Date: 06/17/2014 12:23 PM Title: Chapter Four
Gah. Just, daggone. Wow. This proves why you are one of the masters. This story swept me away and carried me through a cold, painful world to a beautiful, loving ending. You developed the characters so thoroughly, so carefully. I felt sorry for T'Brita, but not for Jim's ex, whoever she was, good riddance. But this was so good. Thank you so much for seeing fit to share it with us on this forum. I'm so glad I got to read it.
Date: 11/22/2013 2:39 AM Title: Chapter Four
Pacing the cage, indeed! The reader is held captive, together with Spock's love, in the depths of a frustrating world of gray "not happiness", of longings unfullfilled, of life lived far from completeness. And the reader paces the cage, rattling the bars, yearning for escape towards the light. When finally the last chapter opens the doors, and love soars into a flight of freedom, the reader rejoyces and flies and lifts high and treasures every moment, every caress and confidence, every smallest sound and gesture. Masterly done!
Date: 11/18/2013 4:58 AM Title: Chapter Four
It's almost two in the morning, and I get up for work in a few hours, but it couldn't stop reading. This was lovely. I adored T'Brita, how adventurous she was, and hope she does find happiness herself. The hospital scene about did me in. Jim's anguish was already apparent, but his desperation made me cry. i giggled when Spock got creative with healing trances. Going on my favorites list.
Date: 02/22/2013 4:08 PM Title: Chapter Four
That was every bit as fantastic this time, as when you let me read it eleven years ago. I am completely overwhelmed by it again - the whole slow opening of Spock is just fantastic. Thank you for writing this and for sharing it.
Date: 11/22/2011 9:00 PM Title: Chapter Four
It was certainly a very interesting story. I loved it, especially Spock constant fight with his feelings.
I loved it and loved in the end, at last, they accepted their feelings.
Thanks for writing this beautiful story, thank you very much for create this^ ^
Date: 09/13/2010 11:23 PM Title: Chapter Four
Wow. I love TMP-era fics, and this is a truly excellent example. I was mad that Jim and Spock were blind to how each other felt, pushing each other away when all they really wanted to do was hold on. I was glad when Jim called him back, and worried when Spock was injured. I'm glad you got rid of both the women - T'Brita was an interesting and likeable character, but nothing can stand between our boys! I also commend you on your as-yet-unsurpassed talent for creating original, well-developed characters to supplement the story. Like all of your work, this was satisfying down to the soul. I didn't want it to end! Thank you for sharing. : )