Date: 01/27/2017 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 2
Excellent work on this chapter. I'm glad that Jim showed up for their date (though I know he would never miss it) and I'm eager to see their relationship being explored further. Especially now that Jim mentioned his son.
Date: 06/06/2016 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 1
Personally I love Spock POV, and you've done it really well. I thoroughly enjoy your way of writing, I got just a little bit embarrassed for Spock but not too much. I actually giggled out loud, reading this. I think that's a first :D
Looking forward to seeing how this continues.
I'm so happy to hear you say that. I have always struggled a bit with getting a sense of spocks speech patteruns and mannerisms. I'm glad I made you giggle and I hope to one day make you laugh. Thank you for reading!
Date: 06/05/2016 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 1
I really love this beginning. T'Pring--what a jerk.
Thank you! I was just sitting outside in the sun and this little snippet of a story sprung into my head. Thought i'd share. I am also still writing Family Matters and that should be up soon.