




Date: 11/21/2016 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 1
I always love a stream-of-consciousness snippet. You have Kirk's voice down pat.
Author's Response:
Thank you. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment. Jim can't help beating himself up. He loves Spock, sending him on dangerous missions that could get him killed makes him so very anxious and guilty. He'd take his place in a heartbeat.
Date: 11/21/2016 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 1
Lovely piece! Unfortunately, when you are in charge, there are always consequences of decisions. Good to see you working again.
Author's Response:
Thanks my friend. It felt great to write again. Even if it was a short piece.
Date: 11/21/2016 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oh lovely, short and bitter sweet and perfectly fitted to the art. Sent a tingle down my spine.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. The artist did an incredible job. So much emotion between them I just had to write something to convey it.





Date: 11/21/2016 8:06 AM Title: Chapter 1
Just lovely, the perfect accompaniment to a gorgeous piece of art.
Author's Response:
So very kind of you to say so. I appreciate it.
Date: 11/21/2016 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 1
Perfectly captures the kind of angst the captain must experience each and every time he commands his first officer/science officer into a dangerous or potentially dangerous situation, an away mission. It is the burden of command and a matter of trust...and love. The artwork is gorgeous! I love both of these together, the ficlet as well as the optics.
Author's Response:
Merci ma chere. She did an incredible job and I'm glad you liked what we accomplished together.