hand holding and then poof! She is over with a culmination I feel nothing about.