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Reviewer: angelocustode Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/03/2017 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 1

But I certainly hope to read others of your stories here, even if not from Spock's point of view. I liked this one very much and you did a great job at Spock's mind voice. There is tenderness and sadness and the difficulty of holding on to a life which is suddenly dull without the loved one. Truely beautiful!

You might want to check out the difference between plural s and genitive s (as in "Vulcan's do not dream")

Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm glad you think I did a good job portraying Spock; he's so bloody difficult to write.

Damn it; this is why betas are generally a good idea. I always miss something, even if I have proof-read it like a million times.

Reviewer: urmeli2007 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/01/2017 2:43 PM Title: Chapter 1

Your story is so beautiful to cry and I have cried. Thanks

Author's Response:

No, thank you for reading it! :)

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