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Reviewer: fallen_stars Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/09/2017 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 1

This was so sweet. <3 Nice work!



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Glad you liked it!

Reviewer: macywinstar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/08/2016 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 1

Sweet story!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/08/2016 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 1

Poor Spock.  Food poisoning is never pleasant.  



Author's Response:

Yes, poor Spock. :( But at least he has Jim to help him out.

Reviewer: angelocustode Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2016 11:32 AM Title: Chapter 1

I like stories like this one, that tell about timid first steps of friendship and trust between the two of them, with small signs of ease as not having to hide feeling weak and unwell. Thanks for sharing.

 



Author's Response:

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it! Their relationship is so different from in TOS, and it's interesting to explore that.

Reviewer: laustic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2016 6:21 AM Title: Chapter 1

Awww, this was so sweet and enduring.  :)



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Thanks, I'm glad you think so!

Reviewer: KaraStorm Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/06/2016 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 1

I like the crisp, almost formal, feel of the present tense combined with how you do Kirk's thoughts. It works well for this, which could easily get too sweet. It keeps Kirk firmly pragmatic, which he is. He deals with each thing as it comes.



Author's Response:

Thank you, I'm glad you think so. I think Spock would react better to a more pragmatic approach.

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