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Reviewer: laustic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/27/2017 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 2

Excellent work on this chapter.  I'm glad that Jim showed up for their date (though I know he would never miss it) and I'm eager to see their relationship being explored further.  Especially now that Jim mentioned his son.

Reviewer: Nyyrikki Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/06/2016 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 1

Personally I love Spock POV, and you've done it really well. I thoroughly enjoy your way of writing, I got just a little bit embarrassed for Spock but not too much. I actually giggled out loud, reading this. I think that's a first :D

Looking forward to seeing how this continues.



Author's Response:

I'm so happy to hear you say that. I have always struggled a bit with getting a sense of spocks speech patteruns and mannerisms. I'm glad I made you giggle and I hope to one day make you laugh.  Thank you for reading! 

Reviewer: laustic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/05/2016 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 1

Awww, I really like this premise of this story.  I'm looking forward to seeing more of this.



Author's Response:

Thank you. I hope to update soon!

Reviewer: Sita Z Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/05/2016 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 1

Oh, I like this! Spock is very good with his daughter. Looking forward to more!



Author's Response:

Thank you very much! I always picture Spock as a devoted dad.

Reviewer: macywinstar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/05/2016 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 1

I really love this beginning.  T'Pring--what a jerk.



Author's Response:

Thank you! I was just sitting outside in the sun and this little snippet of a story sprung into my head. Thought i'd share. I am also still writing Family Matters and that should be up soon.

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