Date: 05/07/2016 11:32 AM Title: Chapter 1
I like stories like this one, that tell about timid first steps of friendship and trust between the two of them, with small signs of ease as not having to hide feeling weak and unwell. Thanks for sharing.
Thank you, I'm glad you liked it! Their relationship is so different from in TOS, and it's interesting to explore that.
Date: 05/06/2016 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 1
I like the crisp, almost formal, feel of the present tense combined with how you do Kirk's thoughts. It works well for this, which could easily get too sweet. It keeps Kirk firmly pragmatic, which he is. He deals with each thing as it comes.
Thank you, I'm glad you think so. I think Spock would react better to a more pragmatic approach.