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Reviewer: TRP-Goober Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/22/2019 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 1

Interesting follow up......jumping around in time.  like the ending...I could picture the scenes you wrote.  Took Death  and rebirth to bring them together.

 

 

Reviewer: Ms Moxie09 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/21/2017 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 1

I loved this! I can't believe it took me this long to find it!

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Date: 07/20/2016 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 1

I think I like this. I should keep readin!

Reviewer: Dahliaxat Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/20/2016 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 1

I liked how you showed that missed opportunity, in the end a happy ending. Thanks for sharing.



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Reviewer: SORAL179 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2016 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 1

I had not considered that both Kirk and Spock had made the same error but responded in different ways.

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