Date: 04/03/2017 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 1
But I certainly hope to read others of your stories here, even if not from Spock's point of view. I liked this one very much and you did a great job at Spock's mind voice. There is tenderness and sadness and the difficulty of holding on to a life which is suddenly dull without the loved one. Truely beautiful!
You might want to check out the difference between plural s and genitive s (as in "Vulcan's do not dream")
Thank you! I'm glad you think I did a good job portraying Spock; he's so bloody difficult to write.
Damn it; this is why betas are generally a good idea. I always miss something, even if I have proof-read it like a million times.