Date: 09/29/2017 6:37 AM Title: Chapter 1
May I politely ask, why is there no rape warning on this story? This, she is a clear case of dubious consent at the very least and the story she is not even marked the story Caveat Emptor/Reader Beware.
Spock, he has been drugged out of his mind to the point where he does not even recognise Kirk, McCoy has informed him that the Spock he has internal injuries from the multiple rapes in the brothel, and yet you have the Jim, whilst the Spock is still drugged, take advantage of him in his drugged state, ignore his internal injuries, and slake the fires of his own desires upon Spock's compliant body whilst he is still too drugged to resist?
(Le Jim, he would never do that. Tres mal! I was shocked at every level when he did do this to the Spock. I could not help but think, this she must be a dream sequence, no? But no, this she was not the case. I checked then to see if this she was an AU, but no, she was not! This she was supposed to be the normal universe.)
Pardon moi, but this she is the second story of yours I have read where you do not notify the reader of a rape by Jim of the Spock.
I politely ask, why do you not post a warning when you are writing this kink so that readers who are triggered by this perversion can avoid it?
I apologise for this question coming from one as lowly as a reader and not from one who has provided so many wonderful fictions for others to read. It is a sincere question.
Date: 03/27/2017 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 1
I deleted the previous response which managed to get into the wrong place somehow. I agree that there was something about the original Kirk and Spock that was just special, and they will always be my preferred pairing, even with Leonard gone now. As soon as I can get things together, I will publish more of my early work.
Date: 03/26/2017 8:44 AM Title: Chapter 1
I would like to thank you for the story and that you can give us German fans the opportunity to read the old stories. The fans in Germany have mostly only been able to read the stories since the Internet and the existing archives. I, for example, and some of your followers are also dependent on a translator, because our English is not always sufficient. So your work is a great gift for us. I and we thank you. Greetings and good wishes from Cologne
Thank you so much! I submitted stories to various paper zines over the course of 10-12 years (from about 1980-92 of so) before my career and some health issues interfered. Unfortunately, in the course of moving several times, i have lost track of how many were actually published and in which zines they were published so it will take me a while to find and type up them all (they were written in the days when fan writers used typewritersand will have to be changed from paper). Please be patient! I am in the midst of preparing for remodeling my home, and there is a lot of chaos in my living space right now which is part of the problem. But I know that eventually I will find them all Thanks for your encouragement. I appreciate your commitment to read my English or translate my work into German and will do my best to get them to you when I can.
Date: 03/26/2017 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 1
I like this story a lot, Jim's torment, his passion, his weakness and his caring, I think they make him so much in character.
I'm eagerly waiting for more of your old stories.
Thank you for your comments. One thing about Jim Kirk is that he is a flawed hero which I believe makes him a more interesting person. Looks like you agree. I'll get the old ones posted as possible.
Date: 03/23/2017 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great characterization! A sad but lovely interlude. This takes me back to a fondly remembered time when there was only one Kirk and Spock, the best and only! Thanks for republishing this. I look forward to seeing more of your early work soon!