Date: 05/24/2016 10:16 AM Title: Chapter 1
I liked this story and I applaud you for hanging in there and finishing it. I think you're a good writer, but if it is something that seems to be a chore and a grind for you, I understand if you don't want to continue.
Thank you so much for your kind words. Usually, the beginning flows easily enough but often I still have no idea where I'm going several thousand words in and that's when it gets complicated :-) Right now I can't imagine I'll ever want to put myself through that again, but who knows!
Date: 05/22/2016 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 1
A win for everyone. Spock seems as if he will lose everything for live and then gains everything. Proves good story arcs are worth plodding along with regardless of the time it takes
Thank you so much, I really appreciate your comment!