Date: 12/26/2020 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 31
Incredible work on this chapter! I love how vivid your writing is.
I am so grateful for your support. I hope you will stay with the story on AO3. I also have a tumblr by the name carminavulcana. we can stay in touch if you'd like.
Date: 12/24/2020 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 31
Spock's suffering is almost too much to read. But, I am so glad that he has friends that are determined to help him. I have so much respect for Commodore Paris. She suspects a set up and is trying to do everything in her power to make sure that the powers that be won't get away with it.
Date: 08/15/2019 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 1
In reading the last few chapters I was reminded of the funding issues for social security in UK. A US company has taken on many NHS duties. One is reviewing payments. I have met ex staff who describe the trauma of the way they had to deal with clients. Over 65% of rejected clients are successful on appeal. But whilst waiting their health and anxiety deteriorates. There have been fatalities. One so affected described it as closet eugenics.
When I re read this fic I was reminded of one of the things I have enjoyed (is that the right word) in K/S is the what fandom can wake us up to issues and challenge the ways we think about them. It challenges preconceptions it introduces us to new worlds. I have enjoyed your writing because this a strong thread running through your approach.
How was your India trip?
The India trip has been a long homecoming. I wasn't able to return as you can read in my author notes before the updates. This archive is moving to AO3. I hope we can stay in touch on there. I also have a tumblr, carminavulcana if you wanna chit chat more. I'd personally love that
Date: 12/18/2018 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 28
I can sympathize with Jim’s anger about the abuse Spock suffered while in the Enterprise’s sick bay, but perhaps he’s feeling some guilt as well. He loves Spock and he missed the signs too. I hope that Talok can help Spock—no one seems to have any hope that he can recover.
Date: 12/18/2018 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 28
There are glimmers here that memories are not destroyed just disconnected. This keeps us going. Hope your trip is restful and remember the best fics are worth the wait for updates and this is one such fic. I am reminder that scent can often work as a direct trigger of memories
Date: 09/30/2018 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 25
Glad to see your back at this story. I confess I did not start it because I was not sure I could take Spock being hurt so much, but I got started on reading it and have been pulled right in. I really like that you have Sarek being caring and responsible parent. So many people seem to suggest he is an awful parent and I don't see it that may. Not perfect either but I do think he would take his responsibilities seriously. I have never been in the position Spock is in, however, do like how you try and share how is must be feeling. Shame when he really shouldn't. Fear of some uncaring workers. It is an interesting perspective.
Looking forward to more.
Date: 09/21/2018 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 25
I’m so glad that rotten excuse for a nurse is in the brig. If Jim hasn’t seen those tapes, Bones is going to have restrain him so that he doesn’t beat that piece of crap to death. I hate that Sarek is giving up his position. Sometimes sacrifices are made for the people we love.